Name: Wilhelm Ivo

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Place of Birth: Demaitre, Canada

Species: Mortal

Appearance: Wilhelm has dirty and blonde neck length hair. He wears a pair of ratty sneakers that he stole and knee length shorts that have lots of grease stains and holes on them. He has green eyes and okay teeth through stealing some tooth paste and a brush from a convenience store. He always is wearing the same black t-shirt with a large skull that has liberty spikes for hair (Which he also stole, and his Military School Uniform Jacket that he received in the mail before his parents sent him off towards the place.) He carries around a thrashed skate board that is thoroughly torn up from falls and crashes. He has a bad scar on his leg from where he baled and the road rash scarred as well. He looks like a normal punk kid except he smells a lot worse. He is now 5’5 and weighs just a little over 110 lbs.

History: Wilhelm was born and has been raised in Demaitre for his entire life. When he was born he was a wild child, always exploring the house and finding new ways to cause chaos. But at his young age he also found out how to push his parent’s limits. He fought with them always even before he could speak. Kicking and screaming the whole way, his parents raised him up like he was just a normal little kid but they knew that he was out of control. Eventually he pushed them too far and they shipped him off to a private military school where he would learn some respect and discipline. He was not to fond of that choice and tried to bail out of the car while they drove down the highway. He luckily was not killed by traffic but suffered from some bad road rash and a bad cut down his shin. He walked all the way back to Demaitre where he began growing up on his own on the cold city streets. On multiple occasions he was beaten up by the local punks at his old school. He wasn't liked much there.

He learned to fend for himself, mostly stealing food from shops. Once and a while he would each leftovers from the trash. He believed it was disgusting but food was food. What he didn't know was that he would have been taking the same amount of punishing damage as he would have in military camp. He made refuge in the library, spending most of his time there reading or sleeping. He would occasionally wash up in the rest room using small amounts of soap he would get from stores. He became faster, stronger, tougher. He became exactly what he need to become to survive on the streets of Demaitre, Canada.

Wilhelm still occasionally get beat up by the bully's of Sacred Heart-Public schools but less and less often. He wanted it to stop once and for all so he stole a knife from a hunting shop on the outskirts of town. He had to take the bus but it was the only way for him to travel. Anyhow, he retaliated the next time they confronted him. He managed to do some minor damage on them with the swiss army knife, and that got them to leave him alone for the most part.

Now he is just walking along the streets finding what ever he can to make his life better. By now he has no other shops that don't recognize him so he must take to pickpocketing now so he can buy the goods he needs.

Please proof read your work. I noticed a number of errors, for instance;

- "each leftovers from the trash" should be "eat leftovers from the trash"

- "Wilhelm still occasionally get beat up by the bully's" should be "Willhelm still occasionally gets beaten up by the bullies"

- "By now he has no other shops" should be "By now he has no shops" or, preferably, "By now there are no shops"

Other then that I have no problems with it; you just need to use a grammar/spell checker or proof read more carefully.