OOC: I didn't know if you had to be accepted into a coven, or you just sign up. But I choose Nephim.
Name: Manveru (no surname)
Gender: Male
Age: 40
Apparent Age: 30
Place of Birth: Mothers House, Demaitre
Species: Vampire
Coven: Nephim
Appearance:
Hair: Long Black hair, occasionally worn in a pony tail
Eyes: Green, but hardly seen, from a distance they look black
Face: Pale slender, no markings or earings, no facial hair
Body: Medium build
Clothes: Black Pants, Black shirt with dark grey markings, Black tall boots, Black Trench coat.
History:
Born in North Demaitre, Manveru was delivered into the world in his mothers house by a mid-wife. His father was not present due to him leaving his family to pursue other interests (Vegas chicks).
His mother worked at a local grocerie store to keep a living for her son and her self, although her wage was considerable to keep a life with her son, a disease struck her that no money could heal.
Take from Manveru at the age of 16, his mother died after fighting a strange disease for nearly 2 years.
Fiding a job at Car Garage, he now had enough money to fulfill his life long dream.
Be a commercial Pilot, taking tourists around Demaitre high above the sky. But little did he realise, that this would be the end of him.
After 20 years in the buisness as a Commercial Pilot, and a promising career in the air lining buisness, Manveru was on top of the world.
Until one day, a strange couple came buy the hanger after hours, saying that they were new to the area, and wanting to explore it more, however they requested a night flight in two days time. Manveru didn't hesitate to take them aboard his twin engine beachcraft, for a 1 hour flight.
After take-off, Manveru started explaining to them the scenery of Demaitre, they wern't interested and instead got out a camera from one of their bags, and started taking pictures from high above.
Starting to make questions about what their intentions were, the couple got startled and afraid that their secret plans may be stumbled upon.
When Manveru landed the plane, he got straight to cleaning the place up, as it was around 9:00 at night, he asked about payment from the couple.............
Instead he recieved two puncture wounds and a whole new life.
To be continued.....
EDIT: Part 2 - History
Stumbling out of his office, Manveru walked outside, hands outstreached, halucinations of his mother before him, he fell into long grass beside his aircraft hanger.
There he slumbered, for 24 hours. Untouched by anyone due to the fact that he was hidden from view.
Awakening the following night, Manveru found a thirst, a terrible thirst, rushing into his office he noticed that he could see clearly in the night, he knew it was strange, but it felt normal somehow.
Falling to the floor infront of the office fridge, he grabbed the handle of a jug of ice water and guzzled it down his throat.
But still, the thirst would not quench.
He realised what had happened, and that night he fed. And he liked it.
Just wondering, how do I get selected, and how and when do I start RPing
If you have not fully read the rules yet, I suggest you do so now. They really will make things easier. I quote from the Registeration portion of the Rules and Registration section:
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Just to make sure things are extremely clear, let's go over that again. Copy and paste the stats sheet below in the Character Descriptions forum before posting in character.
{Once you have posted your character description, you are free to Rp. You do not need to be approved or registered before you post. You will be contacted if there is a problem, and you need to stop posting. - Vanessa} |
You can join a coven from the very beginning, from entering it in your coven description.
Now, as for your description itself, there are a few problems. First, he needs a last name. People born forty years ago had last names. Just because he has one doesn’t mean he has to go by it. Second, he slept for 24 hours outside, unprotected? I think a vampire would need better protection from the sun than what long grass could afford. Third, your history is choppy. I suggest pasting it into a program like Microsoft Word or Word Perfect, or something with a spell/grammar check to catch errors and improve the quality of your writing.
Please fix these problems and you will be approved.