Name: Ignus J. Barnes

Gender: Male

Age: 28

Apparent Age: 19

Place of Birth: Bath, New York

Species: Vampire.

Coven: Independent

Appearance: A thin young man standing 5’11, Ignus has brown eyes and hair. His feature are mostly no descript except for his eerily care-free smile.

History: Raise by poor parents in Bath, Ignus (or Iggy to his friends) learned to get by on his own. On the night of his high-school graduation, his parents were killed in a car crash with one of his drunk friends. Wrought with distress, Ignus decided to get away from it all and moved to Demaitre. Being mostly unable to maintain a job, he spent most of his time on the streets. After three weeks spent in the city, he was transformed. He was so drunk at the time he does not remember that night. With his transformation came a new outlook on life. While life had seemed so fragile after the death of his parents, he was now immortal.

I’m sorry, but you are not approved. The only problem with your profile is the history; there isn’t enough after he was turned. What did he do, where did he go? Just adding a paragraph or so should be enough, once you do just PM a mod for them to take a look at it.