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Title: A History Of Vampires
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§evashtyn - April 26, 2005 03:45 PM (GMT)
Sevashtyn walked down the tall bookshelved rows of books, not looking for anything in particular, just out of curiousity.He hadn't been inside of a library for a while, and wondered what he might find.His pale blue eyes scanned the dusty shelves until a certain title made his stop in his trcks. A History of Vampires."Interesting.." he said softly to himself. After a moment of examining the thick spine, he picked it up and began to read it at one of the small tables.

((OOC-i know...this post sucks..))

Ramiel - May 12, 2005 03:40 PM (GMT)
Malachai felt his preternatural senses penetrating Sevashtyn's mind. He cased something- a portrait of a silly-looking vampire in the opened book- to wink.

heheheh

You want to know about vampires?

He scratched a few shards of glass from the empty bottle in front of him.

I can show you. Come to me...

Malachai had gotten through. He hypnotized the young one, and was beckoning him toward home. Was he going to follow? His mental grip was strong, he expected so.

Aracind - May 12, 2005 03:46 PM (GMT)
OOC: Ok im sure you have to check with a mod because at the moment, as another player, your grammar needs some touching up.

Ramiel - May 12, 2005 10:26 PM (GMT)
I do not understand. Who are you talking to? If it was me- I do not know what you mean by my grammar- there's nothing wrong with it. There was only one little typo in that post- where 'cased' should be 'caused'. Anyway, please let me know what you'd have me do. I have no clue what the problem is.

And, just to let you know- You have a few typos yourself, in that little paragraph at the bottom of your post. please check them.

"Do you see that Aracind? It is a Albatross, Look at the span of its wings, look at how it easily glides through the air without a care in the world. Such times are bliss, Savour them Aracind, this is my teaching to you... Savour the moments of your immortal life, For your mortal eyes do not now afflict you. Your immortal life must be savoured as it is a gift from me to you... Do not forget my teaching, and my gift Aracind" - Cresnia's words to Aracind

That is how you have it typed.

Aracind - May 15, 2005 08:51 PM (GMT)
I was not having a go, this is not a battle over who can find the most typo's, just advising you because im new here too and I thought perhaps you were going into god modding for a sec there, and you havnt used speech marks for your characters dialogue, and the hehehehehe thing?

Ramiel - May 15, 2005 11:24 PM (GMT)
You're silly. Pee off.

Aracind - May 19, 2005 06:43 PM (GMT)
*Rolls eyes* Ok go play vampire now heheheheheeh... pff

Ramiel - May 20, 2005 08:27 PM (GMT)
And thanks a lot for ruining this thread...

I really appreciate it.




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