I played skaven in a pitched battle and won by a massacre


King jericho surveyed the teeming horde of the ratmen that had gathered in the glowing rays of dawn at the other end of the field. They would not stop him from reaching his target and reclaiming the treasures that had been stolen from him.

He decided that it was time to begin and urged his units of chariots froward they flew forward in there disiplined manner, suddenly he felt the power of the priests and seemed to move forward a little faster to his left he spied some of the vermin behind a hut how had they got forward so quick and turned right to charge them. he heard the shriek of the catapult as a skull flew over his head towards the enemy he smiled as he saw the enemy fall again he heard the shriek and another fell close to the first andd more of the rats died. Suddenly he was charged in the left flank by some of the rats as well as the right and watched as two crew fell dead and then the chariots dissolved. Looking near the strange cannons he saw one of the scorpions climb out of the ground another came up just in front of him, strangley of course, the third was nowhere to be seenhe heard the catapult fire again and saw more fall then he felt a surge of power and started striking left and right at the rats and sattisfied saw them fall the swarms had now surrounded the others and he watched as the scorpion cut down the putrefing skaven with ease but in turn was destroyed suuddenly the nerve of the rats broke and they ran he gave chase and cut down all of them this flank was now secured looking across the field he saw the rats leader and charged into him to break the moral as he bellowed his challenge he smiled as the arrogant rat stepped forward he felt a sensation in his side and saw that he had been struck he swung his flail back in rage and saw the teeth of the weapon leave bite marks and gashs in the rats body the rest of them seeing there leaders death ran and looking at his priests he saw them chanting and felt his side knit together the battle was over he had won

not bad, but punctuation might be something to be considered ;)

sorry did it a little quick

Try writing up long stuff in a text-processor first, that helps me out too.

good idea i might try that next time