Title: My poems
Description: just a few...
Salome - April 16, 2003 02:40 PM (GMT)
Those are great!! My favorite one is the second one. I can really relate to it.
Tears of Angels - April 19, 2003 04:15 PM (GMT)
:crazy: Those are kewl... but sad!! ^_^
I write poems too, I'll post some soon. I have a poetry book and every day I try to write some... of course, I can't always, hehe...
Rouge - April 16, 2003 10:20 AM (GMT)
I love writing poems. I write all the time. These are some of my best... :cute:
Mysterious boy
You know you read my mind that day
You could feel
What I was going through
And your voice was soft
Your words was clear
As if they were meant just for me
Your eyes so bright
And full of life
They shocked and blinded me
But enchanted me so
Mysterious boy
You looked so strange to me
With red and black hair
And words of magic and hope
Mysterious boy
You know you changed my life that day
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I thought of miracles
at the end of the rainbow
But that was a long time ago
By now I know
Fairytales
Donīt last
By now I know
I should forget
about the past
I thought of magic
Like the one in the fairytales
I never understood
Why people fails
Fairytales
Donīt last
By now I know
Fairytales
Donīt last
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Call me razorblade
Cause thy silence
Is soothing
Oh, razorblade
Thy silent violence
taking on my mind
Making me smile
Shiny razorblade
Deep red blood
I fail to thee
When thy great silence
Shake the mountains
And my mothers tears
Fall in the river
Razorblade
Oh, great razorblade
When it burns inside my veins
Pour out the liquid fire
In one single
Sharp strike
Call me, razorblade
Call me
When thy silence grows stronger
Rouge - April 17, 2003 10:26 AM (GMT)
Thanks... It's great to hear that people like what I'm doing. Feels wonderful... :crazy:
Rouge - April 24, 2003 11:10 AM (GMT)
I love writing poems. Unfortunately I mostly write in Swedish so I don't have much to share at all... :unsure:
sparkle66 - July 16, 2003 12:23 AM (GMT)
They are really nice. I wish I could write poems like that. :rolleyes:
amanda48826 - November 27, 2003 03:29 AM (GMT)
i wish i had the talent to write poems but sadly i don't. i can only play instruments. keep up the good work!!!
Amanda
UnusualOne - December 15, 2004 01:46 PM (GMT)
They're well funky!! I like the razorblade one a lot - just the way it's written and what it's about.
