~~~~~~~~~~World of the advanced~~~~~~~~~~
Prologue: Tahu
Tahu stood in ko-wahi wearing his kanohi akaku. He was supposed to be watching for kohrak. He heard a crackling that could only be one thing. CHIKT, CHIKT, CHIKT!!! Tahu jumped out of the way just in time to avoid an ice blast. The snow started melting. Tahu checked his sword, it wasn't activated yet. He flipped around, only to be impaled by a fire blast. He could a faint bohrok outline, from one claw it shot ice at him, from the other, it shot fire. "I must be dreaming" he thought. Suddenly, multi-colored cords shot out from nowhere. "Great" he thought "first mutant bohrok, now makuta has returned after a bucket of paint has been spilled on him". Then he blacked out. He did not see the cords destroy the bohrok, or the twin sworded figure step out from the shadows. "This island is in grave danger" was all it said, then it dissappeared in a flash of light.
Author's note: The crackling was ice hardening quickly, not the bohrok themselves.BTW, the name of a toa at the beggining of the chapter is the main character of the chapter.
Chapter 1: Tahu
Tahu awoke in Ko-koro surrounded by matorans. "He’s awake!" one of them yelled, and Nuju walked in. "How long have I been out?" he asked.” I don't know" Nuju responded, "Matoro found you on the tundra about 2 weeks ago.". "2 weeks?!?, I must tell the other toa!" Tahu yelled. "Calm down" Nuju said, "first, I must know what happened". "It was some kind of mutant bohrok! I thought it was a kohrak, but then it shot fire at me and caught me by surprise so much that I blacked out.". "A likely story." "you don't believe me?" "Oh, I believe you. It's mainly because all the other toa had similar stories about these mutant bohrok. I will have to ask Nokama about any prophecies on the subject.".Thousands of miles beneath Mata-Nui, the bahrag planned their next move.
Chapter 2: Turaga
While the toa were resting, the turuga held a meeting in ko-koro. "Nokama, what have you found so far?" Nuju asked. "Nothing" Nokama replied, "I've searched every inch of the library". "RUN!!!" a voice shouted through the door. Nuju looked out the door and saw a swarm of mutant bohrok. A squad leader caught sight of him and told the others. Soon every bohrok had its attention on the hut. He pulled his head back into the hut, "I just proved the existence of the mutant bohrok". "What makes you say that?" Onewa asked. "There a swarm of them outside". "Drat". That was when the hut exploded from a combined blast of fire and ice.
Chapter 3: Pohatu
Pohatu looked up at the sky. It was a cloudless day outside. A perfect day to practice koli. He grabbed his ball and headed to the koli field. He tossed the ball up in the air and kicked to the other end of the field, causing it ricochet up into the air and knock something out of the sky into the desert. “Le-koro might need another kahu”, he thought to himself. How strange that a kahu would be in the desert. He switched from his pakari to his kakama and raced off to where he saw it land. What he found surprised him. It was not a kahu, but it was a toa. It had a brown torso and orange eyes. It wore a silver kakama and had the same arms as him. It had gray legs and brown feet. Before he could study it more, he felt a consciousness slip into his mind and tell him that Brellok were coming. He did not know what Brellok were, all he knew was that they were coming.
Chapter 4: Pohatu
CHIKT! CHIKT! CHIKT! Suddenly, Pohatu knew what Brellok are. They were some kind of these mutant bohrok. “Touch Brello”, the voice said in his head. “What‘s Brello?”, he replied mentally. “Just touch that body over there”, it told him. Dodging an underground blast from the Brellok, Pohatu jumped and touched the body’s hand. “Thank you”, it told him, “now I‘ll take care of those”.The new toa raised his hands and the bohrok began to flee. “Why are they running away?” Pohatu asked. “Because they don‘t want this to happen to them”, the toa said as he snapped his fingers and all the bohrok exploded into a jumble of pieces. “Alright, now that the bohrok are gone, tell me who you are”.
Chapter 5: Lewa
Lewa wandered through the le-wahi jungle, searching for fikou spiders. Recently, fikous had been attacking villagers for some strange reason. Gali had agreed to help, mainly because the fikous had migrated to ga-wahi and were attacking ga-korans too. Nearby, a twig snapped. “Gali, is that you?”, he called. No answer. Lewa heard a soft “sploosh” beneath his feet, and looked down to see a pool of water. “But today is a warm, dry day”, he thought to himself, “that means that…” CHIKT, CHIKT, CHIKT!!!
Chapter 6: Lewa
Lewa was hopeless as 8 bohrok imedietly jumped on him. Six of them pinned him while the swarm comander casualy removed lewa’s mask and replaced it with a krana from one of the workers. On their way to le-koro, lewa was able to study these bohrok. They had the body, arms, and legs of gahlok, the claws, feet, krana, and headplate of a lehvak, and the eyes of a tahnok.Once at le-koro, lewa chopped up the elevators while the bohrok burned the giant tree down with their acid. The screams of the falling le-korans was heard all over mata-nui.
Chapter 7: Lewa
"Obsticals!" the vioce of the swarm said in lewa's mind. Lewa looked around, he didn't see a rock or tree in the way, or anything like a toa. He heard a fikou squeak as one of the bohrok melted it. It had been Matau's favorite one. *Click* , the sound had come from just behind him. As if to react, the bohrok started walking around like decapitated husi. One walked into a tree, and strangley exploded. Another fell into a hole and it's head fell off. That was when he saw the dekranaed swarm commander laying on the ground a few bio away.
Chapter 8: Lewa
Two quick thumps behind him brought lewa back to his senses. Turning around, he saw two toa standing there. One of them was the brown one pohatu had claimed to see. So he hadn't just trying to get some admiration and attention. The other other one was female, looking almost like Gali. Suddenly, a bohrok behind him jumped forward, the squad leader. Using telepathy, he read it's thoughts... and intentions. Lewa prepared to assist in them...
Chapter 9: Lewa
The bohrok's claws glowed with energy, harnesing wind and water to summon powerful storm energy. Lewa, controlling the chaotic winds as best he could, began to syncronize the wind as parallel to the storms energy. Having had his axe charged to a point far behond his mind's comprehension, Lewa pointed his axe at the green and blue toa, the one who looked like Gali. Ready, aim, fire!
Chapter 10: Lewa
As the energies subsided, Lewa saw what was left of the two toa. The one he had aimed the attack at had been knocked out, or had she? He had no way of telling whether she was still alive. The other one had dissapeared without a trace. Lewa turned around only to see a bohrok carrying a big rock crudly melted into a stick. It looked like a club. Lewa suddenly realized that that was meant for him! *Whack* Lewa fell to the ground, wondering why they did that.
Chapter 11: Lewa
When lewa awoke, all the bohrok around him had levitation krana except the swarm commander. With a sudden flash of light, a red and white bohrok like Tahu had described appeared along with a va of equal properties. It also had a swarm commander krana. The va pulled out its krana, a levitation one, and put it into the previous swarm commander, or a "swarmy" as the le-koronans had nicknamed them. The new swarmy instantly destroyed the va quite mercilessly, apparently they had plenty to spare. The new swarmy also sent something at the old one, which caused it to dissapear in the same way the the new one had appeared. "Reach target, destroy target, remove all obsticals! The target is Mor-Koro" Lewa heard the Bahrag give the new orders. "If they give an order to reach the Mo-Koro or whatever it was, it must be interesting to get there!" Lewa thought to himself, "I might like to destroy something too.". Lewa's eyes suddenly widened, "Oh no, I'm starting to think like a bohrok'" he worried mentaly, "I can't let that happen". "But I can't help it" he argued with himself, "I just need to cleanse mata-nui and return it to the way it was in the before time!". Unknown to Lewa, his eyes had been glowing redder and redder every hour.
Chapter 12: Lewa
The swarmy's claws began to glow. Brighter and brighter they kept glowing. Suddenly, the bohrok jabbed its claws forward, as if to pierce something in the air. It pierced something all right, ripples of energy pulsed outward. With a boom, a giant 20 foot vortex opened up. One by one, the bohrok jumped in with the help of their new levitation krana. Lewa was the last one in. As soon as he stepped into it, he closed his eyes, and felt as though he was being stretched and mangled. As suddenly as it had started, everything stopped. He had landed in something soft and warm. Lewa opened his eyes, and found himself to be laying in snow. "How can snow be warm?" he wondered to himself.
Chapter 13: Lewa
Lewa looked up at the area around him. He was in a village, no doubt. What kind eluded him. There were cliffs on all sides of the village. Not even an entrance or exit; no wonder the bohrok had to teleport to get here. There were only 4 villages that had cliffs on almost all sides, Ta-Koro, Ko-Koro, Po-Koro, and Onu-Koro. But the only one with snow was Ko-Koro, which had no warm snow.In the center of the village, there was a glowing suva, which had all six elements swirling about it. There were several huts around the village, in which frightened matorans were running into. At the back of the koro, there was a large temple. It was a horrifiing sight, seeing the bohrok ripping down the huts and attacking the matorans inside. Lewa suddenly became aware that he was walking toward one of the huts. He tried to fight the krana, but it was much stronger than the one he had encountered previously. With a slash from his axe, he sliced the top off the hut. The two matorans inside began crawling backwards in fear, until they hit the edge of the hut wall. As the krana poised him to strike, a flash appeared in front of him, blinding him for a second. When he opened his eyes, he saw a strange double-sworded toa standing there. "I'm sorry toa of air, but there's only one way to get rid of that kind of krana" said the toa. Immediatly, the toa grabbed her sword and jabbed it at his face...
Chapter 14: Kopaka
Kopaka ran as fast as he could to ko-koro. Le-koro and ko-koro had fallen to the bohrok. Ga-koro had fallen to the fikou spiders, which no one could explain. He had been stationed at ga-koro, but when he heard the news about ko-koro, he decided to make for it. It had been a wise choice, otherwise a fikou would have attacked him too. He was all alone on this mission. Or so did he think...
Feel free to review here, the review topic rule is only so that the story doesn't get cluttered. But I'm never posting another part to this story, so that rule is obsolete.
Yup, but it can't be THAT good. Why else would hardly anyone like it on BZP. I've got it shut down over there. And I'm never adding to this one.
-Of Doom :evilgrin:
Can I add to it? JK. Anyway, I wish I knew what happened... I may start a Epic
here, never been seen, so keep yer eyes open!
-Tnf
Awe man OD, you should really finish that, I think it's good!
nintendorocks03 is right! Why on earth would people on BZP not like it? It's probably the best epic I've read! I want to know who was with Kopaka in the last chapter! You're really good at epics, you should make another on here at least. I know you'd have at least one fan!
-TToL