Reveiw my new epic, Team Koopaking here.

And for those of you who don't know what reveiw means, it means discuss, talk, or comment about the story the person has made.

Nice epic KK. Also is the Blue Koopa Bro. based off of who I think it is? Also are you taking geust stars?

Yes Lavo, you know who it is. Most people here don't though. That's why it's a surprise for them.

Anyway, I was going to post that I was taking guest stars. Only serious ones though.

Also, Lavo, since you are a Koopa Bros. fan, what color is your Koopa Bro? You know it can't be Orange or Blue. Why not something teal or aqua? Or maybe white. Yu should think about that.

You know what color Maroon is right? (Also name the guy Lavo). One more thing, he really hates Bowser (the GS).

The... GS? Explain that.

Ok, I will. describe him thugh, like what clor gloves and stuff.

Nice new epic.
I like the story so far.

Thanks KR.
Yeah, Episode 5 is now up, if anyone is interested.

Just read it.
It's starting to get good.

Really good epic! :D
Every episode is getting better than the last one!
And Lavo means "Guest Star" when he said GS

Thanks Jsr. You reading it is apreciated. (Do realize I use spell check when I write these. XD)

And a new chapter is up. Episode 6: Fight for Life

(Don't worry Lavo, you'll be in it more.)

Heh don't worry about that. (Me not being in yet). Also I'll give you so of Lavo's discription:

Color shell/gloves/shoes: Maroon (a redish brown).

Right, I can do that.

BTW, I don't know if guys have noticed or not, but I've posted 2 each day, cause I started saturday and today is monday. I'm probably going to keep dong that too. One in the morning and one in the afternoon/at night.

Nice KK. As I said said on AIM very detailed. Also the plot itself is also good.

Yeah, thanks Lavo. Comments are always appreciated.

Very nice KK, especially JD. You can use any of the abilities that are on his sprite sheet as well. If you want to.

Yeah, I was planning on doind that, actually.

and it's cool that you've come back! (again)

Well good chapter. But Lavo (GS) doesn't really hate thecknowogy.

Yeah, I know, he's just saying that because Koopaking uses it so much. They'll resolve the matter later.

The last one was funny.
And I like how your avatar matches your character. :lol:

An other good chapter. But you can esaly tell (but that chapter) that Blue quit the deal.

heh, yeah.

Awesome! I'd like to be in it... One question though. Do I have to be a Koopa Bro? Because on the Nintendo forums, I already have a Three-Dimensional character.

No... Lavo and JD aren't Koopa Bros. Lavos a normal Koopa and JD is a bandit. Lavo has become the third Biggest Koopa Bros. Fan on Boo Mansion Forums, but he doesn't have a Koopa Bros. character. So yes, you can Just show/tell me what your character looks like.

Pyro(shi)
Speicies: Yoshi
Color: Mostly Red. Spikes, Shoes, and Saddle are green.
Abilities: Grow wings and fly w/o Shell (Long story involving a undigested wing cap), breathe fire, and all of the Yoshi species other abilities (I.E. Tounge, Flutter Jump, etc.)
Bio: Pyroshi is a fully grown, yet immature Yoshi. He jokes a lot, and has a hard time being serious. He hates his full name, and prefers to be called Pyro.

The fight against Lump was hillarious.
He keeps getting smacked into a tree. :lol:
For some reason I find that amusing.

Yeah, I figured people would get aleast a little kick out of that., and the fact that Koopaking pointed out it was annoying. I thought that was funny. Trust me, I laugh at some of the things I write down.

Hey, epics are serious, but it doesn't mean you can't lighten up the mood.

Right, gotcha. I can do that. Just... I might throw in a different power here and there. I mean cmon. Three fire guys? XD

But... but... FIRE IS TEH OWN! *sob sob*

Lol I'm on a vacation and I'm gonna read the rest of the epic I missed in the car on my new GBA Movie Player :charmed:

Your what? That sounds cool.

Heh, I'll post a lot tomarrow. Today I didn't post any and yesterday I only posted on, so I'll have about 5 new ones up tomarrow.

Yeah it plays movies, and a lot of other stuff like music and txt files.

Interesting. So are you using it to read this stuff right now or something?

*A whisper in the wind* "Dragon... Dragon"

See the wind agrees with me!! Koopa Dragon! hehe.

*Runs away and hides from KoopaKing*

Well an other good chapter. Also, what's next?

What's next? Well, I can't just GIVE OUT that kind of info. Episode 14, I guess.

It was a retorical question.

I knw, it was suposed to be retarded, like Tnf always acts.

I ARE NOT RETARDED!

OK, currently writing Episode 14, and I'll do 15 today too. Promise.