Heh, that's right, the King is back at writing again.

This is basically the story behind my game. So for all you waiting for something out there, this is a free sample for now. Now, let's get started!



Koopa, KOOpa, KOOPA! KOOPAKOOPA! (hour)

Koomer: Woot, we're back! and I's time to veiw our favorite heros again!
Kooler: Us!
Koowa: Shut up, Kooler.
Kooler: You!
Koowa: I demand a raise!
Koomer: Well... While those two are complaining and ranting, I think I'll show you the story on the Big Screen.

Koomer takes out a remote and pushes a button named BS. (I know, It's funny!) It shows Mario and Luigi infront of their house. The camera zooms in.



Luigi and Mario are infront of their house, collecting mail that has been jammed in the mailbox for two weeks. They had been on vaction at LavaLava Island.

Luigi: *Pulling out a large chunk of mail* I told you we should have had them *grunt* hold it at the post office!
Mario: That's not the *Grunt* point. As long as we have our mail, I'm fine.
Luigi: Whatever.
They walk inside with all the mail and put it on their table.
Luigi: Hey, look at this.
There was an envolope that had "ATTENTION" ontop of it. Mario opened it then read it. He gave it to Luigi, and he read it. His eyes widen.
Luigi: This doesn't look good, bro. let's get over there as soon as possible.
Mario: Cake first?
Luigi: Sure.

Hilarious KK. It's really good.

Ooo, this sounds good. And that title screen was spifferiffic.

Heh, yeah. That's the actual title screen. I couldn't think of anything else to do, espcially because I'm not on my own computer.

Anyway, it's time for a new section of my game.

Mario and Luigi finish their cake, then rush over to Peach's castle. They meet toadsworth in the front hall and he starts explaining everything.

Toadsworth: Mario! Luigi! Thank goodness you're here! The new Toad Town *PD has found Bowser's new hideout while you were on vaction. They've built a base right outside of the castle. Hopefully he's not plotting another way to get peach and ruin both of your reputations.
Mario: So... Where's the new base?
Toadsworth: ...I'm not sure. Go ask the TTPD. They should know.

Luigi is thinking from when toadsworth mentioned the factthat Bowser hadn't tried to take revenge on them. He also thought of some other stuff, then realized something. He was about to tell Mario, but then realized Mario was gone.

Toadsworth: Uh.. Luigi? Leave please.
Luigi: Toadsworth! The new base is a trap! Bowser wants Us to go over there!
Toadsworth: Yeah, or he's just really stupid.

Mario is at the TTPD and talks to the Cheif.

Mario: Dry Dry Desert?
Cheif: Yes, it's in Dry Dry Desert. We've also resently found out that he's looking for the 6 Star Pieces formed by the Giant Star. We don't exactly know what hppened with the giant star and all, but we know that something bad will happen if Bowser gets all six.
Mario: Ok, so how do I get there?
Cheif: That's a secret that only the TTPD needs to know. Here, I can put you to sleep and we can take you there, or you can just stay here and not save the Mushroom Kingdom.
Mario: *Sigh* A thing a guy does for his kingdom. Go ahead. Put me to sleep.
The cheif injects something into Mario's arm, but nothing happens.
Mario: I don't feal any different.
Cheif: Hold up.
He inject stuff into Mario about four more time and Mario falls to the ground imeadiately.
Cheif: Oh wait... Oops, that's right. There was no secret to getting there. We could have just ridden the train! Oh well. Let's go.

Koomer talks into the mike.

Koomer: Heh, wow. That was kind of stupid of the Cheif. Oh well. Too bad for Mario.
Kooler: And I wonder whatLuigi wanted to tell Mario. I guess you'll just have to find out tomarrow.
Koowa: The story continues. Don't miss out!


*PD-Police Department.

Heh, you know something funny? I haven't writen one thing from the game yet! But I'm planning on doing the things that are in the first post of mine. I'm definately doing the Koopa Koopa Hour, cause that's my trade mark, you know?

I still can't figure out how you could put your own characters into it. I can't even make a halfway-decent RPG as it is...

Oh, you have RPG Maker? Well, if you have any questions, just ask me.

Also, you might have read that wrong. I edited my post later, after you posted.

Again hilarious chapter KK.

That was good KK.
I like the part when Mario gets injected a lot. :lol:

PS. Tnf if you use RPG Maker 2000 you can ask me about it too. if you have XP it'd be better to ask DW or KK.

Yeah, I thought that part was funny too. I almost feel over when I wrote it.

Welp, more of the prolouge coming your way.

Day 3 at the KoopaKoopa Hour.

Koomer: Alright, Mario has made it to Dry Dry desert "secretly", Luigi needs to tell Mario something, but doesn't know where it is, and Bowser is... well, I don't know.
Kooler: So, stick around to find out.

The camera zooms in at the Big Screen, that is showing Mario lying on the floor, in the Secret Base of the TTPD. Mario gets up and holds his head. He feels light-headed.

Mario: Ugh... I wonder what the Cheif put in me... It felt like it could bring down the elefant...
Toad 1: Ok... Well, he's up. Now what?
Cheif: We test his logic.
The cheif holds out a card infront of mario with an ink blot on it.
Cheif: Now I want you to tell me what you see in this picture.
Mario: An ink blot.
The cheif slaps his head.
Cheif: No, idiot! What does the shape appear to be.
Mario stared at the picture for a few seconds then replied.
Mario: A castle, angery villagers, a dragon, and a honey baked ham.
The cheif looks at the picture, then turns to the toad.
Cheif: Well atleast he's thinking. Toad, what do you see in this picture?
Toad 1: Uh... A dark hole?
He slaps his head again.
Cheif: Whatever. Mario, I need to tell you your mission. We want you to go into Bowser's castle and get all the Star Pieces he's collected. We want to either stop or stall Bowser from collecting all six.
Mario: Right.
Mario exited the base and saw that it was only around 50 yards away from the castle, and that there was a mote of lava infront of the castle about 30 yards long.
Mario: I've gotta ask why they built the base so close. Don't you think Bowser would dicover it by now?
He looked around and saw a pipe that was still being built. Mario asked one of the toads that were building it where it went to.
Toad 2: It goes back to Toad Town. It should be done by tomarrow. We're just cleaning all the rubble ans stuff out of it now.
Mario: Maybe I can take it back as an escape route. Just incase.
Toad 2: I dunno if it'll be finished by then.
Mario just left, not finishing the conversation. He saw a bridge, but it was broken. He went over to a toad who was trying to fix it up.
Toad 3: The cheif told me to build a primative bridge, but it looked terrible. this one will look great. You should probably head over to Dry Dry Outpost to kill off some time while I fix up the bridge. It won't take much longer.
Mario: Ugh! I'm not going to have to travel all day, am I?
But in Bowser's castle Bowser was... Uh... What is he doing?

Bowser: Bwha ha ha. The foolish toads and that stupid Mario don't know what I'm up to. I WANT them to cross tyhe pool of lava and invade the castle. They don't realize that I already have 1 of the star pieces.
Kammy: Yeah... But what does it do?
Bowser: I'm not sure. BWHA HA HA!!! Wait... Did that come out wrong?
Kammy: Yes, it did sir.
Bowser looks overat the camera and stairs at the person filming.
Bowser: Are you FILMING US?!? Guards! Get him out of here!
Camera man: Crap!
The camera man turns the camera at himself.
Camera man: They're casing me! I'm just a lakitu trying to make a good movie! Stop trying to poke me your spears! AHHH!!

Koomer: wow...
Kooler: That was weird...
Koowa: Stay tuned for more!

Day four at the KoopaKoopa Hour

Koomer: Another day here at KoopaKoopa hour.
Kooler: Today is the day Mario goesof in the desert...Or so our produser says.
Audience member: But isn't he already in the desert?
Koowa: Quite you!
Koomer: Uh, anyway, here you go.

Mario pops back into the TTPD base to say bye to the Cheif and that other random toad. But a pipe appears, and a sign attatched to it says "Pipe house." Luigi jumps out, which startles everyone. (Geez, you'd think they'd be startled by the pipe coming out of the ground!)

Luigi: Bro! I need to tell you something!
Mario: Taht you wanna join me, Weegi?
Luigi: No, that-- HEY! I thought I told you to stop caling you that!
Mario: Well, yeah, but Luigi? Your name so doesn't fit you.
Cheif: I agree. Brave Warrior? HA! It makes me laugh.
Both the Cheif and Mario laugh. Luigi Stares for a second the yells at them.
Luigi: Well, I had something to tell you guys, but I forgot now! Way to go...
Mario: Oh well. Even if you don't WANT to come, I need your help.
Luigi: Actually, I've been wanting to get out of the house lately. I guess I could join you for a bit.
Mario and Luigj both say bye to the Cheif.
Cheif: Good luck, Mario.
Mario: What? On going shopping in Dry Dry Outpost?
Cheif: No, getting there. You probably have no idea where you are!
Mario: Good point...
Cheif: All I know is that it's somewhere Southeast of here. That should be some help, right?
Mario: Yeah, I guess. And the trick is to always find the path.
Luigi: ...I've never been in the Dry Dry Desert. I think maybe you should lead, Mario.
They took off for the outpost, although they had no idea wherethey were going. When they got to the side entrence of Bowser's castle, they saw two Goombas.
Goomba 2: We're on break, but can still get the job done.
Mario: Wait... why did the second one reply first?
Luigi: Dunno... But we can't have them run off to Bowser. That'll be trouble.
Mario: Ok, ok. It should be easy, beating them and all.
They enter a battle stage and start to fight. The goombas go first, and take away 2 damage from Mario. The other takes 3 from "Weegi."
Luigi: Stop calling me that!
Mario jumps on the Goomba and takes away 3 damage. The goomba disappears from battle. Luigi take 2 from the other and it stays.
Mario: We gotta work on our moves, Weegi... I'm gettin' tired already!
Luigi: Yeah... Our last battle was a long time ago. I don't even remember how our attacks went!
Mario: Let's try one, just incase.
They try the Spin Bros. atack, but when Mario throughs Luigi, Luigi flies off the Battle stage.
Mario: Oops... We definately have to work on them.
The Goomba attacks Mario, and takes 2 damage. Mario jumps on it and takes 4. The battle ends.
Mario: Weegi! Where'd you go?
Luigi was in the sand, face first, legs wabling. Mario pulls Luigi out, and Luigi falls on Mario.
Luigi: Wow... we suck...
Mario: Get off me, Weegi!
Luigi stands up and they walk off. They encounter a spiney, but run from it so they don't go through battle. They find the path, but encounter a shyguy. They weren't able to escape from battle, cause the Shyguy was too fast.

Koomer: Looks like trouble for the bros.
Kooler: They look tired... from a battle with goombas? Something's up.
Koowa: I agree. Stay tuned for more.

Very good . Do you enjoy all that Writing ?

I like how you write out the battles, good work.

What gave you the idea ?

Yeah thanks. I just think of how they actually do it and write it out that way.

You mean the idea to write this, mike? Just the fact that I CAN write. I get bored some days and write down parts of my game, then record them on the comp basically.

BTW, just so you know, this is based on the game I'm making in the Custom Games forum.