Review my newest BGF-only epic, Frozen!

Can I ask 1 thing? Who's point of view is this from, I'm guessing Tahu, but I could be mistaken, anyway, everything else is P-E-R-F-E-C-T!

Yep. I tried to make it SORT of hard to guess. However, by elimination you can guess it's Tahu. Why? I'm happy to tell you.

He reffered to Onua.
He claimed Lewa was one of his best friends.
He was angry at Kopaka (Rather, his element).
He's in love with Gali.
He reffered to Pohatu.
Takanuva wasn't around when the Nuva were finding their masks.

Thusly, it's Tahu.

Wow, Tnf, that's cool! Great job, and I hope to see more.

Thank you. Some of it may seem weird cuz it's HARD to right in the present tense first person... Either Current Third Perosn or Past First Person are bad enough, lol. Anyway, probably chapter 3 up tonight.

This is exilent Tnf, I also think I know what's going to happen next.

If you guessed a giant cheese cube is going to fall from the heavens, crushing all in it's path, like I did, then you are abbbsoolluuutlyyyy coorrreeeccttt!

XD

New chap's up. Either even later tonight or Tommorow, depending on how creative/bored I feel.

Good and intersting, as I expectited, I am egerly waiting for more.

Thanks! Why is it the last 3 comments are completely generic, though? What did you like about the chapter?

The emotion, in the chapter.

Ah, yeah. I've always wanted to do a Romance Epic, but until recently I've been too weirded out by it.

This was... is... Amazing. I love how descriptive you are with Tahu's feelings, and obviously Tahu and Gali were meant to be together. I can't wait to see more!
-Teet ;)

very nice, i am somewhat into Bionicle, so i found this story very interesting.

9/10

Thanks, Teet and Mushroomed! Glad you like it! The next chapter should be up over the weekend prolly.

WOW!!! it is super awsome!!! i wub it!!

i hate to be the Simon Cowl but I would say a 7/10.

D91, No flaming, no spamming. Warn +1. People have a right to their opinions, and 7/10 is what I'd rate it myself.

hehe, i finally read it, and it's real good! (I dont' usually read comedies and epics, i dont know why)

Comidies and Epics are like the best thing to read.

well...if you fell that way tnf. i'd have to say the samething to you that i said to Sky.(even though you deleted it)

Meh. I know good writing, and I sure as heck ain't the author of it. >.<

Fine. Then you'd have to flame ME then, Dragon-91. Cause I didn't find it all that good. Don't forget who your superiors are. And let me just say, you're on the thin line of a ban. Don't push your luck, boy.

Hey... Who Unwarned you? I knew it, OD's probably screaming like a girl right now, about how close he came to getting POKED by D91! GASP! Seriously, the reason I warned you wasn't because you dissed Pokemon, but because you were flaming Sky...

yeah, and plus you stoped writing

I'd keep writing if we stayed on topic.

Spam = PWNED

just so that everyone knows me and sky are brothers, so that kinda makes it ok for us to flame each other.

Well, not exactly. We don't ALLOW flaming here. It's not the fact of who you are flaming, it's whether you did or didn't flame.

Why is it allowed just because they are brothers does that mean I could flanme shadowboy1111 ?

It ISN'T allowed. Plus he doesn't come here anymore. read the whole conversation.

And you did see the reveiw topics? Then why did you post in the stories themselves? Can't you read the rules or something?