Tell me what you think about my story.
Read it here.

It's about how 6 Metruans plus Jaller and Takanuva venture off into the unknown sea past Mata-Nui.

wow, Koopaking, that's good! A ew spelling errors, but still good. I have to ask, though, why would they stay there long, but build a boat and leave as soon as possible?

Very intersting, and good epic KK. Dispite a few spelling and grammer errors. I'm looking forward to more.

Thanks guys! Yeah, sorry about the spalling. I'll type it in word next time, so that it will tell me what I have mistakened.

And Dume, I meant to say that they WEREN'T going to be there for long. sorry for the confusion.

So, they travaled across Mata Nui and Hahli is coming. I'm looking forward more KK.

That's really good! I've always wanted to write a fanfic, but I don't really have the talent to do it.

No, no, you're fine

Nice story you have here.

Thanks. Any questions or comments on it?

BTW, guys, I've made a new chapter and edited the Chapter 2's bios of Nerezza and Solaire.

Dang! And I thought the Prologue was good! Great job KK! (And I like the discriptions.)

Hey, does this have anything to do with those things you've built? You know, those Toa things plus That big guy and that one with the tenticals. Cause you have six Toa, and that guy in the water sounds like a god description of the Thing you've built.

:twitch: *Punches Dume in the waist* SHUT UP!!!

Anyway, yeah, thanks for the comment.

uh... KK? Why aren't you doing anything in here?