Title: Metru Nui In-N-Out Burger 2
Description: the Burger Joint Returns!
Description: the Burger Joint Returns!
Jguy101 - October 21, 2004 02:52 AM (GMT)
As some of you may know, I was writing my third BZP comedy, Metru Nui In-N-Out Burger, earlier this year; however, it abruptly stopped when I left. Well, it's back!
n Metru Nui, under rubble...
Kopaka: Anybody see any light?
Gali: What do you think? Is there supposed to be light shining through 10 feet of rubble?
Kopaka: Maybe. Hey, let me move this rock...
Lewa: Oww! You just poked my eye!
Kopaka. Oh. Sorry.
Tahu: Hey, I found a Beanie Baby!
Kopaka: Darn, I was hoping they were all gone...
30 minutes earlier, in Kopaka's office at the Metru Nui In-N-Out Burger.....
Gali: (Walks in) Um, Kopaka?
Kopaka: Yeah?
Gali: There are a bunch of Bohrok protesting outside.
Kopaka: what are they protesting?
Gali: Oh, they're calling us murderous pigs for serving meat.
Kopaka: what, do they want us to serve Tofu burgers or something?
Gali: Yeah, and to stop serving meat.
Kopaka: Just tell them to get a Grilled Cheese Animal style.
Gali: Sure.... (Walks out)
A minute later....
Gali: (Walks in) Um, Kopaka?
Kopaka: What now?
Gali: They're threatening to blow up the building.
Kopaka: Okay, I'm gonna go out and talk to them.
Outside, there are thousands of Bohrok...
Gahlok: Save the animals!
Tahnok: Give me beef!
All the other Bohrok stare at the Tahnok that just asked for beef.
All other Bohrok: Tackle him!
Tahnok: Ahh!!!!!!!!!
Kopaka: That's nasty.
Kohrak: Hey! are you the person that wons this abomination?
Kopaka: Well, I'm a manager....and In-N-Out Burger happens to be a family-owned establishment, not a franchise, mind you.
Kohrak: Why do we care? You're animal killers!
Kopaka: Oh yes, I ate your cat just this morning. It was quite delicious.
Kohrak: You ate my Fluffy? WAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Let's blow up the building!
All the Bohrok pull out Bazookas and AK47s.
Kopaka: Uh-oh....
Later, back under the rubble...
Pohatu: So......when can I eat?
Kopaka: When we get out of here and find food, nitwit.
Pohatu: Okay...wait, I found some Twinkies!
Kopaka: Gimme.
Pohatu: My Twinkies!
Kopaka: I said Gimme.
Pohatu: Never!
Kopaka: Gimme now, or I'll hit you on the head with a bowling ball when we get out of here and you'll be like Tahu.
Tahu: That would be fun!
Pohatu: Nooo!!!!! Okay, here you go!
Kopaka: Thank you, lowly servant.
Pohatu: Quit it.
Now, if you want to advertise MNINO2 in your sig, you have two options. First, there's this nice little text link....
n Metru Nui, under rubble...
Kopaka: Anybody see any light?
Gali: What do you think? Is there supposed to be light shining through 10 feet of rubble?
Kopaka: Maybe. Hey, let me move this rock...
Lewa: Oww! You just poked my eye!
Kopaka. Oh. Sorry.
Tahu: Hey, I found a Beanie Baby!
Kopaka: Darn, I was hoping they were all gone...
30 minutes earlier, in Kopaka's office at the Metru Nui In-N-Out Burger.....
Gali: (Walks in) Um, Kopaka?
Kopaka: Yeah?
Gali: There are a bunch of Bohrok protesting outside.
Kopaka: what are they protesting?
Gali: Oh, they're calling us murderous pigs for serving meat.
Kopaka: what, do they want us to serve Tofu burgers or something?
Gali: Yeah, and to stop serving meat.
Kopaka: Just tell them to get a Grilled Cheese Animal style.
Gali: Sure.... (Walks out)
A minute later....
Gali: (Walks in) Um, Kopaka?
Kopaka: What now?
Gali: They're threatening to blow up the building.
Kopaka: Okay, I'm gonna go out and talk to them.
Outside, there are thousands of Bohrok...
Gahlok: Save the animals!
Tahnok: Give me beef!
All the other Bohrok stare at the Tahnok that just asked for beef.
All other Bohrok: Tackle him!
Tahnok: Ahh!!!!!!!!!
Kopaka: That's nasty.
Kohrak: Hey! are you the person that wons this abomination?
Kopaka: Well, I'm a manager....and In-N-Out Burger happens to be a family-owned establishment, not a franchise, mind you.
Kohrak: Why do we care? You're animal killers!
Kopaka: Oh yes, I ate your cat just this morning. It was quite delicious.
Kohrak: You ate my Fluffy? WAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Let's blow up the building!
All the Bohrok pull out Bazookas and AK47s.
Kopaka: Uh-oh....
Later, back under the rubble...
Pohatu: So......when can I eat?
Kopaka: When we get out of here and find food, nitwit.
Pohatu: Okay...wait, I found some Twinkies!
Kopaka: Gimme.
Pohatu: My Twinkies!
Kopaka: I said Gimme.
Pohatu: Never!
Kopaka: Gimme now, or I'll hit you on the head with a bowling ball when we get out of here and you'll be like Tahu.
Tahu: That would be fun!
Pohatu: Nooo!!!!! Okay, here you go!
Kopaka: Thank you, lowly servant.
Pohatu: Quit it.
Now, if you want to advertise MNINO2 in your sig, you have two options. First, there's this nice little text link....
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...Or, you can use this sig banner!
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Koopaking - October 21, 2004 09:08 PM (GMT)
perhapps you should post the first one for people who haven't been to BZPower... (I'm not saying I haven't, I'm just saying for people who didn't come from there... You know.)
Anyway, it's good. Funny, I should say.
Anyway, it's good. Funny, I should say.
Chwoka - October 22, 2004 02:59 PM (GMT)
I haven't been to BZPower.....
Jguy101 - October 23, 2004 12:34 AM (GMT)
Hmm.....I might not only post MNINO1, but also Mata Nui Computer Store, my first comedy. :D
Chapter 2
In Metru Nui, under rubble...
Takanuva: So, are we actually going ot try to get out of here?
Kopaka: what do you think we're doing?
Takanuva: Well, we've been under here for about half an hour now, and you're eating Twinkies.
Pohatu: My Twinkies!
Kopaka: They're mine now. :P
Tahu: Hey, I've found a box of matches and a tank!
Kopaka: And why are we supposed to care?
Tahu: Because I found something!
Kopaka: Well, take the match and propane tank and see if we can figure out how to use it to get out of here.
Tahu: Whee!
Kopaka: :rolleyes:
Later...
Onua: Hey, is that Propane I smell?
Kopaka: I smell it too....wait.... Tahu! What's in that tank?
Tahu: I don't know. I'll light a match to see if I can read it.
Kopaka: Okay...wait, Tahu noo!!!!!!!!!!
It's too late: Tahu lights the match, and all of a sudden there's a huge explosion, sending the Toa - and lots of rubble - flying in the air.
Tahu: Whee!!!!!!
Kopaka: It's not funny you know!
As the Toa start to fall, Lewa sues his Miru Nuva to get them to the ground without getting kerplunked.
Gali: Is kerplunk even a word?
No, I just felt like using it.
Gali: :rolleyes:
Lewa: So....
Pohatu: ....What do we do know?
Lewa: Hey! That's my line!
Pohatu: What are you talking about?
Lewa: You just said what I was gonna say!
Pohatu: No, that was my line in the script.
Lewa: What script?
Pohatu: The one the people reading this comedy are reading right now.
Lewa: Oh, yeah. That one.
Pohatu: So, what now?
Kopaka: I have an idea...
Chapter 2
In Metru Nui, under rubble...
Takanuva: So, are we actually going ot try to get out of here?
Kopaka: what do you think we're doing?
Takanuva: Well, we've been under here for about half an hour now, and you're eating Twinkies.
Pohatu: My Twinkies!
Kopaka: They're mine now. :P
Tahu: Hey, I've found a box of matches and a tank!
Kopaka: And why are we supposed to care?
Tahu: Because I found something!
Kopaka: Well, take the match and propane tank and see if we can figure out how to use it to get out of here.
Tahu: Whee!
Kopaka: :rolleyes:
Later...
Onua: Hey, is that Propane I smell?
Kopaka: I smell it too....wait.... Tahu! What's in that tank?
Tahu: I don't know. I'll light a match to see if I can read it.
Kopaka: Okay...wait, Tahu noo!!!!!!!!!!
It's too late: Tahu lights the match, and all of a sudden there's a huge explosion, sending the Toa - and lots of rubble - flying in the air.
Tahu: Whee!!!!!!
Kopaka: It's not funny you know!
As the Toa start to fall, Lewa sues his Miru Nuva to get them to the ground without getting kerplunked.
Gali: Is kerplunk even a word?
No, I just felt like using it.
Gali: :rolleyes:
Lewa: So....
Pohatu: ....What do we do know?
Lewa: Hey! That's my line!
Pohatu: What are you talking about?
Lewa: You just said what I was gonna say!
Pohatu: No, that was my line in the script.
Lewa: What script?
Pohatu: The one the people reading this comedy are reading right now.
Lewa: Oh, yeah. That one.
Pohatu: So, what now?
Kopaka: I have an idea...
Koopaking - October 30, 2004 02:32 AM (GMT)
Cool new chapter, Jguy101...