Title: Poetry
Description: Just poetry...with some GS relevance
Marlin ßeta - January 4, 2004 04:27 AM (GMT)
Yeah. Garet likes Mia. Jenna likes Isaac. It’s all spelled out in the cinema scene at the end of the game. :ph43r:
SuicuneSol - January 22, 2004 12:21 AM (GMT)
Max - January 2, 2004 07:02 PM (GMT)
I have written some poetry...some based on personal experience, some only partly based on experience. I found that maybe some of them can have Golden Sun relevance too, but it's mainly about what I went through. This first one is Garet to Mia. In the games, you never really noticed much chemistry between them probably, but then again the games only showed what was relevant to the quest. It didn't show many moments between the characters just talking to each other. But what did make me think this up is that Garet jumped in after Mia in Jupiter Lighthouse. But, you never really see Mia showing much interest in Garet or talking to him much. Poor Garet was pretty much ignored. So that made me think there mighta been somethin he had for her.
Why have you abandoned your friend
who worked so hard to help you defend
what was left of your spirit of joy?
I talked to you through times good and bad
was with you whether you were happy or sad
I restored your faith when you lost all hope
I entertained you so that you would not mope
I helped you up in times of despair
I did all this because I really care.
Yet now you would leave me
now that you are free
of your misery and depression.
I have been loyal to you because you were my main obsession.
But now i see you don't feel the same way
I see that since you no longer talk to me today.
So I ask you now, once again
Why have you forsaken your friend?
Silver Chaos Adept - January 3, 2004 11:08 AM (GMT)
Max - January 9, 2004 02:49 AM (GMT)
Lol well you don't have to be very good...just add a verse if you like. Long as it's from Alex's point of view. I dunno, you dont have to. I'm just tryin to start somethin so i don't get bored.
Alex the Evil - January 3, 2004 11:19 PM (GMT)
That was...SO GOOD! You're right, they should have done more...personal cutscenes. I was thinking though... Does'nt Garet sort of like Jenna even though I think Issac does too and she supposedly likes Issac? Just a thought...
-Alex
Max - January 3, 2004 11:39 PM (GMT)
Yes...but you have to realize, that must have been a long quest. Garet had all that time to get to know Mia, and he learned to like her. Ah, but she had not the same feelings for him. I will keep thinking of how to word some of the other poems I have in mind. See my profile for one I wrote about the girl I like.
Alex the Evil - January 4, 2004 12:15 AM (GMT)
I read it, it's brilliant! I prefer things about heartbreak to things about love... I wrote a heartbreak poem a few days ago. I actully did'nt write it, just thought it up and forgot it. I think I should at least try to remember it. Or maybe I should just continue denying the real world... I'll go with the second one :D
-Alex
Max - January 4, 2004 12:22 AM (GMT)
Heheh well thanks dude...me, I don't really stay with just one topic like heartbreak...it just depends on how I'm feeling. But for now...it's gonna be mostly feeling of being forgotten about for now.
Silver Chaos Adept - January 4, 2004 07:11 PM (GMT)
What cinema scene?! Tell me what happens!!!! You must!!!! :D
Shine: Or else she will inflict her drawing on you.....
Azure: Hey people!
Shine: Where did you come from?!
*coughs* Anyway......
Max - January 4, 2004 11:38 PM (GMT)
Eh, it's nothin to get excited about. It just shows the characters all animated, but it's just a frozen picture and some dialogue is all.
Alex the Evil - January 5, 2004 11:10 AM (GMT)
Ugh! The freakin' doom dragon won't die so I can't beat the game! It sucks...
Max - January 6, 2004 03:15 AM (GMT)
that does suck....hey. anyone else wanna post some of their poetry you might make? feel free...i've been working on the fanfic lately, except i'm kinda doin it all backwards. I've got the ending already...heheheh...
Max - January 7, 2004 12:56 AM (GMT)
This one is performed by Alex...it is a little different heheh. An attempt at some sort of rap song. Or whatever. Heheh.
Yeah, so I've got my blue hair
and some cool blue clothes I like to wear
There's my piercing blue eyes
and my soothing accent that speaks nothing but lies.
What is my age? I won't tell how old
I'm just a man of the ice, of freezing cold
I can be really smooth, nice, and charming
but you better not piss me off by foolishly arming
your blunt little sword or your rusty little mace
Cuz then I'm gonna give you a frickin hole in your face!
I'm really just a man of the ice
Tryin to make the world my paradise!
I plan to make this whole ****ing planet mine
Because of my awesome powers soooo fine!
All I want is for you all to bow your head
before your future ruler before you wind up dead! (Repeat)
Silver Chaos Adept - January 7, 2004 11:27 AM (GMT)
That was so Alex. :D Yeah, that would be like him. I need sugar to keep me awake now, so I don't have that disturbing Saturos dream again.... :huh:
Alex the Evil - January 8, 2004 09:27 PM (GMT)
That was sooo cool... I began rapping it as I was reading...lol. I'm messed up.
Smiley: Oui.
When did you start speaking Spanish?
Smiley: ... :huh:
Max - January 8, 2004 11:18 PM (GMT)
Heheheh...thanks...by the way, didn't you mean your smiley was speaking French? But hey, what do i know eh?
Max - January 8, 2004 11:20 PM (GMT)
Oh, and by the way, feel free to add on to it. That's why I posted it. Add your own verses haha...
Alex the Evil - January 9, 2004 12:41 AM (GMT)
I dunno either... I'm not good with languages (unless it's language like cursing MAJOR LOL)
Max - January 9, 2004 03:22 AM (GMT)
This one...is not Golden Sun...they are how i feel now...
Feelings of being left alone, forsaken
all of my advice, strength, and comfort taken
then cast away like the old used match
having no hope of anyone attempting to catch
me as I fall, even though I gave it my all
Of such things I've had a growing fear
that i would be left alone by you who i've held dear
Now, that fear is becoming reality
even though to your life i tried restoring quality
It would probably have been best
had I just let you rest, not been a pest
caring about how you're doing, how your day was
But I couldn't stand by, seeing you sad, because
I foolishly felt
that I had to help
that I had to be there
I had to care
But now I know that life isn't fair
that good intentions aren't always rewarded
that your loving attempts aren't always recorded
in your memories...but I do not want to be forgotten
i do not want to feel that pain that makes me feel rotten
So now...I beg one simple favor in return...
Don't leave me out of your memories...
Marlin ßeta - January 9, 2004 03:32 AM (GMT)
A poem of goodbyes. Don’t leave us Max! :(
Silver Chaos Adept - January 9, 2004 11:20 AM (GMT)
I could post a song thing I wrote. It's a Skies of Arcadia one. It sounds like an Evernescence song though.
Marlin ßeta - January 9, 2004 06:41 PM (GMT)
Song? Hmmm. I’m not sure if we could get the beat right. :o Oh, well.
Max - January 10, 2004 01:11 AM (GMT)
Well...I won't leave. That was for this girl i really care for...yet she no longer talks to me :( ...don't worry bout me going...hey wait a minute. You wouldn't want me to leave? Hmm...I dunno Marlin. It'll take a lot of bribery to keep me here...heheheheh...nah just kiddin.
Silver Chaos Adept - January 11, 2004 02:42 PM (GMT)
It's not a song. It just sounds kinda depressy and sad.
Max - January 12, 2004 12:27 AM (GMT)
Wait I'm kinda lost...what won't fit in with the beat? eh?
Silver Chaos Adept - January 12, 2004 12:44 PM (GMT)
I'm lost too. Actually, I think I always am. I am wandering in a sea of depression and gloom, in a boat of hope that sprung a leak of pessimism..... Not bad eh? ^_^
Marlin ßeta - January 13, 2004 12:47 AM (GMT)
There you go! :!: That’s what I was thinking about! :idea: Something moving and passionate. Depression is a good emotion. It makes us cherish the happy times. :heart: Or something like that. <_< I’m not into the mushy poems. I like the brazen, brash poetry of “The Rime of the Ancient Mariner.” :vein: Not to mention, “The Raven,” as well. There I go, right back to my knowledge of Literature. :(
Max - January 13, 2004 03:45 AM (GMT)
Hmm you were onto somethin there, Silver...ah well. Me, I can only write about what I'm feeling (although I usually exaggerate them seven-fold for the poem). So yeah...mine are usually about being abandoned by a loved one.
Max - January 13, 2004 11:20 PM (GMT)
What kind of fool am I?
I must have a desire to die!
Foolishly I went into a fight
only to learn that wasn't too bright
Cuz now I'm all messed up
bleeding mouth and puffy cheeks
are what I'm stuck with for maybe weeks
I was caught up in the moment
no longer thinking rationally
Now, these scratches are my atonement
these bruises that make me look unfashionably
all beat up and miserable looking.
The more I think about it, the more regret
I'm a stupid fool for letting myself get
into such a pointless battle.
But what's the point in complaining?
I'm not gonna cry.
What happened has happened
what was done is done.
Sulking and cowering about
is really not much fun.
Silver Chaos Adept - January 14, 2004 12:55 PM (GMT)
I am glad you have such a positive outlook on life Max.
Marlin ßeta - January 14, 2004 09:45 PM (GMT)
Yeah. REAL positive +. :frown: A poem about getting beat up. :...: Hmmm. There's something else like that, but I can't remember how it goes. Oh well.
Alex the Evil - January 15, 2004 01:28 AM (GMT)
Yeah... you must be really joyful. Wanna go skip through the flowers?
Oh, I love being sarcastic...
Max - January 15, 2004 01:52 AM (GMT)
Gah...I wrote it because I got beat up yesterday. Brutally. I consented to an after school fight and lost. Yet...even though i lost (and my face ain't too pretty right now heh) I got a lot of positive feedback at school. I was...a hero! :lol:
Marlin ßeta - January 15, 2004 03:02 AM (GMT)
A hero for fighting. Video game violence is one thing, but I frown on real violence every chance I get. So :angry: -_- <_< :frown:
Max - January 15, 2004 08:34 PM (GMT)
Well, I suppose I figured you wouldn't understand. You don't know the circumstances involved...I'm not a hero for getting my butt kicked in a fight...it's just that for once in my life, I stood up for myself to a degree I had never reached. Sure, as far as physical strength and skill goes I lost, but it was very hard for me to actually go up there and face him like a man. But then again, you would know nothing about that sort of thing, would you Marlin?
Alex the Evil - January 16, 2004 11:04 AM (GMT)
Oooh...diss. *chanting*
And, Max, good job! You may have lost, but still, that sounded pretty cool.
Silver Chaos Adept - January 16, 2004 01:01 PM (GMT)
Yeah go Max!!! All salute him!!
Random People: * salute*
K, that's enough. Wouldn't want it going to your head, now would we Max? ^_^ That was cool of you, BTW. ^_^
Max - January 16, 2004 09:48 PM (GMT)
Heheh thanks all, I knew at least some of you would see it my way...oh and don't worry about it going to my head. From now on, I'll be more cautious of anything that goes near my head. Those punches really hurt...hmm well hey some good may have come out of this. After that incident, I've been suspended from school for at least four days so I'll probably be posting a little more heheh.(not that i'm proud of getting suspended...it sucks cuz i'm gonna really fall behind)
Alex the Evil - January 17, 2004 05:09 AM (GMT)
Cool! You're even more of a hero then you were 10 seconds ago! Did the other dude get suspended too?