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Title: Slatter Polovone
Description: story of a charecter in another story


slatter - May 26, 2004 07:15 PM (GMT)
Slatter Polovone
#1 beginnings

Slatter was looking out over the horizon to see the sun fading into the darkness behind him. With a sword across his back and dirt beneath his feet he was ready for a journey of a lifetime. He was leavng his small humble city of Barksoft because he has been banished for his attempt of murder of his father who has been torturing him and his brother for many a year. Yet the attempt failed and he lost an eye in the process, because you see slatter’s life has not been an easy one, but little does he know he’s about to embark on the journey of a life time making and breaking friendships and fighting the evil protecting the good. He is sworn to his own creed not to kill the innocent. This is the beginning of a great adventure.


tell me if you like it

Flames Inferno - May 26, 2004 07:20 PM (GMT)
YEH U SHULD EMAIL IT 2 NINTENDO

ZaberTheAlmighty - May 26, 2004 07:24 PM (GMT)
00000 person, you have to be joking. I have no taste for it.

INH - May 26, 2004 07:28 PM (GMT)
It looks a bit like secret of mana, just a bit,
it has some orginallity too ^_^

God of the Black Flame: Canti - May 26, 2004 07:54 PM (GMT)
Sort of, I guess. Why would he mail it to Nintendo? He would get no money for it and Nintendo would own it.

I'll like it more if you write it well, but some people aren't very good at writing, no matter how hard they try. Good luck.

Jaken Veina - May 26, 2004 10:06 PM (GMT)
I'd vote, but I really can't say right now. I'll wait for more. It sounds ggod so far though.

SuicuneSol - May 26, 2004 10:14 PM (GMT)
Quirky name you have there Slatter. Barksoft....Polovone....Slatter.... :D

slatter - May 28, 2004 04:40 PM (GMT)
now for number 2

Slatter Polovone
#2 family
Slatter looks up to the waning moon in the cold dark night sky. Tonight he was thinking of the future that of what might come and what will come he was also thinking of one other person his sister. His sister his sister has been missing and thought dead if she is still alive today would be her 12th birthday three years younger than himself. He also thought maybe if he could just find her she would be valuable to his expedition into the unknown she would be able to help him find his way virtually anywhere because she a very skilled map maker before she left home. He also thought of how lucky she was to get out before her mother had died because after she had died his father had turned into a drunkard and a murderer. Slatter and his brother had not been so lucky as too escape they were caught in their fathers dark, sinuous, monotonous, torturous trap. While slatter was strong and survived the brutal repetitive torture his brother however was not so lucky he was killed by the sword that slatter now carries as a memorial to his brother and what he lived for. Now slatter has come to a fork in a road he chooses to take a road that brings him into a small humble looking town where he found an inn to stay at. At the counter he sees a nice looking blond women who asks him if he would like to stay he replies with a polite yes ma’am and pays 50 gill to stay but ,standing beside her is a girl with dark brown hair that look’s just about the age of twelve. He then motions toward the girl and asks if he may speak with her she politely obliges he asks her, her name she politely answers Stephanie Polovone. Slatter gasps and says do you know who I am she says no I do not think so very insecurely. He then tells her he is her brother and that he has been banished from her hometown of barksoft. He told the story of attempting to murder their father and how after their mother died he turned into a drunkard and a murderer himself. Next Stephanie broke into tears over her mothers and brothers and of what her father had become. He next asked her if during his time of wandering and adventuring if she would come with him and help him find somewhere to stay but to also to help him rid the world of murderers and thieves like their father. She agrees but on one condition he forges her a weapon he agrees and says then tommorow we leave for the forge and embark from their this truly starts the beginning of a grand adventure

Flames Inferno - May 28, 2004 04:46 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (ZaberTheAlmighty @ May 26 2004, 02:24 PM)
00000 person, you have to be joking. I have no taste for it.

i was just tryin 2 be nice

slatter - May 28, 2004 04:51 PM (GMT)
I like it and that is all that matters :(

ZaberTheAlmighty - June 5, 2004 01:43 PM (GMT)
Uh-huh. And for the other people, his name is not pronounced like it is spelled. Apparently Slatter was used to spell Slater.

Wind - June 5, 2004 01:44 PM (GMT)
hehehehehe funny

ZaberTheAlmighty - June 5, 2004 01:47 PM (GMT)
Uh-huh. After I read part of this, I went around school teasing him going Slatter Cheese!! Cause povolone is a cheese, no?

slatter - June 6, 2004 07:49 PM (GMT)
ok chet glad to see you back here is number 3

Slatter Polovone
#3
The Forge

Standing beside his sister almost ready to enter the forge was the tall figure known just as Slatter? To his sister he was much more he was a symbol of hope and pride to her, he was a warrior who escaped torture. As they step into the heat that burns against their lightly armored bodies. He asks his sister what kind of weapon she would like, she replies with, I would like a large broad sword with gold iron wrought into the hilt and sheath with silver pellets decorating the sword. Slatter replies with God woman you aren’t supposed to make a fashion statement with a weapon like that, he says O.K. but you are the one that has to carry it lady. Slatter steps up to the forge and puts his piece of cast iron into the hot coals while he is shaping it into a perfect point the hilt is sitting in a cooling room while the jewels set into it. He next cools off the sword and lays sparkling silver shards into it. All that is left to do is wait. He then steps outside and speaks with his sister he asks her are you think you are ready to take on the responsibility of a sword because it is no easy task might I tell you. You must take care of the sword clean the sword and never use the sword for evil do you agree to these terms. She replies with a half anxious half scared yes. Slatter walks back into the forge and takes the sword off the rack he hands the sword to her with the words inscribed Love you forever and always-Slatter. She thanks him very much and tells him we should get going. Should we go to the east or the west says Slatter I think we should go west where there are more hills and plateaus and quite a few more towns so tomorrow we leave for whatever may come. We shall make camp at the opening to this forest and leave in the morning.

the_isaac - June 7, 2004 07:38 PM (GMT)
chet, I always did support you, and I think it's great that you're back. welcome back :)

Wind - June 7, 2004 07:57 PM (GMT)
yeah me 2

Flames Inferno - June 7, 2004 08:02 PM (GMT)
welcome back

Skich - June 7, 2004 09:21 PM (GMT)
thank you at least some people wanted me back

Wind - June 7, 2004 09:23 PM (GMT)
i figure we were a little to harsh on you <_<

Skich - June 8, 2004 01:00 AM (GMT)
well thank you

slatter - June 8, 2004 05:10 PM (GMT)
Chet for thoust hast reyturned to the the greatest of all ye nests I welcom thoust with the passion of a thousand yackels riding a buffaloe good day 8|

the_isaac - June 8, 2004 06:26 PM (GMT)
you're odd. I don't like you. (sorry. nothing i can do about it)

Skich - June 8, 2004 07:09 PM (GMT)
he's odd at school to it's just him bein him

Flames Inferno - June 8, 2004 07:22 PM (GMT)
u 2 go same skl

Skich - June 8, 2004 07:33 PM (GMT)
ya we're friends he tried to help get me unbanned

Flames Inferno - June 8, 2004 08:00 PM (GMT)
rrrrrrr a friend in need is a frend indeed

Skich - June 8, 2004 08:15 PM (GMT)
ya ya whatever

Flames Inferno - June 8, 2004 08:25 PM (GMT)
ya ya wotever wot does dat mean

the_isaac - June 8, 2004 08:26 PM (GMT)
whatever? / who cares

Flames Inferno - June 8, 2004 08:32 PM (GMT)
:o o
thats not very interesting hm ive got a funny joke

12blondes and a brunette r hangin of a mountain on a rope they decide that 1 must let go after a spectactuluar speech the brunnete says she will let go.the blondes applaued

the_isaac - June 8, 2004 08:36 PM (GMT)
hahaha :P what about this one: Why are the blond jokes so simple to understand?

So the brunettes can understand them ofcourse :P

Flames Inferno - June 8, 2004 08:42 PM (GMT)
lol

Skich - June 8, 2004 11:11 PM (GMT)
it means i don't know what your talkin about

the_isaac - June 9, 2004 07:23 AM (GMT)
they're jokes. This has no real life in it at all.

ZaberTheAlmighty - June 9, 2004 05:13 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Chet Glusiondei @ Jun 8 2004, 02:09 PM)
he's odd at school to it's just him bein him

Right you are, Chet. Don't forget, I go to school with you two, too. Me and Chet once got Slatter to ask several girls out at a time, and then we got him to ask a boy out. :D

the_isaac - June 9, 2004 06:49 PM (GMT)
is he stupid or something?

ZaberTheAlmighty - June 9, 2004 07:16 PM (GMT)
He's not stupid. He just cares nothing for a good reputation. I envy him in a way...

Flames Inferno - June 9, 2004 08:33 PM (GMT)
i dont envy no1 apart from bill g8s and brad pitt

ZaberTheAlmighty - June 9, 2004 08:39 PM (GMT)
nifty

Flames Inferno - June 9, 2004 08:40 PM (GMT)
wot bout u




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