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Title: The Elements


Swordmaster - February 18, 2004 09:50 PM (GMT)
Proluge:

There were once five great masters of the elements, they were the ancient gods who could destroy or create anything they wished. Time passed, the masters created many things, but some of their creations betrayed the masters and sought to control their powers. These rebels eventually forged a rebellion against the masters in which the rebels won. However the rebels did not suceed in taking their powers. Before the masters were banished they destoyed the rebels. Since there were no longer any rebelious creations to inherit the powers, their powers were sent inside certain individuals who had pure hearts in a hope that they will release them from their prisons someday. However these individuals did not know this and when they died they were reborn again and again without any memory of the past... 500 000 000 000 years later the individuals have to discover how to get back to their world after being sent to another dimension and discovering their powers. This is where our story begins...

SuicuneSol - February 18, 2004 10:57 PM (GMT)
Is this GS related?

Swordmaster - February 18, 2004 11:28 PM (GMT)
Kind of but me and my friends are making up everything and besides they don't even know what GS is! :D

SuicuneSol - February 18, 2004 11:29 PM (GMT)
I see.

Swordmaster - February 18, 2004 11:31 PM (GMT)
So everything is cleared up about this right and by the way what is the average age of the people who post here because I think I'm under average.

SuicuneSol - February 19, 2004 01:25 AM (GMT)
I'm 36.


















Nah just kidding. I'm 14, a freshy.

Swordmaster - February 19, 2004 01:35 AM (GMT)
I'm only 12!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :o

SuicuneSol - February 19, 2004 01:42 AM (GMT)
Ok that's fine. No problem. If you didn't read the little note at that bottom of that last post it says I'm 14.

Swordmaster - February 19, 2004 01:06 PM (GMT)
I'm soooooo young compared to everyone else.

Silver Chaos Adept - February 19, 2004 07:34 PM (GMT)
This is soooo cool! Please write more!!! I am happy!!!! ^_^

Swordmaster - February 19, 2004 11:31 PM (GMT)
Ok if you say so:


Chapter One: History Begins Anew

"Ok Steve, have you got your stuff ready yet?" Steve's older cousin Britney was a stubborn, short tempered 13 year old girl who could be quite scary at times. "Steve hurry up or else we'll be late," Steve's cousin bellowed. "OK I'm coming." Steve ran down the stairs and into the car where his cousin was waiting impatiently as usual. "What took you," Britney said in an annoyed manner. "Nothing, let's just go to Arthur's already or else we'll be late," Steve said to his mom trying to ignore his cousin. The two remained silent until they met up with Preston and Arthur two of Steve's very best friends at Preston's house. Arthur and Preston were around the same age as Steve and Britney but the was definitely a size difference, Preston was pretty short and skinny and Arthur was tall and in good shape. "Just in time," Preston said. "Are you coming up stairs to play or what," Arthur remarked. The cousins said yeah and by the time they got there they realized they just climbed 5 sets of stairs. They didn't care and they started to play games like Soul Calibur 2 and Super Smash Bros. Melee. they played right until 12 o'clock because it was New Years Eve.Then they fell asleep right after they celebrated but they could still hear the adults talking endlessly. Never the less they all fell asleep. When they woke up they searched for their parents and right when they noticed that the house was empty a large hole appeared beneath them. They fell into the seemingly never ending hole and right when all hope was lost they saw a land that was remarkably similiar to the Earth. Just then in stead of accelerating to this new world they slowed down until they were floating in mid-air. Then they saw 4 elderly men infront of them they said "You 4 have pure hearts and we would very much appreciate it if you would release the seal that is cast upon us and in return we will grant you the knowledge of your ancient past." Steve was the first to speak up, " What do you mean our ancient powers?" " Enough, we will tell you of your powers then you free us and when you do free us we will return you to your world," one of them said. The group agreed and when the elders explained everything they muttered some words then Arthur, Britney, Preston and Steve all blacked out.

How's that Silver.

Silver Chaos Adept - February 20, 2004 09:07 AM (GMT)
COOL!!!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!

Swordmaster - February 24, 2004 05:38 PM (GMT)
I will... a little later.

Silver Chaos Adept - February 24, 2004 06:22 PM (GMT)
^^ Okay! ^_^

Swordmaster - February 24, 2004 08:21 PM (GMT)
Thanks for understanding. ;)

Death Aven - February 24, 2004 10:33 PM (GMT)
Getting better swordmaster ^_^
:unsure: sorry about calling you a s :unsure: swordsman last time ^_^

Silver Chaos Adept - February 25, 2004 05:06 PM (GMT)
Lol, I can't wait to see how the story goes. ^_^ Please do short chapters.

Death Aven - February 26, 2004 12:13 AM (GMT)
I like the long or short no matter aslong as they keep em coming

Swordmaster - February 26, 2004 08:26 PM (GMT)
Nooo I lost my next chapter!!!!!!!!! *starts to cry*

*sighs* I'll just have to do it all over again.

Death Aven - February 26, 2004 10:19 PM (GMT)
:angry: NOOOOOOOooooooooooooOOOOoooOOOooOOooOOooOooOoo!!!!!!!
*ALSO CRYS*

Swordmaster - February 29, 2004 02:00 AM (GMT)
Wait a minute here it is!!!! *sighs*

#1 swordmaster - March 1, 2004 12:33 AM (GMT)
swordmaster tell every body who I am :D :D

pepakins - March 1, 2004 12:37 AM (GMT)
i am arthur friend i not tell my name :P :P :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: -_- :D :} :angry: :( :unsure: 8| :blink: ;) :o ^_^ :huh: :smile:

Death Aven - March 1, 2004 12:55 AM (GMT)
:huh: huh!?

braveknight3000 - March 1, 2004 01:13 AM (GMT)
Did I miss something? 8|

Death Aven - March 1, 2004 01:15 AM (GMT)
I think we both missed something :huh:

braveknight3000 - March 1, 2004 01:21 AM (GMT)
Ok, this is what I managed to find out. A couple people know each other and are talking so that only they will understand. And I find that somewhat confusing. So please stop with the feuding or whatever your doing.

#1 swordmaster - March 1, 2004 12:44 PM (GMT)
he's a ideot :D :D :D :D

Silver Chaos Adept - March 1, 2004 04:28 PM (GMT)
Um, pepper or whoever? That avatar looks vaguely familiar.... where's it from? :?:

pepakins - March 1, 2004 05:28 PM (GMT)
it pepa lol and also the picture is from wild arms 2 my fav game -_-also sliver choas wana talk :D

Death Aven - March 1, 2004 06:21 PM (GMT)
She's spoken for all ready. <_<
Your lucky max didnt see this first
or he would have had your head! :} :D
Take it from a person who knows -_-
she has a thing for Sir Marlin.
so you have no chance! <_<

pepakins - March 2, 2004 12:50 AM (GMT)
lol :D

Swordmaster - March 2, 2004 05:30 PM (GMT)
Don't worry #1 Swordmaster is a friend of mine and Pep is a friend of his, it's all covered.

#1 swordmaster - March 2, 2004 11:35 PM (GMT)
well he's ok but i didn't tell him to join i just showed him swordmasters and mine story :unsure: :unsure: :unsure:

Jaken Veina - March 2, 2004 11:46 PM (GMT)
Ahh, so ti's co-written?

#1 swordmaster - March 2, 2004 11:54 PM (GMT)
ya i guess y :?: :...:

Silver Chaos Adept - March 4, 2004 05:30 PM (GMT)
Pepper: shut up.

Swordmaster - March 4, 2004 05:39 PM (GMT)
Your even lovely when you're cruel.

Silver Chaos Adept - March 4, 2004 06:09 PM (GMT)
Ahh...... go jump off a cliff. Anata baka.

braveknight3000 - March 5, 2004 12:59 AM (GMT)
Not nice to say to someone, even if its in japanese.




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