To everybody on this board who writes their own song lyric's you can post your talent right here...

Here is 1 of my own entitled "Crying Rivers of Wine towards your heart"

Love can make you do strange things
Love can make you feel happy again
Love will let you cry normal blood
But sorrow, empties the Heart...

(chorus)
I've cried blood for to many times right now
I've being crying Rivers of Wine towards your Heart
I've being in love with you for all my life
Thus I've being crying...
Crying Rivers of Wine towards your Heart
towards your Heart
towards your heart

Life is nothing, but a rose that opens
Life is like, a bee drinking from honey
Life can bring a lot of Joy in your life
But still, sorrow, will empty the Heart...

(chorus)
I've cried blood for to many times right now
I've being crying Rivers of Wine towards your Heart
I've being in love with you for all my life
Thus I've being crying...
Crying Rivers of Wine towards your Heart
towards your Heart
towards your heart

I am crying blood, not wine
I am crying blood, no tears
I am dying my love, no breath out my mouth
No love... Is given to me...

Aw to me...

(chorus)
I've cried blood for to many times right now
I've being crying Rivers of Wine towards your Heart
I've being in love with you for all my life
Thus I've being crying...
Crying Rivers of Wine towards your Heart
towards your Heart
towards your heart

crying blood, not wine
crying blood, no tears
dying my love, no breath
Nobody loves me for me...

(chorus)
I've cried blood for to many times right now
I've being crying Rivers of Wine towards your Heart
I've being in love with you for all my life
Thus I've being crying...
Crying Rivers of Wine towards your Heart
towards your Heart
towards your heart

Crying Rivers of Wine... Towards your Heart...
Towards your heart (twice)

(This Song is copywrithed by Michel Peter Dijkhuizen)

Been having writer's block when it comes to songs.

"Loving to Die" (Melody Cover of Again from HIM)

Understand, my pain comes from my Heart
And I feel, that I am loving to die...

*But no one, understands my true pain
And no one, can look trough my eyes again

Can you see, what the Hell is going on?
And can you feel, why the wind keeps blowing...

*But no one, understands my true pain
And no one, can look trough my eyes again
But no one, know's of his own destiny
And no one, can see that I'm Loving to Die, yeah

Oh My Darling

*But no one, understands my true pain
And no one, can look trough my eyes again
And no one, know's of it's own destiny
But no one, cab see that I'm Loving to Die, yeah

And no one, knows of my Loving Baby, yeah...
Oh my Lord
Oh Yeah

I've got the chorus & the first two lines to one song but I don't have the other lyrics.

Here's a song that I wrote on my Acoustic Guitar. It's called, "
Bloody Echoes . It's still not quite finished. Yet, I wanted to know what yall thought of it so far. I only played the beginning half. Let yall know if or when it's finally finished. ^_^

I got an Acoustic guitar for my 18th birthday. But I don't play it much. Blame my anti-nerd teacher.

Your anti-nerd teacher is a butthole. :P Everyone should enjoy musick. Playing it, writing it, listening to it. :D

So, what did you think of my song? :)

It was during my Senior year in high school.


Haven't looked at it because I got so much to look at and so little time to do it tonight.

Okay! When you do get the chance please tell me what you think? :D

Specified Server Could Not Be Found.

The same here when I wanted to take a look at that song... Specified Server Could Not Be Found.

The song I've been trying to write for years is supposed to describe what it's like to see expressions of love & be disgusted by it because some people feel like they'll never find love.

Writing songs is not my forte sorry.

I wish I could write one.

*Holding back the tears*

Holding back the pain, the anger and the sadness
I won't show a tear to show to you how I truly care about you
Because I know it only hurt us more
I am telling what is on my heart...

(Chorus)
Holding back the tears
I won't cry in this darkest hour of the night
Holding back the tears
I wish that I could say to you...
Oh baby I love you

In this pain, I don't believe
but I am being guided by guilt
On this world, I'm still looking
for the 1 thing that will end my pain

(Chorus)

Again and again, I will say that I love you
But no matter what I say, it will only hurt you
Again and again, I will die just for you
And I will cry rivers of wine towards your heart

(Chorus) 2x

I wish that I could say to you...
That I love you......

I wrote that song almost a week ago, writhen it for my girl friend

That actually looks like it'd be a hit song for any genre.

Thanks... I was inspired by that Ville Valo guy from the band HIM... Not a bad band after all... Long Live LOVE-METAL

You're welcome. It reminds me of a song called "Back At One" because it was performed by two different artists of different genres of music and both were hits.

I see that my good internet friend Hell666 posted the last song I wrote for my girlfriend Carly... How nice...

AND YOU... Yeah you mister "Oh please join my board which is the greatest board ever while in secret I love to talk behind my friends back all the time while I don't even respect them and bla bla bla bla..."

Next time a comment like that, saying some stuff to try and trick people into liking you as a friend like you tried with Hell666 and the HELL WILL COME ON YOU!!!

Dude, I DO respect people. I just get frustrated like NORMAL people do. At least I have the nerve to apologize when I do that.

Huh! :blink: [Woke up outta her sugar buzz a second here.] Bobby, is this an old comment?

If it is. It's not true. Bobby surely you do blow up sometimes, but heck so do I. Just makes us human. ;) I still like you no matter what man. Though I may not know the whole situation. I know people & you're one of the good ones. I am proud to call you my friend. :D :P

Now back to being high on sugar. *hee hee hee* :lol:

Thank you, Nicole. Plus, try living the kind of life I have and not try to get angry.

Bobby I would most likely go nuts on the first day of living your life. I might massacre everyone that pisses me off. :lol: It's best that you & I keep our own lifes. ;)

Title: Black Thunder – © copy writhed by Michel Peter Dijkhuizen aka “The Angel of Death” 2005
Name Album: And Angel’s cry blood as tears

Black Thunder!!!
Black Thunder!!!
Black Thunder!!!

It’s on the lose again, the thunder hit’s the earth in pain
As the blackness of the skies, cover all up in front of your eyes
BLACK THUNDER!!!

It is a living nightmare, you wished you never have summoned it
It is a demon from hell, and you are the 1 who has to endorse it

You thought that you had it all under control, while you know nothing about the pain
You’re falling into a deep black hole, from which you won’t come out alive

BLACK THUNDER!!!

You can to try to outrun it, but it won’t prevail
You might be feeling strange, after hearing these words again

You thought that you had it all under control, while you know nothing about the pain
You’re falling into a deep black hole, from which you won’t come out alive

It’s on the lose again, the thunder hit’s the earth in pain
As the blackness of the skies, cover all up in front of your eyes
BLACK THUNDER!!!

It’s on the lose again
The thunder hit’s the earth in pain
And you are staring up into the sky
maybe that their is something out their...

You run and you run away in fear
You hide from everything in sight

You do not believe in mystery, let alone believing in the pain
Or in believing the being who is heartless
You simply closes your eyes in shame, as you want to rot away like yesterday’s trash
As wishing that you where death...

It’s on the lose again, the thunder hit’s the earth in pain
As the blackness of the skies, cover all up in front of your eyes
BLACK THUNDER!!!

You run and you run away in fear
You hide from everything in sight

No wonder why you are so paralyzed, your mind is frozen solid
While your heart is melting
You simply close your eyes, hoping that this is all a dream
While you know that this is real

It’s on the lose again, the thunder hit’s the earth in pain
As the blackness of the skies, cover all up in front of your eyes
BLACK THUNDER!!!

BLACK THUNDER!!!

BLACK THUNDER!!!

BLACK THUNDER!!!

BLACK THUNDER!!!

Nice song, dude.

Thanks... I think

I was inspired by the song No More Tears from my man Ozzy Osbourne, it even goes the same when it comes down to the chorus

"It’s on the lose again, the thunder hit’s the earth in pain
As the blackness of the skies, cover all up in front of your eyes
BLACK THUNDER!!!"

Smash'N song Michel. :P
For fun I tried coming up the music part for your song. It's best that don't bother. <_< I wouldn't be able to live with myself if I butchered it. :blink: :lol:

Thanks, and you may try to think something up lol... As long as it is still almost the same as No More Tears from Ozzy Osbourne

Good luck, Nicole!!!!!!!

Sadly to say I never listened to the Ozz-man's music. :blink: I think that my bro. has one of his CD. You're welcome. :D If I do come up with anything I will let yah know. :rolleyes:

Boy will I need it. I will see about getting some string for my guitar later on today. ^_^

Michel, this is just an idea I have for your song Black Thunder. Please note that it's me singing & there are no music playing in the background. I did however made a couple of boo boos at the end of it, but you get the gist.

I was thinking about having it start out slow & work its up to Mezzo Forte, which means to raise the pitch just in case you didn't know that. This is all I have so far. Tell me what you think. Please note that yes I am tone deaf, but that doesn't stop me from playing mine or others folk's musick. :D

Sorry Nicole, but the link doesn't work... I don't hear sh*t

And you really should download the song No More Tears from Ozzy Osbourne to get an idea on the song

I got a "Specified Server Could Not Be Found".

same here, I just said it differently

Title: Being Left Alone – © copy writhed by Michel Peter Dijkhuizen aka “The Angel of Death” 2005
Name Album: And Angel’s cry blood as tears (special edition)

sadness wrap's around my heart
my eyes are blinded by the pain
freedom is no more right, yeah

How lonely it feels, to be left alone
How miserable you feel, being left alone

We all are prisoners, in this game
We have no choice, we walk our path's
We won't embrace our calling
Into the dark night, dead is on your side

my soul is set on fire
their is no turning back
from the relentless agony, yeah

How lonely it feels, to be left alone
How miserable you feel, being left alone

We all are prisoners, in this game
We have no choice, we walk our path's
We won't embrace our calling
Into the dark night, dead is on your side

sadness wrap's around my heart
my eyes are blinded by the pain
my soul is set on fire
their is no turning back
from the relentless agony, yeah

How lonely it feels, to be left alone
How miserable you feel, being left alone

We all are prisoners, in this game
We have no choice, we walk our path's
We won't embrace our calling
Into the dark night, dead is on your side

How lonely it feels, to be left alone
How miserable you feel, being left alone

Being left alone
Being left alone
Being left alone!

Michel that song was very deep. Makes one think that if there is someone for everyone. :mellow:

Sorry about the link being a pain in the rear. I will figure out someway for you to hear it. ;) Right now my computer is being a butt. <_< Once I get this sucker under control I'll send it to you. :)

I Am Not Yours To Change
Written by: Nicole

Don't ever try to change me.
When I refuse to be what you want me to be.
Don't ever try to force me.
I will never be anything... Other than who I am.

I will rebel.
And I will slit your throat as you shout.
Make you bleed.
Shut your stupid mouth.
You....

I won't let you modify me.
I like who I am already.
If you want somebody else.
Then leave me the hell alone.
Just go.

I am me.
You are you.
No one can alter that.
Yet, if you keep pushing me.
I will make you pay.

Don't ever try to change me.
When I refuse to be what you want me to be.
Don't ever try to force me.
I will never be anything... Other than who I am.

If you cannot handle it... just go.

Don't ever try to change me.
Don't ever try to force me.
I am not your toy soldier.
You cannot brainwash.

I am an individual.
I am me.
I am an individual.
I am not ignorant.
I am an individual.
And you can never mold me.

Unless you're willing to die.

Wicked... Well I truly have found my soul mate... ROCK ON!!!

A great song their Nicole

And I await the song

Thanks! Okay I lost my voice, but I am writing the music portion to your song. Once my voice comes back I will add me singing the lyrics to your song & the guitar part I wrote to your song. Right now it's going to take a while. I decided to ditch my first idea for your song. It didn't really seem to fit what I thought that you were going for. The music that I have written so far seems to fit the piece much better, than my original idea. Once I have it done I'll figure out a way to send you it threw e-mail or something. Still getting the hang of this stupid computer. Gotta Jet!
Smell yah later! :P

Nicole