ok so my last fanfics stunk i hope this will be better

Chapter 1:new day
[one day in citric town]

mike:Im late!!

[for what?]

mike:prof. redwood wants me!

[well get dressed]

{mike leaves the house and starts to run to the lab when he sees a girl moving boxes into a house}

mike:whos that....

(mike runs into a tree and the girl walks by)

crystal:are you ok?

mike:never...felt...better :wacko: (mike faints)

(at the lab)

prof. redwood:mike,mike,MIKE!!

mike:(wakes up)what?

crystal:i saved you if you had stayed there you would have been there till night, by the way my names crystal i know your name

mike:my names mike(mikes still sleepy)

prof. redwood:I need you two to go to littleroot town prof. birch needs your help with something

mike&crystal:ok

{mike and crystal ask their moms and go on a train to littleroot}

mike:wheres prof. birch?

employee:he went out to get a rock for his project

crystal:lets go find...

{a scream is heard}

mike:no time someone is in troble!

{in the forest}

prof. birch:mike! help!

{prof. is surrounded by two poochyenas}

mike:we dont have a pokemon

(prof. birch throws a pokeball to mike and crystal}

mike: go pokemon!

crystal:go pokemon!

(mike throws out a beldum crystal throws out bagon)

/bagon attacks poochyena1\

/beldum sleeps\

mike:beldum!

/beldum attacks poochyena2\

/beldum & bagon attack both poochyenas\

(back at birch's lab)

prof. birch:thank you both for that the rock i found matches the rocks at the catolonia mountains where you live it may show that the lendary pokemon lives there anyway prof. oak needs help with his pokedex and two people wont work so i need you to help

mike & crystal:alright!

FIN

FIN means End. i hope this isn't the end!

no its just the end of that chapter

It's okay..but somehow...too obscure?

what do you mean?

Everything is written zigzag through eachother...

oh... i see.

well uh.. I guess so uh... PENGUINS ROCK!!!

Chapter2:oops

mike:i hate walking

crystal:well just fly

mike:yeah good idea, wait!

crystal:just kidding anyway, you need to find the tickets to the magnet train cause' im going to be mad

mike:dont worry there right (pauses) there gone!

crystal:maybe there back at the lab

mike:good idea

{mike is running to the lab}

crystal:wait are you crazy? this is forest its crowded

mike:im not going to run into...

{SMACK!}

misty:oww who are you? MY SCOOTER ITS BROKE!!

mike:i can explain i was running and, whoa thats one broken scooter

misty:you battle now!

crystal:listen he was running and didnt see where he was going

misty:no! one jerk broke my bike now this one wont get away!

mike:now this is no way to settle a fight

misty:forget that! go starmie!

{out comes psyduck}

mike:this isnt burger king but you can have it your way. go beldum!

{beldum comes out}

/psyduck holds head in pain\

/beldum sleeps\

mike:get up!

misty:snap out of it!

/psyduck hits himself for no reason\

/beldum walks into pokeball\

mike: <_<

misty:I won you lost

mike:fine come on crystal

crystal:you are weird

misty: <_< :( um can i come?

mike:huh? well why?

misty:i left some freinds of mine and im alone and im sorry

mike:me too come on

crystal:um mike? it just so happens i have the tickets

mike: :mellow:

EL FIN

Nyanya... :D
MORE!

this computer is slow im sorry for the inconvience .im celbratingy 100th post

Congratulations! WHOHOOO! B)

ok here we go

Chapter3:action, hate,jealousy, pengu?

scene:train station catalonia region

mike:lets go home now im tired of looking at grass

misty:then why do you want to go home?

mike:tired, hey!, who grab me?

pengu:pennnnnnnngu!(food!)

crystal:its asking for food

mike: well let me catch it first! go bel-

/beldum comes out, evolves, attacks with ancient power, goes into pokeball\

mike: :mellow: :mellow: :mellow: :mellow: :blink: that was strange

ash:thats because he evolved rookie!, i bet i could beat your metang ive never been beat!

misty:ash you liar! your charizard wont listen to you!

ash:misty!? whatare you doing here?

may:whose she?

misty:im an old friend of ash and i think he's jealous of mike

ash:am not! go pikachu!

mike:me rookie? hmm... whatever,go metang!

/metang lands on pikachu and goes into pokeball\

mike: :angry:

ash:you beat me? :ph43r: but how? how will she like me?

misty:ha! so you are jealous!

ash:yeah i guess i should try better to impress crystal

may,misty,mike,crystal: :mellow:

mike:maybe we should get going now

brock: :ph43r:

crystal:he's been stairing at me for awile now

misty:brock just like pretty girls

crystal:um, im, flatterd

mike:this is getting weird lets just stop this chapter ok?

hydroise:but its getting good

mike:then go on to the next chapter! :angry:

Chapter4:finally the adventure starts

mike:im going to see if could get all eight badges on this mountain

tour robot:this mountain is 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000
feet high

mike:uh maybe not

tour robot:but its 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000
feet below sea level

mike:whew!

misty: are we leaving now?

mike:yeah!

{ten miles up the mountain}

crystal:were here! i told you im good with a map

mike:fine lets just find a hotel

misty:i heard that this gym leader is a girl

mike:gee whiz lets just go

{at the imnotgoing inn}

mike:wow a big room, big tv, big kitchen, two beds, two beds!

crystal:oh well your sleeping on the floor

mike: <_< turn on the tv

tv:this is a newsreporter with news ever gone gym leader heart is staying at the imnotgoing inn in room 202

mike:that explains the noise

tv:she going to greet every one on the floor

door:knock knock!

misty:hi! you must be heart

heart: yep and im saying hello

(heart looks around the room and see's mike, heart runs to mike)

heart:i didnt know there was three people :wub:

mike:well i have to sleep on the floor

heart:i have another bed you can use :wub:

mike:thanx but..

{heart grabs mike and takes him into her room}

mike: :blink:

misty:heart likes him (giggles)

crystal: :zzz:

{hearts room}

heart:hope you feel at home

mike:im going to turn on the tv

tv:uh oh, heart just took someboy in her room another victom of love lets pray that he doesnt turn her down or she'll leave for fifteen months

mike:no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

heart:ok so are you a trainer if you battle me i'll give you a badge

mike:ok, go metang!

heart:go luvdisc!

/metang runs to luvdisc to tackle\

/luvdisc uses attract\

/metang is in love he wont attack\

/luvdisc uses solar beam metang faints\

mike:darn

heart:im very sorry...

tv:oh no she's doing it

heart:mike, i love you :wub:

mike:uh..

tv:i hope he has the tv on mike kiss her for the badge!

mike:(here goes nothing)i love you too

{heart kisses mike}

misty:crystal you should watch this ha ha ha ha ha har! :D

heart:heres your badge

mike:thanx

heart:oops i forgot my house is at my gym(she leaves)

mike: :mellow:

tv: :mellow:

misty:ha ha ha! :D

END

You'r back... Welcome. :)

Chapter5:take from the rich give to the porygon2

scene:empty forest 30 miles up

mike:misty, will you stop talking about what happend at the hotel?

misty:im sorry, its just so hilarois! look its so funny i cant spell hilarios :D

mike:well tell to your self!, and be quiet!

crystal:thats sad mike you have a girlfriend

mike: :mellow:

crystal:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! :D :D :D :D :D :D :) :(
im sorry its pressure she's gonna call you say how much she loves you then bore you to death and hang up

mike:is this what you girls do?

misty:oh no, no, no, just keep your eyes on the road

mike:too tired let's camp

11:30 P.M. 30 miles up

theres a noise in the bushes

mike:whose that?

no one's there

the strange object walks to the backpacks and opens it

mike:you!

porygon2:aaaaaaaaaaah

mike:AAAAAAAAAAH!

porygon2:aaaaaaaaaaah

mike: :mellow:

porygon2:aaaaaaaaaaah

mike: <_<

porygon2:aaaaaaaaaaaaaah

mike: :angry:

porygon2:finished screaming complete task stealing

mike:now wait why can you talk?

porygon2:i dont know that dose not compute taking valuebles

mike:stop, thats wrong why are you doing this?

porygon2:well my master stole me from a lab and the lab was testing me by drowning me in water, burning me in fire, shocking me with electricity my master was a scientest there who thought it was wrong so he took me and lived a life stealing till he was caught and given the death sentence ive been stealing so i could decorate his grave but now im caught

mike:no here take my watch and these stuff

porygon2:wow you show compassion and mercy thank you ,will you be my master?

mike:fine

the next day

misty:my stuff its gone!

crystal:me too!

mike:uh my watch?

misty:my hairbrush, bracelet, necklace, are gone and you lost your watch?

crystal:i lost my lucky pen, my earings, and cd player

mike:well i dont know where they went

crystal:lets just pack up and go

the end