The other one is still going, but I have such a big idea... hope u don't mind

Amsterdam is the titel, it's from a song of Coldplay which I got my idea from and there will be lyric of that song here, maybe others.

The characters
Anne (me)
Juan-Carlos
Mackenzie
Pim(my)

when the text is red that mean it's Anne' point of view
when the text is blue that means it's Juan-Carlos' point of view
Hope u understand.....

Amsterdam

Chapter One: Surprise

Come on, oh my star is fading,
And I swerve out of control
If I, I’d only waited,
I’d not be stuck here in this hole

How could I be so stupid, I crossed the world over for him, to surprise him. Juan-Carlos doesn’t need my surprise, he just needs Pim, not me, her. I write him a note, the last thing that the world will know from me, the note explains what I’m going to do. If Juan-Carlos knows me, which I doubt, he will know what I’m going to do. I lie the note on his bed, with a cd. The lift takes me to the highest floor, where I get out and take the stairs. I stood on the roof, the sky was blue and stars were shining. It was cold, but I didn’t care. I sat down with my back against the edge, I took my cell phone and sent a message to Juan-Carlos, and thought.

I know what I want now, I want Anne. I love her so much, but I didn’t realise it. That kiss with Pim, it made me realise that I don’t need anyone, it took my doubts away. *bleep bleep* Oh, I’ve got a message, hey it’s from Anne. ‘Hiya Juan-Carlos, I thought I’d surprise you, but you more surprised me, so was the kiss good?!’ Oh no, she saw it, no. I’m gonna send something back, to get her back.

*bleep bleep* Ah, he send something back, ‘where are you, let me explain.’ ‘Go to you’re room, you’ll find something there.’ That was the last thing she would sent to him, when she pressed the sent button, she threw the phone over the edge. She couldn’t hear it falling, would anyone hear her if she jumped.

Come here, oh my star is fading,
And I swerve out of control
And I swear, I waited and waited
I’ve got to get out of this hole

Hope u like it

OMG... am I the bitchy one?? but hey I got to kiss him ;) It's funny but kinda cool to see my name in the story.. anyway.. I hope you are not going to do something stupid... I don't want to feel bad for the rest of my life..
btw.. it's funny when you said "the lift takes me to the highest floor" I didn't understand at first.. I think I'm being Americanised.. :P

hola anne ^_^
haha great fic again, I read it already but keep it coming, love it
as usualy :)

Oh yeah... sorry.. forgot to say the most important thing...

WANT MORE!!! B)

ahhhh! dont jump! or fall

lol pimmy, I writing the new chapter, don't know if I can finish it now, but I'll try

anyway.. one more thing.. why didn't you guys just call each other?!?!

don't know, I text more than I call...

interestin...

Amsterdam

Chapter Two: The Beginning

To my room, okay, come on, why does she always have to do this kinda things. Damn key, where is it, finally, come open, oh great I dropped it. Juan-Carlos finally got the door open, and started to search. What am I suppose to find anyway, wait there’s her Coldplay cd, she never leaves without it, under the cd is a letter. It said:

‘Dear Juan-Carlos,

I thought that we were happy, guess I thought wrong, but you needed someone else.’ No, no that’s not true. ‘I love you, I really do. If you listen to my cd, listen to track 11, Amsterdam, you maybe know what is going on with me. It was nice knowing you.

Love,
Anne.’

Nice knowing you, nice knowing you, I hope she hasn’t left. Juan-Carlos placed the cd in her stereo and started playing.

But time is on your side, it’s on your side, now
Not pushing you down, and all around
It’s no cause for concern

I can still remember the day I moved to Villena, it was my worst nightmare. Till I got introduced to her neighbour, I was only 13.

“Come on Anne, be nice, to have a nice neighbour is also nice” her mother said. Anne came walking. “Come put a smile on your face,” said her mom, while Anne made a smile. Her mom knocked on the door, a girl opened it. “Hi, I’m the new neighbour, Mary and this is my daughter Anne.” The girl smiled and said: “Well, I’m Mackenzie, I don’t live her though, my boyfriend does.” Mackenzie called her boyfriend, who was sweating heavily, Anne jaw dropped, he was gorgeous. “Hi, I’m Juan-Carlos” he said while he shook Anne’ and her mom’ hand, he gave her a smile, and excused himself, and asked them to come later.

They did. When her mom and she got back, Juan-Carlos had dressed himself up. He told them that he was 18 years old, he was a tennis player just turned pro. Anne told him that she and her mother played tennis too, but only for fun. Juan-Carlos told Anne that he would give her some pointers in tennis. Anne and Juan-Carlos connected, they laughed at the same things, although there was an age difference of 5 years. After there first meeting Juan-Carlos promised her to play tennis with her tomorrow. That day she would always remembers, she had a great time, Juan-Carlos also, from that day they had been friends. From that day there friendship began.

Oh, all that I know
There’s nothing here to run from
‘Cause everybody here’s got someday to lean on

When Anne turned 14, Juan-Carlos teased her by buying a inflatable man. When Anne took Juan-Carlos to the garden she wetted him with the garden hose, that was her revenge. She could remember who fun it was, she was longing for that memory to come back. I’m never gonna forget that, never.

After 2 years that Anne know Juan-Carlos, he and Mackenzie broke up. Juan-Carlos was heartbroken, but they both knew that they had both wrong paths. Anne cheered Juan-Carlos up, by eating a huge glace of chocolate ice, they got sick of it, and stayed sick for 2 days.

Hope u understand....

i like it very much! and thanks for having me in it! :) that is funny about the ice cream. when i was little and not worried about getting fat i would eat all that we had in the freezer :D

I hope u understand, it's past en present kinda tru each other

Amsterdam

Chapter Three: Sparks

On the second day that we’re sick, we talked allot. “Anne, why can’t I find someone who’s just a bit like you, nice to talk to, someone who understands me, that would be perfect.” I laughed and kissed his cheek, “I’m unique, you know that.” Juan-Carlos smiled, “yeah you are, never met anyone like you.” “Maybe that’s a good thing, I mean two of me, you can’t handle that.” He laughed, I love his laugh. It always seems the cheer me up when I’m down. “No,” said Juan-Carlos, “I can’t, would go crazy I think.”

Come on in
I've gotta tell you what a state I'm in
I've gotta tell you in my loudest tones
That I started looking for a warning sign

“Juan-Carlos,” Anne said seriously, “I have to tell you something, seriously.” Juan-Carlos turned over to Anne, “ahm, tell me.” “Don’t me mad at me for saying this,” said Anne, a little uncomfortable, Juan-Carlos nodded no, “ever I since I met you, I’ve had some feelings for you, and when you were with Mackenzie I was jealous, but the stupid thing is I can’t shut them off, I really want to, but I just can’t.” Juan-Carlos didn’t blink, he wanted to say something, ”I....” “No, Juan-Carlos, I haven’t finished, I want to apologise to you, I’ve known you for 2 years, you’re my best friend, and I haven’t said anything, I guess I was scared, I’m so sorry to drop this on you, especially now.” Anne and Juan-Carlos sighed at the same time, they smiled at each other. “Anne, thank you for telling me, but right now, I need you as my friend right now, not as my girlfriend.” Anne looked down, “I’m so sorry.” “Don’t be,” Juan-Carlos rapped his arms around her.

So I crawl back into your open arms
Yes I crawl back into your open arms
And I crawl back into your open arms
Yes I crawl back into your open arms

I can still feel his arms around me, I loved it, but know that will never happen again. Tears were running down my face, they dropped on my jeans, there they froze on my leg. Juan-Carlos knew that she was insecure, about her looks, about their relationship, and yet he had chosen to destroy her. I’ve had more times that I would try suicide, but never got this far, Juan-Carlos always seems to get me out of it, but now he was the reason. He was the reason that I felt so down, that I felt worthless more than ever. I cried even more, ‘if I just disappear than everything would be alright’ that sentence repeated in my head.

When the truth is, I miss you
Yeah the truth is, that I miss you so

I still remember our first kiss, it just was spontaneous and not on purpose. We were dancing into disco, till someone bumped into me, and I fell over, Juan-Carlos caught here and there lips touched, and they just kissed, right there. After that they just wanted to be with each other, and started to fall in love even more.

cool.. soo interesting! i love how you play out the first kiss. really cute.. ^_^

btw, i also love Coldplay. (parachutes kicked as$ but a rush of blood to the head blew me away) wahaha while i was reading your fic, reading the lyrics, the song kept on playing in my head. "yeah the truth is, i miss you...." hmm maybe i'll play my cd tonight. ^_^

thanks Nina finally some who understands me (with the Coldplay thing) I just become 'fan' just got Parachutes and A Rush Of Blood To The Head, and I love Amsterdam(the song) soooooooooooooo much and I try take a Coldplay song as title of the chapters 2 for so far that have that title: Sparks and We Never Change....

Amsterdam


Chapter Four: We Never Change?!

Everything was perfect, I never felt happier before, Juan-Carlos seemed to feel the same. When I turned 16, Juan-Carlos took me on holiday, I’m never gonna forget that week. I got a necklace with his name in it. Everything was perfect, like their relationship was, and the most important thing was, that they were together. I never thought it could go wrong.

Come up to meet you, tell you I'm sorry
You don't know how lovely you are

After 1 year bad times arrived, because I got depressive. The reason: I got transferred to another class, the girls in her class didn’t like her, because of Juan-Carlos. They were jealous at me, and they started teasing me, “you must be very rich because you have to pay Juan-Carlos allot of money to be seen with you,” at first I didn’t react, but after a couple of weeks, I could take it anymore. When they said that, she just said: “ah, well, you revealed my secret” but they didn’t take it. They got me by my weak point, my weight, I’m overweight, I don’t have so much of a problem with it, but I just don’t like it when someone talks about it. The teasing became worse, and I tried to ignore it, but I just couldn’t anymore. I started to take it personally, and stopped eating lunch, because no one could check that. When I got back from school, I was sad, but pretended to be okay.

Running in circles
Coming up tails
Heads on a silence apart

After a couple of weeks, Juan-Carlos started to notice that I’d changed. He noticed that I wasn’t the ‘Anne’ that he knew anymore. “You changed Anne, I don’t know how, but you just did, you’re not the Anne that I fell in love with.” “Juan-Carlos,” Anne tried, “I haven’t changed, maybe that I’m growing up.” “If growing up means losing the joy that you have in you, than you’re growing up yes, Anne where are you with your mind.” “You don’t know the half that’s going on in my mind, no one knows, and no one will ever know.” “Anne,” he begged, “let me be the first one then.” “No,” I shouted, “my mind is my mind, not yours.” Juan-Carlos came close, and placed his hands on my cheeks, “please, Anne, please.” I closed my eyes, “no, because there’s nothing wrong.” “There is something wrong, Anne, I feel it.” “Well,” as I pushed away my face from his hands, “you feel it wrong, now would you please leave, and if you don’t believe me, then don’t come back.” “Anne...” “Go!” Juan-Carlos walked away, and closed the door behind him. I sat down on my bed and cried.

Nobody said it was easy
Oh it's such a shame for us to part
Nobody said it was easy
No one ever said it would be so hard

From that time it only got worse, the teasing went on, from paying Juan-Carlos to be broke that I don’t have him as a boyfriend anymore. After a month that Juan-Carlos and me broke up, I couldn’t take it anymore, I stood in the middle of the schoolyard and just cried, and couldn’t stop. My mom came to pick me up, and I just told her everything, she would talk to our mentor.

Running in circles
Chasing our tails
Coming back as we are

After we got back, I went to Juan-Carlos and knocked on his door. Pimmy opened the door, I was stunned, Pimmy was the one who had brought me to state. “Who’s that?” Juan-Carlos yelled, “just an annoying bug,” Pimmy replied. “It’s me Juan-Carlos, Anne,” I said after I threw Pimmy a evil look, and Juan-Carlos came. “Oh, you met Pimmy, she one of my new students at the Academy.” “Oh, can I talk to you Juan-Carlos, alone.” Juan-Carlos walked out the door, and closed it behind. “Juan-Carlos, I want you to have this,” I gave the necklace with his name in it, “that necklace stands for what I feel for you, and now, I’m not that girl anymore, you were right, I have changed, and I want to go back, but I have to do this on my own, I’m sorry, but when I’m ready, I will tell you everything, I promise.” “Thank you Anne, I’ve lost you as my girlfriend, and I’m not gonna lose you as my friend, ever.” Anne smiled, and walked away.

Tell me your secrets
And nurse me your questions
Oh let's go back to the start

Sorry Pimmy to make u the bitch :P

sorry i havent written in a while...all the fasting is makin me tired...but Anne i LOVE write more soon.. ;)

thanks Titiana, tonight maybe another, when I finished studying science :@

I've got a question to everyone, do you like the lyrics between the pieces, or are there annoying?

i like da lyrics :D

see Anne I told you I knew I was going to be the bitch in the story... but you said no... anyway I like that a lot..
I hope your problem in the story is not the same in reality :( If a person's nice, I couldn't care less how they look.

sorry Pimmy at first I had a different idea in my head, but i thought of it last night, and yes I don't get picked on, I got picked on when I was little, I transferred schools for it, I still have something from that, and everything goes wrong that I'm very down and get suicidale attemps not that I do it, but I stood with a knife in my hands once, but I get out of the dip because of music and JC, I wanted to write a story about that....

no I'm telling you this cuz you don't know me in person, no-one really knows what is going on in my mind, I told one friend once (annabelle) but she pretty normal with it...

I think its really hard sometimes to understand why people feel the way they do... I mean I had a friend who was virtually *perfect* and yet she felt so alone that she seriously contemplated suicide... and another friend who was "normal" suffered with Anorexia...it was so sad to see her waste away and not be able to help... :(

Anne ~ I'm loving this new fan fic so far!

Amsterdam

Chapter Five: Everything's Not Lost

After a couple of weeks talking to a shirk, I got better, again she got transferred. But it still hurted, knowing that Pimmy and Juan-Carlos talked with each other, maybe telling Juan-Carlos things about her, that he wouldn’t like her anymore. That was my biggest fear, they talked. Sometimes when they were out in the garden, I watched them. They were having fun, and I hurted. sometimes Juan-Carlos noticed that I was watching, he would look up and smiled, but when he did that Pimmy always seem to do things to get his attention back.

When you thought it was over,
You could feel it all around,
And everybody's out to get you,
Don't you let it drag you down

Back at school, the problems didn’t fade away, they got littler but Pimmy seemed to get me. Telling all her friends, that she and Juan-Carlos had a thing. They always had that subject when they walked by me, speaking extra loud. I didn’t believe her, although they seemed pretty close. One day, I had enough, I just went over to talk to her. “So, Pimmy, if I can have a word with you, alone.” Pimmy walked with me, and I started to talk immediately. “What’s is going between you and Juan-Carlos, and I want the truth, and you can tell Juan-Carlos that I asked that, you can tell him that I’m jealous, I don’t care, I want the truth.” “Me and Juan-Carlos have an relationship, he’s totally over you, he wants me, only me.” That words struck me, he wants me, no, can’t be, no.

When you thought it was over,
You could feel it all around,
And everybody's out to get you,
Don't you let it drag you down

I banged on his door, till he opened. When I saw him, I started to cry. “Anne, what’s wrong?” “Are you and Pimmy together” I said between the tears. “Oh, Pimmy, you screwed up big time,” he mumbled, “Anne, me and Pimmy are not together, and will never be, I don’t want her.” “Then why is she telling everyone who wants to know that you and her have a ‘thing’ together?” “I don’t know, and I don’t want to know, you and I know the truth, that’s all that matters to me.” “You sound like a Boyzone song, Pimmy isn’t saying that for nothing, you must have done something that let her think that.” “Anne, I don’t know what I have done, I just practice with her, and give her pointers, she talks about you constantly, that you are so nice and stuff.” “Nice, out of her mouth, never, the only sentences with me in it that come out of her mouth are: ‘you have to pay Juan-Carlos to be your boyfriend and you must be broke because Juan-Carlos isn’t your boyfriend anymore’.” “She said that,” said Juan-Carlos with disbelief in his eyes. “Yes, you know how I got this depressed, she and her friends, always talking about us, and telling me that I’m fat, and that I’m lower than everyone in the world.” “Wait, wait,” Juan-Carlos trying to speak calmly, “she told you that, she was the reason that you got that depressed.” “Yes.” “Tell me, if you want to, what happened.” “Okay,” and I told him the whole story, felt like 100 pounds fell of my shoulder. After that talk, Anne and Juan-Carlos were friends again.

When I counted up my demons,
Saw there was one for every day,
With the good ones on my shoulders,
I drove the other ones away

After a week Juan-Carlos and Pimmy went to a tournament abroad, although Juan-Carlos and Pimmy had a fight about Anne, they had to go. I sat sobbing at home, Juan-Carlos was together with Pimmy again, till me despite. Apart from the fight about me, a subject which they both avoided, they still got along, I hated that. An half an hour after they left to the airport, I made my decision, I want Juan-Carlos, he’s mine. I left for the airport, with a quest, getting him back. When I arrived, I saw Pimmy and Juan-Carlos checking in. I yelled Juan-Carlos over, he was surprised. “Juan-Carlos, I can’t help it anymore, I have to tell you how I feel, I miss you, and I can’t take anymore, I want to be with you every second, every day, every year, will you give me a second chance?” Juan-Carlos smiled, “thought you’d never asked,” he gave me a kiss, “here I want you to have this again,” putted the necklace around her neck. I hugged him, and said him goodbye, my life was perfect again.

Come on yeah,
Oh yeah,
Come on yeah
Everything's not lost

cool! B) don't stop, okay?

heyyyyy i LOVE the lyrics in between. it sets the mood, kinda. don't remove it alright? :)

want more want more


p/s i just realised that Mackenzie is always his ex..hehhe weird

lol thought about that too Mackenzie's always an ex..
I hate myself.. I'm such a bitch.. I like the lyrics too so keep it there :)

I don't get the point of the fun of fanfic's
what's so cool?

:wacko:

Kaa maybe you should read again and you might get the point? If not I don't know why you don't get it.

Anne, it is very good I'm glad the story-Anne is happy again.

I get the point of the fic!
hell yeah..
but Why?
there are so many fic's
why is a fic so cool?
don't get that

Well I don't have any ambition to write one, so I'm not sure but probably it is a way to express yourself and provide enjoyment for the rest of us. I think they are cool because I like reading them.

thanks Mackenzie it's not over though

and kaa if you don't like fanfics don't read them, it's that simple

I absolutely haven't said that I don't like them
can't you just read? :rolleyes:

no, I can't read, that's no lie I allways skip words, I think I'm dyslectic (if you write that that way)

but anywayz I'm gonna make 2 endings one that can absoluty never happen just a very very very very crazy twist of mind, and one is normal

I can't wait!

Okay the chapter title is bad, but I just like the sentence :P

Amsterdam

Chapter Six: Life Is For Living

Juan-Carlos and Pimmy were away, they made up again. And they made a pretty good mixed doubles team, they decided that they would entered another tournament, which they a wild card for. Till Anne’ despite, but Pimmy got nicer to her. When they were back, Pimmy apologised, and she said that she was jealous that me. We made up, but it wasn’t friendship. They just said ‘hi’ when they saw each other. On the other hand, I was very happy with Juan-Carlos. I was more in love than ever.

So I wanna live, in a wooden house
I wanna live life, and always be true
I wanna live life, and be good to you

After 2 weeks Juan-Carlos and Pimmy had to leave again, for their tournament. I was left again at home, Juan-Carlos and me had a fight before, wasn’t a big one, we made up, but the wounds were still fresh. I didn’t like fighting with Juan-Carlos, he was the only one who knows to press my buttons without making me feel bad. I hate that he left like this, although he didn’t have another choice, it still sucked. When we said goodbye I felt so guilty. “Juan-Carlos?” “Yeah,” he replied, “I’m so sorry, about our fight, I don’t know what happen, but all I know is that still don’t feel happy, I’m sorry.” Juan-Carlos smiled, “I know have the same feeling, but you know what the best thing about a fight is,” I nodded no, “making up, and when I’m back, we’re going to do that plenty.” I smiled at him, and gave him a kiss, “now go, you need to catch a plane.” Juan-Carlos and Pimmy went away, I waved till there out of sight.

I want to live life, and never be cruel
I wanna live life, and be good to you

When I came home, I knew for sure, Juan-Carlos was the one I wanted to spend all my life with. He wasn’t going to hurt me, I never met someone like him, some who made feel like I could rule the world. I loved him, and I was going to tell him that, as soon as possible. I got all my savings, and booked to trip to the tournament Juan-Carlos was. I would leave tomorrow. Tomorrow, why does it always take so long to come.

So I want to live in a wooden house
Where making more friends would be easy
I wanna live where the sun comes out

I remember what Anne told me about this song, it has two sides. One that is literally and one that’s figure of speech. Figure of speech was that someone made you life perfect, because you cut me loose means gave you love or something. And literally it was suicide, suicide, no. Where, where, think Juan-Carlos where. Hers Anne’s voice: ‘if I would die, I want the die by the stars.’ Stars, there outside, where are you closed by the stars, the roof, yeah the roof.

And time is on your side
It's on your side now
Not pushing you down and all around
It's no cause for concern

When I got out of the plane, the taxi drove me to the hotel. I got out, and went to search for Juan-Carlos. Was easy, he was dining with Pimmy, I stood still for a second and watched them, I watched the man I loved and the man I want to spend all my life with. I closed my eyes for a second, and opened them. Pimmy and Juan-Carlos were kissing, that memory, I want to erase, but I just can’t. I stood up, and walked to the edge. Lifted one feet, and placed it on the edge. I closed my eyes, opened them again, and lifted myself up till I was at the edge. I felt the wind blowing near my face. I bended my knees, then I heard a big bang, “Anne, no!”

Stuck on the end of this ball and chain
And I'm on my way back down again
Stood on a bridge, tied to a noose
Sick to the stomach

YOU ARE EVIL!!!!! :P How could you leave off there?!?!?!? I guess I will quote you: WANT MORE!! (and fast!)

If you really jump... please don't come back and haunt me!!!!... but... hope he gets to you before you jump

I'm trying, but I'm gonna write the freaky ending at first and then the 'normal' ending............

okay this is the weird end, which can NEVER happen

there are no lyrics between them cuz I wanted to safe them for the 'normal' ending

you believe in ghosts, I do...

Amsterdam

Chapter Seven: Mom?!

I straighten myself, and stood still. “Why,” I asked, “why should I stop, you gave me paradise then brought me to hell.” “Anne, I so sorry, you don’t know how much, but let me explain.” “Why should I let you explain, I saw enough of explanation, now go, go to Pimmy cry you heart out, then make up with her,” I took a deep breath, “goodbye Juan-Carlos, and I love you, and I’m sorry than I was such a bother to you.” I bended my knees again and jumped.

“Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, Anne, I love you too” I yelled, I felt down and cried. I walked to the edge, and looked over, I didn’t see anything. “Juan-Carlos,” I heard, in a familiar voice, I looked behind me. Anne was laying there on the ground, with a person standing next to her, with a familiar face, she was transparent, but you could see her standing. Was it the one I longed for to come back, “mom” I asked. The woman nodded yes, “it’s me Juan-Carlos, Juan-Carlos you don’t have to beat of yourself every time you think of me, I know you love me and I love you.” “But mom,” I said, while she was fading away, “don’t worry Juan-Carlos, I’m always there, you just have to think.” She faded away, “mom, I love you” I whispered, and close my eyes, and prayed for everything to just like I wanted.

“Juan-Carlos?” “Anne, are you okay,” I asked while I lifted her up. “I am,” “come, let’s go to my room, I need to tell you something” I said while we walked away from the place I most hated but also most loved.

Anne sat down on my bed, and sat next down to her. “Anne,” I began, “I realised something today, I thought I missed something, that I would find it with Pim, but I didn’t, the one thing I need to find is you., only you, I don’t know what came in to me.” “I don’t know what to say Juan-Carlos,” Anne said, while she laid down, “the memory of you and Pimmy is still fresh, but on the other hand I didn’t something pretty stupid too, wait a minute, who did I get here anyway?” “Long story, I don’t think you would believe me anyway, but let’s say my mum thinks that you’re the one for me.” “Your mum?” Anne said with disbelief in her eyes. “Yes, Anne would you sit up, please, I need to tell you something, something important.” Anne sat up, and looked at me. “Anne, you made my life perfect, you are the thing I looked forward to see again when I come home. I wanted to say this to you long ago, I love you.” Anne smiled: “I love you too.”

You see never can happen, I got this idea from a So Weird episode. Where Fi meets her father for the first time after he saves her from fallen, her father is dead/ ghost.....

Amsterdam

Chapter Seven: Parachutes

Come on, oh my star is fading
And I see no chance of release
And I know I'm dead on the surface
But I am screaming underneath

“Anne please, come down.” I said to her, “please.” Anne just stared forward, and let out a little cry. “Anne, talk to me, please” I said when I stepped towards her. “Why,” she said quietly, while I could hear her cry. “I don’t know, we were talking, and one thing let to another.” “Why, Juan-Carlos, why” she said harder. “I, I just, she told me something.” “What, what did she told you” Anne was still not moving. “That you kissed with a guy from school, and that you didn’t want me anymore, and..”

You can say what you mean
But it won't change a thing
I'm sick of the secrets

“You believed that Juan-Carlos, you honestly do?” “At that moment yes, but you coming here, made me believe that I was wrong.” “Nice one Juan-Carlos, that you figured that out, all by yourself.” “Don’t talk like that Anne, just don’t.” Anne sighed, “Anne, you’re scaring me, you are, by standing there.” Anne cried, “I never meant that, I just want an end to all of this, I want an end to all the insecurity, I want you to be happy, even if that is with Pim.” I walked over till I stood behind her, “Anne, the only person that makes me happy is you.” Anne cried even more, “Why can’t I believe that.” “I understand, Anne, if I you decided to jump, please know that you made my life worth living.”

Stood on the edge, tied to the noose
And you came along and you cut me loose

Those words, they struck me, “you really mean that?” “From the bottom of my heart.” I reached out with my hands for Juan-Carlos, he holded my hand. “I got you,” he whispered, “and I’m never letting go.” I lifted my feet, tears were running down my face, and stepped down. I stood there, still wasn’t moving. “Anne, you okay” Juan-Carlos whispered in my ear. I turned over to him, looked at him, and cried. He rapped his arms around me, and said: “you’re going to be okay, I promise you.” He ran his fingers through my hair, and comforting me. I was shivering, and still crying. “Let’s go inside, Anne, you’re frozen.” I nodded.

You came along and you cut me loose
You came along and you cut me loose

They entered the room, Anne sad down on the bed. “Anne, are you okay?” Juan-Carlos asked worried. “I’m just tired.” “Go sleep then, you can stay here, I’ll go.” Juan-Carlos stood up, I grabbed his hand, “don’t go, please.” I pulled him down, and kissed him.

You came along and you cut me loose
You came along and you cut me loose

Last night was wonderful, Anne was still sleeping. When she woke up, I kissed her. “Anne, had a good night sleep?” She smiled, “you know that the best, you kept me up all night.” They kissed each other. “So do you have to play today?” “Yes, but I don’t want to.” “Why not?” “Tennis is an important factor in my life, but sometimes more important things matter. Like this, and I’m not going.” Anne gave me a kiss, I smiled to her “you know what, where going back to Spain.” “But what about Pimmy, as much as I don’t like her, it isn’t very nice.” “Sometimes, I’m evil.”

Here I am, and I'll take my time,

After they got out of the plane, “I’m going to tell my mom I’m back, and talk a little, so that takes about an hour.” Juan-Carlos smiled, “okay, are you coming over then, got a little surprise.” I smiled and give him a kiss, “see you then.” My mum was surprised what I’ve been doing. She was worried about me, but she know that Juan-Carlos could help her. After I went back to Juan-Carlos.

Here I am and I'll wait in line
Always

“Juan-Carlos you there” I yelled when I knocked on the door, from the house of Juan-Carlos. “It’s open,” Juan-Carlos yelled back, I walked in. “Hope you are hungry?” I walked to the dining room, the room was fully decorated with candles and flowers. My eyes speared wide open, “Juan-Carlos, it’s beautiful.” Juan-Carlos stood up and led her to her chair. “Now, let’s eat,” and they started.

In a haze, a stormy haze,

“I had a wonderful night, Juan-Carlos, I wish it could never end,” I said to him when he took the empty plates away. “Anne, I wanted to tell you this long before, but it never seem to happen.” He took my hands and pulled me up. “Anne, al thought the past was a hard, we managed to get through it, and it only made us stronger. I never felt something like this before, and I hope and know that it will never fade away. Anne, I love you.” I smiled, that where the most wonderful words ever, I gave Juan-Carlos a kiss. “Juan-Carlos, you’re the one who makes me happy, you’re the one that kept me for doing the must stupid thing of my life, and I’m grade full for that. You’re just the one, and Juan-Carlos I love you too.” Juan-Carlos kissed me, Juan-Carlos sat down on one knee. “Anne, there’s just one question that is left,” I smiled to him, and sat down myself, “in our relationship were equal to each other.” “Anne, will you marry me?” “Yes!”

I'll be around, I'll be loving you always,
Always

the first one was kinda freaky but I think it's good...
the second one... he proposed?!?!?! oh wow :) I like that well done Anne!!! sorry for being such a bitch :P

I like them both! The first one is a really cool idea, and the 2nd one is so sweet