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Title: Loss of Faith
Description: a poem


darkillusion - December 28, 2003 06:50 AM (GMT)
Clutching her sanity as he screams,
Relinquishing herself to this torment,
His words penetrating through her veins,
Leaving gaps and wounds in her punctured soul.

Distant cries of anguish,
She drowns in a mirage of hope,
Faith lost in the vast abysses of sorrow,
He watches her bliss dissolve like a burning cigarette.

Tears evaporate into abandoned heavens,
Voices echo through endless darkness,
Lurking behind heartless smiles,
Hiding beneath vacant eyes.

She falls into his wrath,
While he crucifies her against merciless hells,
She waits for the peace that will never come,
Finally the pain is gone, she’s died inside.
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This is the poem that's being published! :jumpy: Make sure to watch out for a book of poetry called "Eternal Portraits" which is coming out in Spring. Two of my poems will be in it! (Izzy or Isabella K.)

gaia1313 - December 31, 2003 02:33 AM (GMT)
thats really good!

KickBoxerGirl - December 31, 2003 02:42 AM (GMT)
wow! thats really amazing! you have a lot of talent

ilovedfargo - December 31, 2003 04:47 AM (GMT)
woah. that is like the best poem ever. really powerful.

Jake_Fan - January 2, 2004 04:33 PM (GMT)
That's a really good poem! I suck at poetry writting mostly all that stuff. Which sucks.




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