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Title: Diamond Mines
Description: new story


Raquel - October 28, 2004 02:00 AM (GMT)
hey this is my new story!

first non fearless one!

"They’re coming! Oh Good Anali they're coming!" Josh Shouted at me. I turned and listened; sure enough i could hear their feet pounding on the stair above us.
"Run. Go I'll hold them off!: He yelled again "Joshi I-" I started "GO!" he insisted cutting me off.
He threw his weight against the door at it was trying to be forced open. That was all the encouragement I needed to escape.
I looked around at the only window in the basement just above the ground, it would be hard but i could fit through the tiny space.
I hurried to it and ripped it open and clambered onto the windowsill slipping a few times due to my lack or height.
I shimmied through the window space, thanking god for my petite bone structure.
Just as I got through, I heard the basement door crash open. "I love you Josh." I yelled at I took off in the opposite direction.
If he replied I wouldn't have heard him. As I sprinted up the road I wondered if I would ever hear him again, it was highly unlikely.
It would take a miracle just for me to get home. HOME. At this thought a wave of homesickness washed over me. Three weeks ago, I'd never thought I'd be running like this. Three weeks ago, I was going on shopping sprees and getting my nails done with my friends every Friday. I'd go to a party every Saturday night. Three weeks ago I was like any other kid in West Beach California. Rich, spoiled, and ignorant. That was before Josh. Before the Ridgers. Before my families diamond mine company got me kidnapped.

Lady_Montone - October 28, 2004 06:27 AM (GMT)
Ohhhh goooood that was sooo good! I love it :D

fearless_shaz - October 28, 2004 11:41 AM (GMT)
ooooooooo kidnapped

hope413 - October 28, 2004 07:39 PM (GMT)
:lol:
More more more!

sydney78 - October 28, 2004 07:52 PM (GMT)
Hi! good starting chapter,go on.

Edroxmyworld - October 28, 2004 08:44 PM (GMT)
ooo i wanna read more!! write more hurry!!

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - October 28, 2004 09:53 PM (GMT)
You said you had more! lol, hehe more?

Lady_Montone - October 29, 2004 06:12 AM (GMT)
yeah..we want more! LOL!




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