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Title: ill try it out


Dark Angel - May 31, 2004 05:31 PM (GMT)
"GAIA!" jake was shouting and running at the same time. "GAIA!" he continued.
Gaia kept on walking down the street. She couldn't hear jake. And when she finally did, she stopped in front of an ally, and turned around. as she was about the wave, something from the ally came out and hit gaia in the head. she passed out. jake stopped dead in his tracks as the people of new york just passed him by, not noticing what just had happened. two men dressed in black suits came out and grabbed gaia and took her into the the ally. jake crepted up and looked down the ally to see what was going on. the two men threw gaia into a black van and got in with her. the car drove off. "gaias being kidnapped," jake thought as he ran after her.

ed looked up from his walking feet. he stopped. something was wrong with the picture that he was looking at. jake monotone, jockey prep of the school was running after a black van. jake stopped adn loooked around. cars behind him were honking for him to move. jake went over to a sidewalk and took a bike from the bike rack and started riding it. "what the hell is he doing?" ed thought. ed stopped in front of jake. "what the hell monotone?" ed asked. "youre stealing a bike, and you look like a complete idoit since it is a 12 year old's bike."
"move ed" jake shouted. ed kept staring at jake. "look your girlfriend is being kidnapped"
ed turned and looked at the van. "dammit, not again," and started running after it.

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 31, 2004 05:55 PM (GMT)
Ewww I Like I Like .. But Shes Not Eds Girlfriend .. Isn't She Jakes??

EdLuver - May 31, 2004 06:14 PM (GMT)
yes, but she changed it 4 this fan fic

i like it, i like the "damn it, not agian" thing at the end. that was funny. she got kidnapped in my fan fic, too.

Dark Angel - May 31, 2004 06:19 PM (GMT)
sry i forgot to say that this takes place when gaia going out with ed, and jake knows gaia

Dark Angel - May 31, 2004 08:45 PM (GMT)
As Ed was running after the black van and Jake was following on the little kids bike. "Are you serious Jake? You're getting slower riding that thing," Ed said behind his back. Jake stopped. Got off the bike and put it on the sidewalk. "You know Ed, the van is gone, traffic is screaming for you to move out of the middle of the road, I think we need a plan," Jake said. Ed stopped. He joined Jake on the sidewalk. "So what's your plan genius (sp?)?" Ed asked. "Well we can't be running in middle of the street looking like morons and chasing nothing," Jake replied.

Gaia woke up to a blindfold on her eyes. She heard voices from around her, and she can tell that they were moving. What happend? Gaia tried remembering but she remembered nothing. All she remember was walking and Jake calling her name continuesly(sp?) This is all she could come with. She was in a car, with two guys blindfolded. One guy was talking. "We got her."
No reply. "Well? What does he want now?" the second guy whispered.

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 31, 2004 10:36 PM (GMT)
WHAT DOES WHO WANT?!?!?! And Also I Like It .. And Yay!! Gaias With Eddy Boi!!

Dark Angel - May 31, 2004 10:56 PM (GMT)
lol, i figured out when to put this, right after 25, before 26, but tom isnt missing.

Dark Angel - May 31, 2004 11:26 PM (GMT)
"SSH!" The first guy ssshed the second guy. "Uh-huh, uh-huh. Ok. It will be done sir," The first guy said into the phone. There was a beep and then a click. "Well? What does your stupid asshole boss want to do with me?" Gaia thought. "Well?" The second guy went.

At Starbucks, Ed and Jake were at a table thinking of what to do. This is awkward. The guy I hate the most is sitting across the table from me. And we're trying think of a way to get my girlfriend back who was supposedlly kidnapped. "Are you sure she was kidnapped?" Ed asked. Jake looked up from his latte. "Yes I'm pretty sure. When someone knocks someone out and puts them in a car, its a pretty close bet that they're being kidnapped," Jake said. "The good thing is Gaia can take care of herself till we get to her. The question is who would take her. Loki is a vegetable...." Ed trailed off. "Who?" Jake asked. "Huh? Oh, nevermind."
"Look, Ed, if we want to find Gaia, you have to tell me who this 'Loki' is."
"Doesn't matter, the guy practically dead."
Jake just sighed.

Sam was sitting in the litte guest room which was a mess from all the food, books and magazines. Along with the bed, chair and mini television. He sighed. He was getting extremely bored. He's read almost every book that Gaia gave him to read, and he's finished every bite of food. And he was getting hungrey. When is Gaia gettting home? Is anyone even home right now? Sam got up from the lumpy chair and unlockd the door. He peeked through to make sure the coast was clear. He crept out and shut the door quietly. He looked in at every room to make sure no one was home. He went into the kitchen and opened the pantry. As he was looking for food, the key for the front door turned. Sam turned so he was facing the door. If I run now, I won't be able to make it back to the room, I'll be caught for sure. The door opened and in walked Tatiana.

EdLuver - June 1, 2004 02:32 AM (GMT)
cool, i like it.

fearless_shaz - June 1, 2004 10:05 AM (GMT)
oooooooh yeah its the part when sam returns.....oh please let them kiss please..........please just once

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 2, 2004 11:21 PM (GMT)
Lolz .. It Was Really Good .. I Havn't Answered To That One Yet Cause I Havn't Been On Lolz .. You Need To Continue Real Soon

Dark Angel - June 4, 2004 03:29 PM (GMT)
ive been tryign to for the last 3 days, but each time im in the middle of it, my comp screws and it gets deleted. so lets try again.

"He just wants us to get the other girl and leave," the first guy said.
Other Girl? "Fine let's get her and go. What if she wakes up? I don't want to be here when she does," the second guy said. So they're afraid of me Now that Gaia thought about it, the second guy's voice was pretty wimpy, and the other one was squeaky. Gaia struggled to get her hands free. She kept rubbing it aginst what she was leaning on. Finally, the rope broke free.

Tatania walked in and closed the door behind her. In her hands were about 5 gorcerery bags. Great Sam thought. Sam ducked under the counter like a little kid playing hide and go seek. Tatania's footsteps came closer and closer. And finally she was right in front of Sam. The front door knocked. NO! DAMN IT! Tatiana walked away from from the kitchen and to the front door. "Hi Ed," Tatania said. "And Jake."
Ed? Who the hell is Jake? "Come on in," Tatania said. No, no inviting them in. More footsteps were in the living room.

"Its 10 at night. Why are you here?" Tatiana asked. "You know where Gaia is?" Ed asked. "Do I ever?" Tatania replied. Ed and Jake groaned. "Why? What's wrong?"
"Did she say she was going anywhere in particular today?" Jake asked. "Guys, what's wrong with Gaia?"
Now Tatania was getting worried. "She's missing," Jake said. "More like kidnapped," Ed Corrected Jake. "WHAT?" Tatania screamed. "I have to tell my mom."
"No Tatania, you can't. Let's keep this for ourselves for a while." Ed said. "What? No!" she yelled. "She is missing, and her Dad's in the hospital and is a vegetable like her Uncle. SHE CAN'T BE MISSING!"
"What's up with her uncle? Is he 'Loki'?" Jake asked. "Jake, please just shut up." Ed said.

SAM-
How could she be missing? Loki's in a coma? Great! Wait, so is her father. I knew that. WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON! Even I don't know. If Loki's practically dead, who would take Gaia? Is she not telling me something? Who kidnapped her? Where would they take her? Why don't I know anything?

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 4, 2004 05:13 PM (GMT)
Oh Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho!! I Like It Soooo Much!! Who Took Her?!?!? I Need To Kno!!!

EdLuver - June 4, 2004 09:12 PM (GMT)
lovin it. going insane.

Dark Angel - June 4, 2004 09:25 PM (GMT)
glad you like it, writers block

EdLuver - June 4, 2004 11:44 PM (GMT)
die writers block! DIE!!!

Dark Angel - June 5, 2004 12:57 PM (GMT)
lol, i have too mnay fan fics and stories to write going on, and fearless is near the bottom at the moment, so ill try to write it as soon as writers block go away

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 8, 2004 08:21 PM (GMT)
Pwoor Yew .. Writers Bwocky Cwan Kwill! Lolz .. Why Must I Always Be So hyper?

Dark Angel - June 8, 2004 10:23 PM (GMT)
i love it when youre hyper! anyways, i have 2 fan fic, 1 story and 2 fan fics to type up and finish off. im getting there,

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 8, 2004 10:39 PM (GMT)
Are You Going To Post ur Fan Fiocs And Stories On Here???? Cause We Need More .. I Never Have Enough Stories To Read :( Dunt You Feel Bad For Me .. Little April Sitting There With No Stories To Read .. Shes Dying With Bordom And Ur Just Sitting There Not Writing Storys On FF :( Poor Little April

Dark Angel - June 8, 2004 11:37 PM (GMT)
lol, only one of them is about fearless and im trying to get rid of writers block, i usually pull through when i have so no worries

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 9, 2004 12:09 AM (GMT)
Okay Okay .. But What About Ur Story?? Are You Gonna Post That One?

Dark Angel - June 11, 2004 12:23 AM (GMT)
yes and im really trying to pull thorugh ok, ill give it another shot. ill wing it.

Gaia removed her hands from the rope and took off her blindfold. She sqeezed her two kidnappers on the shoulders so that they pass out. She was right. Both were incredibably pale and skinny. She snickerd opened the doors jumped off and the car drove off. I'm not far from home.

"What? Who the hell is Loki? He might as well be the one behind this," Jake said. "It doesn't matter. He is dead. Dead. Gone," Ed lied. "Oh, well why didn't you just say that?" Jake said. Tatania and Ed groaned. "Do you think he could have planned ahead before he 'died'?" Tatiana asked looking at Ed. He just shrugged. "Knowing him, hell ya," Ed said.

Jake-
WHO THE HELL IS LOKI? What are these two not telling me? I'm trying to find Ed's girlfriend and he's not telling me anything. Personally, no in reality, Ed doesn't deserve Gaia. Not now, not ever.


EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 11, 2004 01:20 AM (GMT)
*Cries* He Deserves her Plenty!!! She Doesn't Deserve Him!!! Grrr :angry:

Dark Angel - June 12, 2004 08:24 PM (GMT)
lol, i dunno, i made jake kinda look like a ditz, at least i tried to. did it wokr?

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 13, 2004 01:19 AM (GMT)
Lolz .. Sorta .. I Guess Ye

Dark Angel - June 13, 2004 02:43 AM (GMT)
lol, looks like it didnt. sigh writers block. why is there such thing as writer block? it needs TO DIE cuz of 3 stories that im writing, EVERY SINGLE ONE i have writiers block. GOD! anyways, you gave hanna some great ideas any for me?

Dark Angel - June 13, 2004 07:45 PM (GMT)
Gaia walked up the stairs of her apartment. She stopped in front of her door which was half opened. She peeked in and heard three voices. Ed, Jake and Tatania. "So it COULD be Loki?" Jake asked. "SHUT UP JAKE!" Ed screamed. Wait, what could Loki do? She kept listening. "Fine if you're not going to tell me, I'm going to find out things on my own," Jake said.

He opened the front door. Damn boyfriend doesn't deserve Gaia. What the hell does Gaia see in him? He stared out the door. There was standing Gaia safe. Ed came up and so did Tatania. "Are you OK? Do you know who kidnapped you?" Tatania asked. "What? I wasn't kidnapped." Gaia said. "What? I saw you get knocked out and get put into a black van" Jake said. "Uh, no," Gaia said. "Jake you idiot, you made us worry and think for no reason," Ed said. "Gee Ed, didn't know you could think," Jake said and he stormed off.

Gaia-
Can't let them know I was kidnapped. They'd worry too much then. But was it Loki? And who was the other girl?

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 13, 2004 08:19 PM (GMT)
That Was Really Good .. And I Gave Hanna Good Ideas?? All Those Ideas I Was Just Kidding .. Although I Wasn't At The Same Time .. Lolz .. But That Was Really Good .. Write More Today!

Dark Angel - June 13, 2004 08:36 PM (GMT)
lol, then give me ideas jokinly :lol:

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 13, 2004 09:48 PM (GMT)
I'll Give Ye The Exact Same Ones I Gave To Hanna .. You Could Make Gaia And Ed Kiss Again? You Could hmmm .. Make Ed And Gaia Kiss Again? You Could Make Gaia Moore And Ed Fargo Kiss Again? You Could Make Ed Fargo And Gaia Moore Kiss Again? You Could Make Edward Fargo And Gaia Moore Kiss Again?

Dark Angel - June 13, 2004 09:49 PM (GMT)
lol niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 13, 2004 10:23 PM (GMT)
:D I Am So Smart S-M-R-T I Am So Smart S-M-R-T!!!

Edroxmyworld - June 13, 2004 10:47 PM (GMT)
lol dude im lovin it (mcdonalds theme song) its great keep writing
and i really like the whole ed/gaia thing it really works and yes ed totally deserves her

Dark Angel - June 15, 2004 12:50 AM (GMT)
lol thanks, and yes i agree, he does deserve her luckily theyre going out at the pont

Dark Angel - June 16, 2004 09:28 PM (GMT)
i picked out who the other girl is, but i dont know how im going to bring it in on how they kidnap her...its going tobe while shes sleeping

Dark Angel - June 16, 2004 10:40 PM (GMT)
making wishes come true, for shaz, ill try to make sam and gaia kiss, at hte very least get closer, and for all FOE's ill make em kiss but it wont be a big deal cuz they ARE going out.

Dark Angel - June 16, 2004 10:44 PM (GMT)
Ed hugged Gaia and kissed her on the cheek. "I better be going, its like what 1 am?"
Gaia smiled and waved as he walked out the door. Tatania went for her room and Gaia went for the kitchen. She noticed Sam on the floor. She quickly kneeled down and whispered, "Sam, what the hell are you doing here? What if someone sees you?"
"Sorry Gaia, I was hungrey and I've been sitting here for an hour." he said.

sry wish i could cont, but i gg eat. ill finish it laterz

Dark Angel - June 17, 2004 01:48 AM (GMT)
"God, what happened? Who kidnapped you," Sam asked. "Gaia, are you talking to youreself," Tatania called out from her room. Gaia looked down the hall. Damn her door's open "Uh, no. On the phone," Gaia shouted back. "C'mon," she whispered and pulled Sam's arm back into the storage and shut the door quietly behind her. "Are you nuts?" Gaia said. "Sorry, no one was home, I read every book, nothing was on TV and I was hungrey, so I went out to get some food. No one caught me, chill will ya?"
"Well, what if someone did catch you?" Gaia said.
"No one did."
Gaia sighed. "Luckily."
"So, was what Jake said true? Were you kidnapped?"
"Acutally yes I was, but I can't let them know. If Ed or Jake or maybe even Tatania found out, then well they'd start asking me all these questions and be everywhere I am."
"You know who it was?"
"No. But they're after someone else. I have to find out who it is.
They heard a scream. "Tatania!" Gaia shouted and opened the door ran down the hallway and into their room. She was gone and the window was open. Gaia leaned out the window and down the alley. Two guys threw Tatania into the same black van Gaia was in earlier. And it was the same two guys. "Damn it. Looks like we found out who the other girl was."
Gaia jumped out the window and onto the fire escape. The van started driving away. "Sam, stay here, Natasha won't be home till morning so you have the place to yourself. Look around the house for clues," Gaia said as she started running down the fire escape.

EdFargosDehSweetie!! - June 19, 2004 02:12 PM (GMT)
That Was Real Good!! But You Really Should Include Some Purple Sheets Lolz .. Not Just A Kiss .. Like Hmmm They Should Be About To Do THAT But Then Something Happens!!! Lolz Sorry! Hyperness Has Just Hit!




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