Title: just an idea
Description: i wrote it a long time ago
EdLuver - May 8, 2004 01:50 AM (GMT)
ok, so i wrote this while i was still on #29 so its a little outa date...but here u go....i never named it.... :unsure: oh, and it will seem like it is at an ed fan perspective, because it talks about gaia and ed, but i never finished it, and i was gonna finish it with jake and gaia, so please stay with me jake and sam fans, cause there are parts u will like... i think....
GAIA---
Mary Moss
Ella Niven
George Niven
Sam Moon----But he's back
Katia Moore
That's my death list. All the people that died because of ME. I'm a murderer. Oliver said that he doesn't desevere to live, that HE killed them all, (with the exception of Ella, that was soley me) but no. No, he shouldn't die. I should. I should go to Hell. Before i kill Jake. Before i kill Ed. Before i kill Sam--agian.And my mother, i miss her so much, but I killed her, sure Loki pulled the trigger, but it was still my fault. this goddamn fear gene. God, i wish i could just start over, this time with fear. that would be a miracle. to bad miracles don't happen in my world.
GRIMACE---
Ed Fargo sat with Kia on the front step of the school, drinking coffee. Kia thought he was being sweet by buying her coffee and doughnuts, but really Ed was secretly waiting for Gaia Moore to come out from her afternoon karate session with Jake Monotone. rrggg....what DOES she see in him??? Ed thought.Right then Gaia walked out, bright red from exercise. At first Ed was jealous of Jake, but then he saw that beautiful grimace she gave him. It was a sight for sore eyes, that is untill he realized he'd been staring at Gaia, and ignoring Kia.
"HEY!!! Have you been listening at all, Fargo?!" Kia yelled into his ear.
"What? Oh...I'm so sorry Kia...but" He sighed, "I gotta go. I'll see ya later, ok? uhh...call me and we'll hang out tomorrow, k?"
"um...ok. ya, great, tomorrow, uhh...Lates'"
He kissed her quickly on the lips. And THAT's when Gaia looked at him.
"I..I...i gotta go Jake. See ya." she said, her eyes plastered on Kia.
"yeah, i'll see ya tommorrow, 3:00, for the karate meet, We'll kick their asses! Later" He said with a smile, glancing shortly at Ed. Gaia walked down the steps trying despritly to ignore Kia and Ed. Ed knocked into her shoulder, forcing her to look at him.
"Uh. i..." Gaia stamered, then started to walk away
"wait" Ed said grabbing her arm. but Ed had no clue what he was going to say. wing it, just dont screw up your one and probably only chance fargo! he yelled at himself.
"yes" she said, still not looking up at him.
"I....I"
"I don't have all day, what do you want?" she said, with the Gaia Grimace now back on her face.
"I..I just wanted to say that I....I kissed Tatania. and that i think its ok that you hugged sam but its just that you lied to me for--"
"wait" she inturupted, "you kissed Tatania? When? ohmigod, Ed not when we were still... Ed how could you?" she said, her jaw trembling. ok....wait a minute!! wait one freaking minute here, what the hell is she mad about, one freaking kiss? she told me her "ex-boyfriend" was DEAD then i find them hugging in a private room that no one knows about! and I'M the bad guy?!?!?! he thought wide-eyed.
"what the fuck!" he screamed "while you were hugging it up with your supposedly dead ex-boyfriend i kissed a girl!!! big whoop! what is your freaking problem?! huh? huh?!" he screamed at her, watching her cry with the realization that he was yelling at her. really yelling. Ed, with her arm still in grasp, pushed her away and ran over to Kia, he mumbled something to Kia and they left, going to her house.
Jake walked over to Gaia and put his arm around her.
"It's ok, Gaia" he started, trying to reasure her, "Ed..He's weird, and you'll get over it if it really wasn't meant to be.you'll get over that stud. ok? you cool? i've never actaully seen you cry but..."
"I'm not crying!" she maneged, "and i won't get over him, because there is nothing to get over." she threw his arm off of her shoulder and trugged away, keeping her coat about as close to her body as possible. Jake walked in the oppisite direction, suddenly finding himself a bit jeaslous of Ed, Jake knew that Ed was the one Gaia loved, that he would never be able to have Gaia because Ed would always be in the way.
KIA AGIAN---
Ed dragged Kia to her house, running all 5 blocks with their skateboards under their arms.
"Why are you doing this Ed?" she yelled at him, 3 steps behind him, " Why are you running? who-who was that girl? someone i should know about? I-"
"shhh" he inturupted, then he stopped dead in his tracks,"remember when u said u wanted to talk? but i...i ran out the door and---"
"yeah Ed, what about it?"
"i want to make up for it, i really care about you, and that girl...she doesn't matter. i don't care about her! she can go to hell for all i care." he said with a smile.
"and...should i be happy about this?"
"well....yes, i...i care about you! not her..you."
"and" she pushed
"and what?"
"and....that was sopposed to be the time when you say 'i love you' you know..." she nugged his shoulder, "your sopposed to say ' i care about you...i love you' and i'm sopposed to say 'oh, Ed, i love you too' haven't you seen all those stupid mushy love movies? get with the time Eddy"
"sorry i haven't seen all those stupid mushy love movies 'cuzz they are...stupid and...mushy and......love stories."
"Ed" she giggled with a light slap to his shoulder. They went into her house and Kia, now dragging Ed, ran upstairs and plopped on her bed.
"So, you wanna make up for last time,huh boy?" she paused "well then" she jumped off of the bed and flung the covers around him, wrapping him with her hands in a friendly embrace "COME AND GET ME" she laughed wildley and she fell on the bed, causing him to fall beside her. She continued to laugh, and it was contagios, soon Ed found himself wrapped in covers and Kia. wow, a girl who fogives instead of runs away. i could get used to this. maybe. ed thought.
ED---
ok...i'm utterly confused now. Kia is great. no, more than great, she is amazing! But Gaia.....i have no clue what the hell Gaia is. i could tell that she was really hurt today but for some reason i just had to tell her off. i had to...i dunno... get it off my chest. Like that saying, "what is better: a lie that draws a smile, or a truth that draws a tear" she cried. she cried and...as much as i wanted to hold her in my arms and tell her i'm an idiot, i couldn't, because i know the truth, and truth is that it's not my fault. that's the other reason why i think she cried, because she knew what i was saying was right. But if i know that i'm right, if i'm this sure that i spoke the truth, then......why dont i feel right?
BROOKLYN---
i'm finnally FREE Sam Moon thought while he was sipping coffee at the local Starbucks, i'm FREEEEEEEEEEEEE, i'm free of Gaia, free of Ed's jealousy, free of Tatania, free of Loki's men, free of suspistion, free of living a life on the run, and free of Manhatten. Brooklyn is amazing! ok, no, it's not. i don't feel right, i hate finding myself wondering if Gaia has been captured, did she save her father? is she still alive? i hope i can see----
"YO, Moon man! Whats up?" Sam heard from behind him, sending his thoughts to a screeching hault. He whipped around. Derik. Derik, his new roommate in his "getaway" place called Brooklyn.Derik, ugh.
"oh, hey Derik. notin here, whats up with you man?" he said, trying to keep that fake smile plastered on his face.
"scored tickets to that concert! waaaaa-hooo" Derik yelled.
"seriosly? dude! wait...what concert?" he asked, confused.
"it's a suprise, but i tracked down a girl for you to go with. so... you up for a little blind date? huh Sammy"
That struck something in Sam's nerves. Sammy? oh-no, Josh Kendall. He was evil, that Josh, and Josh had a habbit of calling Sam "Sammy" just to tick Sam off.
"ok. one, never, NEVER call me 'Sammy' and two......i'm not confortable with 'blind' anything, espechilly with girls"
"o come on, Moon Man! it'll be fun!!!" Derik lightly punched his arm, "i swear! dude, you'll have fun, ok?! come on, what do you got to lose?"
Actually, he had a point there, Sam didn't have anything to lose. So why not....
"sure, ok, i'll go." Sam said, this time with a semi-real smile.
CONFUSED---
Gaia Moore trudged down the street, tword Washington Square Park. She didn't cry. Why would she cry? Her ex-boyfriend Ed Fargo-nicest-guy-on-earth just yelled at her. She rejected Jake, when she really wanted to collaspe into his arms. Her life sucked beyond belief, but really, why would she cry. ok, she cried, and cried, and cried, and ran away. she wanted to go to...she didnt know where she wanted to go, Brooklyn, to see Sam, sure, she could get on a subway, get followed by spys, confide in Sam, Sam would kick her out, she would leave, Spy would kill Sam. perfect. Sam. Dead. AGIAN. What was a girl to do in this situation? was there a pampflet "troubled teens with troubling problems", or maybe "Being Fearless, For Dummies"?
God was she ever confused. If someone were taking notes on her life it would be like this:
Gaia Moore: Fearless Freak, mother dies by uncle, moves in with psycho-maniacs, boyfriend dies, new boyfriend,moves in with new psycho-maniacs,dead boyfriend comes back, new guy, psycho-maniacs try to kill her, uncle is a veggie,uncle is no longer veggie, also no longer evil,she finds daddy, daddy trys to kill uncle, and the rest would be blah, blah, blah. so practicly her life was blah blah blahs. blah blah blahs and confusion. Maybe she should become a super hero, No Fear, Fearless Freak is here! like that would sell. while she was pondering this,she had somehow already went to Ed's house, and rang up his apartment, before she even noticed where she was.
"morning Ms. Moore, how are you?" the polite doorman said with a smile.
no answer, she rang the bell.
"Ahhh, seeing Mr. Fargo, are you, i haven't seen you visit him in a while, trouble in high-school paradise?"
"What? Where-- ohmigod! Mr. Campbell....I...Wait..how long have i been here--"
"Hello?" a voice came from the speaker box. Mrs. Fargo. Ed's mom was home. shit.
"Hello, Ms. Fargo, Ms. Moore is here to see Edward, is he home?"
"uhh.... no, Gaia? Your here? wow.We haven't seen you in a while, come on up and wait for Ed to come back, he shouldn't be long."
"I...I c..." wait. what have i got to lose, being yelled at agian? so what, this time i'll sopport my case, heck, i need to get yelled at until i get the point!
"Gaia?"
"Yes, i'll come up and wait for him." she said, hoping, though, that he wouldn't yell.
OH. SHIT. GAIA.---
Ed felt much better now. He'd forgotten about Gaia, forgotten he once loved her, well, not entirly, but Kia was great, so...who needed Gaia anyway?
"Who needs Gaia anyway?" he whispered, "who needs Gaia anyway?!?!?" he yelled into the evening sky.
He walked up to his apartment, and gave Mr. Campbell, the doorman, a smile.
"well, hello, Mr. Fargo!"
"I told you, Mr. Campbell, it's Ed, not "mr. fargo", and not "edward", Ed" he answered, with a huge grin on.
"Sorry, Edwar---Ed. how are you?"
"aaahhhhh, great! Best ever!! why??"
"there is a young lady in your apartment here to see you."
"a lady, did you recognize her?"
"if i didnt recognize her, i wouldn't have let her in, Ed."
"i mean, who was she?"
"Why, it was the very Ms. moore!"
Oh.Shit.Gaia. well, who was he expecting, some Playboy Bunny, yeah. right.
He walked into his elevator, pressed the number, and watched the numbers change.
"gaia, gaia,gaia,gaia,gaia, when i walk in, she going to punch me in the face. Damn it, i should have stayed at Kia's house." he whispered as he went up. He heard a small, "Ding" from the elavator.Shit. Judgement day has come. He slid the key in slowly, turned it, and opened the door. he walked to the living room, and opened that door.
"Where is Gaia Moore?" He yelled as he barged in.
"Ed!" his mom yelled with suprise and glee.
"i'm over here, Ed" Gaia said, boringly.
He stuck his finger in her face, "Wha--what the hell are you doing in my house?" here comes the punching he thought.
"I..I just wanted to say" she moved his finger out of her face "I just wanted to say....You...." she got quieter"You were right." she whispered. barly a whisper. she swallowed, it looked liked she was expected the punch.
"I...What did you say?" he asked, not sure what he heard.
she was getting a bit teary-eyed now, "i said... i think you were right when you yelled at me, every word was right. and...i deserved it,too. I'm...I'm sorry Ed. i really am. but my life...it's so...confusing" she was crying fully now, "i wish i could just....dye...here and now. please kill me, Ed"
"What? no. doesnt matter. Your sorry, that's a first." He laughed.
"oh,sure, i go into my confession/depression faze and you laugh at me? thats great, Ed, reeeeeaal great."
"no,no, its not that, i was laughing because, when i walked in....I expected you to punch me square in the face.looks like the tables have turned, shows how smart i am right?"
He laughed agian. She laughed.
"I really should not be laughing... but..." she laughed more.
He slapped her."OWW, what the hell was that for?!" "hey, you wanted me to kill you, right?"
He tackled her. now,this was weird. Gaia acting remotly normal. wow. only she didnt.
Instead of now wrestling with him, amature play wrestling, she flipped him on his stomach, grabbed his arm back, twisted it, and planted her foot on his back.
"Heeeeeeyyyy, no faaaiiiiirrrrrrr,Gaiaaaaaa, get off, i caaaannn't breeeeeath!"
"I'm sorry, Edward, But this is not going to be some mushy get-back-together thing. You broke up with me, It's over." she said, matter-of-factly.
"uhhhh, I knooooow thaaaaat! now get offfffff!!!!" He whined. She lifted her foot, and as Ed got up he could see gaia rolling her eyes.
"I didn't even do it that hard. It shouldn't have hurt you that much." she said, agian, matter-of-factly.
"Yeah, well, it knocked the breath out of me, that's all. now, is that all you came here for, because, frankly, my dear, i don't give a damn about your little apolageze." He said.
"that's lovely, but,no, that's not all i came here for. I want to get to know that skater girl you were hanging out with. she, in what i've seen, reminds me a bit of ...." she trailed off, but Ed knew the rest, she reminds her of Mary, Mary Moss.
SHAME---
Gaia and Ed lay on the floor of his living room, ever since she mentioned Mary, they have just been laying there, not saying anything, not doing anything, not moving, nothing. Ed wanted to say something, he just didn't know what to say.
"So.... why don't you and Kia meet...she's umm....curios about you to."
"Kia, that's her name? cool. yeah, i guess i'll meet her" she said, turning to face him.
"yeah" he sighed. For some reason he felt shame because he didn't want Gaia to meet Kia, because if they liked each other, if they started hanging out, he would have to hang out with his ex-girlfriend, and his new girlfriend, and he loved them both, but he didn't want to. He looked away from Gaia and up at the ceiling.
"Gaia?"
"huh?"
"well....never mind. it's not important."
"ok"
He wanted to tell her that he missed her, but he couldn't. He couldn't. More shame. He could feel her confused eyes staring at him. He turned toward her,
"i'm sorry." he said.
"What? wait...why are you sorry?" she asked, still confused.
"I'm sorry that i kissed Tatania, and i'm sorry that i broke up with you, and i'm sorry i didn't trust you. I'm sorry for everything" he said. yes,good, finally, everything is normal. everything is better now, i said i'm sorry, relax, i can relax He thought. She smiled. He started to laugh.
"What are you laughing at now?" she asked.
"you, you smiled, i haven't seen you smile since....." he stopped talking, they weren't going to remember, remembering is bad. He knew that from experience, when Gaia remembers, she runs away from him.
"yeah well.." she said, then she got up from the floor."I should be going."
stupid Ed, stupid! he thought."what? wait..why? Why do you always have to go off to some mysterios thing you never tell me about? Gaia, please, just once, be normall, tell me your problems." He pleaded.
"no, you don't need to be involved, it's to dangerous to be involved, Edward."
"Edward????" he asked, "I heard you and Jake talking about your dad, why will you tell him but not me?" He added.
"What? no,never mind, goodbye."
"Gaia, no, wait!" he grabbed her arm firmley.
"what do you want Ed?"
"please, just give me something, a hint to what the hell is going on, please" He asked. He pulled her down to the floor agian.
"Ed ple--"
"no, do you remember back when i said i love you?"
"What? Ed please..."
"do you?" he pushed.
"yes, Ed, yes, i remember,ok?" she answered, rolling her eyes.
"well, then you know you can trust me!"
"that makes no sense! you don't love me anymore!"
"but did Jake tell you he loves you?"
"no" she answered, crossly
"Well, there you go, he didn't tell you, i did, I trusted you enough to tell you, but does he?"
"he doesn't love me"
"your so nieve! Of course he does, no guy in their right mind wouldn't! He told me he loves you, but he didn't tell you." He yelled at her.she stared at him.
"He...he does?"
"DAMN IT!" he yelled
"he loves me?"
"DUH!!!! and this was the point, he didn't tell you, i did, you should know by now that you can trust me, Gaia, please, trust me!"
"fine" she said, then, she spilled, she spilled her entire life story, but then, before Ed even noticed, she was out the door.
BAD---
"Damn it, damn it, damn it, damn it, damn it, this is bad, this is bad this is bad..." Gaia Moore mumbled as she ran back to her father's house.
"this is not good...." she continued as she went inside.
"Hi...what's not good? Gaia?" Tom Moore asked her in suprise.
"what? oh, hi dad. umm, i kind of told Ed Fargo, you know Ed, right?"
"yeah. how is he doing" he asked suspiciosly
"he's doing pretty good. but,dad, i told him practicly my life story! I had to tell someone, i was bottled up so much.."she continued to babble on,but tom was no longer listning.
"did you tell him, everything?" he managed
"Dad, no, of course not." she assured him.
"ok,good, but this makes him a huge target for Loki, you know."
"DAD!!! Loki doesn't exist anymore, Oliver is my uncle and he's changed. I know he's changed."
"mmmm, well no matter, you still have someone after you,and i'm trying to find out who."
"ok,dad"
Tom Moore sat down on a chair beside the kitchen table. Gaia pulled up a chair across from him. He was looking at piles of papers on the table, she was looking at him.
"have you slept at all?"
"since when?"
"since...last week?"
"no"
"dad!!!" she yelled, "you need to get your energy back, you were held at that prison for weeks"
He didn't say anything, silence over came the room.
"i'm going back to Ed's house, i have to tell him something"
"not that-"
"NO!"
"ok, have fun"
"yeah, right" she mumbled, and went out the door.
so wat do u think? :unsure:
Dark Angel - May 8, 2004 03:03 AM (GMT)
what does she want to tell him? WHAT THE HELL HANNA! are you TRYING to torture me? first you make me fall in love with sam, then jake, then ed then sam again, and then you make me HATE jake, and then you mkae me fall in love with ed, sam, AND JAKE! sry, i had to let that out. you already know cuz i told you. but now, things are more cunfusing cuz im not caught up to where you guys are, so now, i dont know who to choose/
Dark Angel - May 8, 2004 03:04 AM (GMT)
buts its a good story. i like it
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 8, 2004 03:37 AM (GMT)
That Was Amazing .. You Have To Finish It!!! .. All The Stories I've Read Are From Either Jake Or Sam Fans .. Buh To Finally Hear One From A Ed Fan Is Great!!! YAY FOR HANNA!!! But You Have To Finiah It .. What Does She Want To Tell Ed?!?!?! :jumpy: CONTINUE!!!
xoxo
April
Dark Angel - May 8, 2004 12:10 PM (GMT)
EdLuver - May 8, 2004 03:52 PM (GMT)
crap, i dunno how 2 continue it! uhh. ok..ill wing it!
OOPS---
Ed called up kia and told her how Gaia wanted to meet her.
"and this Gaia, you say she's nice? but she's still your ex, ed"
"i know, but just meet her, you said you where curios."
"i didnt use those exact words..."
"whatever, just meet her, please?"
"yes, ok, but if she acts jealous or--"
"KIA"
"sorry"
"gotta go, someone is at the door."
"bye"
Ed got off the phone and opened the door, it was Gaia, agian.
"hi Ed.." she said, in a bored tone.
"uhh...hi. why are you back here agian" he asked confused
"I forgot to tell you something." she wouldn't look at him.
"ok...." he tilted his head so that he could see her face.
"you told me to trust you. i never did. im sorry." She said, then she turned around
"what? Gaia, wait, dont leave yet, kia is coming over, you wanna meet her, right?"
"sure..." gaia said sadly, they went into his living room and sat on his couch.
"so, what do you mean you never trusted me?" he asked
" you really dont wanna know. its a long story."
"no, tell me."
"you would never believe me..." she glanced up at him.
"tell me!" he urged.
she sighed. "i cant."
"why not? no more mystery, right, lik i said before, i trusted you, so please, you gotta trust me."
Dark Angel - May 8, 2004 05:31 PM (GMT)
EdLuver - May 8, 2004 07:47 PM (GMT)
i feel loved. ok...umm, agian wingin it, here u go:
Gaia got up from his couch, "lets just say, i cant tell you, for....life and death reasons. please beleive me, i'm not trying to torture you, i just cant tell you, but i promise, you will know my secrets, eventually."
"eventually?" ed whined
" i like you ed. trust me when i say, dont trust me."
"you like me?" ed pressed
"ed, shut up. for once, just shut up. your my.......friend" it seemed like it was hard to say the word friend.
she grabbed her coat.
"wait, kia's not here yet"
"give her my sympathys, raincheck!" she said, bowing
she laughed, he laughed.
gaia reached for the door nob, but it turned in her hand. the door opened, and in stepped Kia.
"is that her" gaia mouthed to ed, pointing to her.
ed smiled and nodded.
"hi ed!" kia said, "and...you must be...Gay-uh"
gaia rolled her eyes and said "you got a smart one here, Edward."
Kia smiled proudly and gaia walked out the door, closing it loudly.
EdLuver - May 8, 2004 08:14 PM (GMT)
when gaia left kia sat beside ed on the couch, and rested her head on his shoulder.
"she seems nice" kia said
ed couldnt help but laugh a little
"whats wrong? why are you laughing?" she said
"nothing its just, her name is pronounced guy-uh."
"o. oops." she giggled slightly "well how was i sopposed to know that? its such a weird name. what KIND of name is gaia anyway?" she asked
"never mind, kia, wanna watch a movie?"
"sure."
EdLuver - May 8, 2004 08:15 PM (GMT)
YAY!!! MY 600TH POST!!! I FEEL SPECIAL, GO ME! :D lol
Raquel - May 8, 2004 08:19 PM (GMT)
i really like it but we need more jake!! please post more! if u do i'll add more to what now
totallyscamed - May 8, 2004 09:14 PM (GMT)
ya know what wpuld be really great, but sounds bad? if gaia's life still sucked ass. i mean come on. it was a whole lot better when she was miserable *and when she was still friends w/ ed*
Dark Angel - May 9, 2004 03:08 AM (GMT)
lol. it was more intense, when her life sucked
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 9, 2004 05:43 AM (GMT)
Just Keep Writing .. I Really Hate It When I'm Reading Someones Story And Then They Just Stop :( .. It Makes Me Sad Lolz .. But I Really Like Ur Story .. More Ed :drool1:
EdLuver - May 9, 2004 02:10 PM (GMT)
lol, (im making her friends wit ed, cause i miss that... :( )
ok...
After gaia left ed's apartment she wanted to walk home, but found herself going to the park. Jake was sitting on a bench near the park's entrance.
"hi jake." she said, sitting down next to him.
"oh, hey, whats up?" he answered, looking at her
"nothing, really." she said
suddenly there was a scream from behind them, both their heads moved tword the spot instantly. then they looked at each other quickly and started running to the spot.
"what kind of an idiot would do this in daylight?" gaia asked jake while they were running
"an idiotic idiot." he answered
EdLuver - May 9, 2004 02:11 PM (GMT)
there happy? jake is now in the story, i 4got to name this chapter...oh-well.
EdLuver - May 9, 2004 02:17 PM (GMT)
when they got there, they were disappointed.
there was a little girl and her dad playing on a bench, he was tickling her. she screamed, then laughed out, "dad stop it!"
Gaia and Jake both sighed.
luckly there was the starbucks, right beside the little girl and the dad.
Gaia and Jake seemed to spot it at the same time, they walked to it.
gaia was smiling.
jake joked, "people should really know us by name, so instead of embarrassing things like that happening, where we dont know he her daddy, and we send her dad to the hospital, and get sued, they could just yell 'hey, gaia jake, help me!' dont you think?"
gaia smiled agian.
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 9, 2004 02:23 PM (GMT)
So Are Gaia And Ed Just Going To Be Friends In You're Story .. Or Are You Going To Make Something Happen That Makes Them More Then Just Friends?? .. But Its A Great Story So Far .. Definatly Keep Writing :D
EdLuver - May 9, 2004 02:39 PM (GMT)
im pretty sure ill just make them friends,ust to make the non-ed fans happy. grr.. i loved him as her b/f and her bff, he was so funny. :wub:
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 9, 2004 02:58 PM (GMT)
I Know .. But You Really Should Make Them Get Together Cause I Don't Think Anyone Elses Fan Fic Has Had That Happen Yet .. But Anywho .. When Are You Going To Write Another Chapter?? Cause Its So Good!! Just Promise That You Won't Abandon The Story .. Cause I Hate When People Do That .. I'll Read It And Suddenly They'll Just Stop And Won't Do Anymore .. O Well
fearless_shaz - May 9, 2004 03:10 PM (GMT)
i want more sam...............pleaseeeeeeeeeeee
Raquel - May 9, 2004 03:11 PM (GMT)
MORE! and make them long like the first post
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 9, 2004 03:20 PM (GMT)
totallyscamed - May 9, 2004 04:49 PM (GMT)
Dark Angel - May 9, 2004 05:44 PM (GMT)
lol, you all want hanna to have a different story/ending. its funny
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 9, 2004 06:53 PM (GMT)
Lolz .. If We Didn't Like Her Story Then It Would be A Different Story .. But Since We Love It So Much We Have To Boss Her Around :P Lolz .. Just Kidding! .. But We Do Love Ur Story Hanna
Dark Angel - May 9, 2004 11:34 PM (GMT)
yeah. lol. but you all want jake or sam or ed to be in it. or a little more of sam , jake or ed. its VERY entertaining
EdFargosDehSweetie!! - May 9, 2004 11:59 PM (GMT)
Of Course Were Entertainging .. Cause Love :wub: Is Enetertainging .. And Were All In Love :wub: With A Different Character Haha .. Lolz Just Kidding .. Well I Actually Might Just be In Love :D
EdLuver - May 10, 2004 01:22 AM (GMT)
lol ditto! fine, heres more story...
"no seriosly," Jake continued, "we should put, like, fliers around here saying 'being bullied? have a pimp? we can solve all your problems in just three easy hits.' "
"lets re-word it a little, ok?" Gaia said back, "and make the letters nice and big so that people with black eyes can read them."
Jake rolled his eyes as she continued
"we need it to be shiny and with bright colors. that will catch there swollen eyes." she laughed and rolled her eyes.
Sam---
it was 3 AM. sam was sitting in his bed, watching Adult Swim on cartoon network. it was a re-run of Harvey Birdman: attorney at law. Derik was in the next room over. sam scrached his head 'i have to see gaia, no talking...just a glance to see that she is ok....' he thought. since he knew he wouldnt sleep without seeing her once, he grabbed his coat, changed out of his pj pants and left the apartment. he walked down the street and got a cab. the driver was a middle-eastern man and didnt speak english very well. "manhatten, washington square park" sam said.
totallyscamed - May 10, 2004 01:26 AM (GMT)
love it! i think you should write the story howver you want. she doesn't have to be freinds w// someone who you dont like. like, for example, since your obviously a, ed fan, they could HOOK UP!!! (hint, hint, nudge, nudge!!!) that would rock!
EdLuver - May 10, 2004 01:32 AM (GMT)
lol...well...if you INSIST that ed should hook up with gaia..then...i GUESS...i MAYBE....could do that.... :D
totallyscamed - May 10, 2004 01:34 AM (GMT)
:rolleyes: haha, yeah. it sounds like torture!
EdLuver - May 10, 2004 01:38 AM (GMT)
o yes, TORTURE, unthinkable torture! absolutly horrid!
but ok, if you say so.
totallyscamed - May 10, 2004 01:42 AM (GMT)
EdLuver - May 10, 2004 01:48 AM (GMT)
ok, i will continue...
when sam got to washington square park he jumped out of the cab (literaly) and shoved all his money in the front seat
"taank oo forr dee tiip, seer." the man said
"tip? o, yeah sure." the man smiled and counted it, then he drove off.
Sam looked around the park, finally he saw her. She was comeing out of a Starbucks on the right of him.She was with Jake. Sam looked with disgust at him. Sam accedently stepped on someones foot.
"hey, watch it pal!" a big guy with a beard said.
"sorry." sam answered. someone screamed form behind him, sam closed his eyes, hopeing Gaia didnt hear. She did.it turned out a guy was robbing a convenent store.
"not very convenent for me, i guess" he mumbled. gaia ran past him, but she glance at him. "sam?" she asked but Jake grabbed her arm "come on." he said.
Dark Angel - May 10, 2004 09:59 PM (GMT)
EdLuver - May 10, 2004 11:12 PM (GMT)
the robber was about 5 ft 5 inchs, he had braod shoulders and a musculer frame. he was wearing a black ski mask, and giant black shoes, he had a black shirt, and green pants. gaia ran in first. the man was holding a gun up to a girl's head. the girl was screaming loudly "dont shoot!" she said "for love of God, please, dont shoot!"
"shoot." Gaia said.
"what?" bulky man said.
"you heard me. shoot. go ahead. you dont have the guts."
the girls eyes were were the size of baseballs. "wh--whaat?" she asked
gaia smiled. the man's hand was shaking "i...ill do it, u no....i will" his eyes were quite big too.heb dropped the gun and came toward gaia. jake showed up. "what'd i miss?" he said. "fun.lots of fun" gaia responded.
Raquel - May 11, 2004 12:00 AM (GMT)
more! jake gaia must hook p! u promised!
totallyscamed - May 11, 2004 01:03 AM (GMT)
nope! you promised and ed-gaia thing! don leave this hangin!
EdLuver - May 11, 2004 01:59 AM (GMT)
i didnt PROMISE anything, actually. lol.
The guy came after her, with a primal scream, and pounce, gaia took a step back and kick him straight in the jaw. the man fell on the ground and gaia bowed to jake "your turn" she said, he kicked his stomach "too easy" he said. but it wasnt over yet, a smaller guy came out of the crowd, he had a matching outfit as the larger guy. he pulled out his gun. he was pointing it toward jake, the small guy poked his friend, "hey i can take the dude if you can take the chic, heres your knife." "my names not chic. its gaia." she said, kicking the gun from his hand. Gaia jumped in the air "hai!" she said kicking him in the face.