Name: Morgaine
Race: Human
Age: 103 years
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 125 pounds
Eye Color: Grey/Silver
Hair Color: Black
Element: Fire
Physical Description: Dressed in a Silvery-Grey gown with black trim, Red cloak also with black trim, inside is orange. Cloak is clipped to the gown via two clasps, one on each shoulder, both containing the Celtic Tri-Goddess knot. Her cream colored skin is accented by her long brown hair, which is nearly always kept in a braid. Though she may appear small at first, she is completely capable of taking care of herself at any point in time. Normally dark and reserved, she can at times be wild, though hardly in the presence of strangers.
Class: Mage
Level: 1
Equipment:
Weapon:-Red Wand
Head Armor:-Black Hood
Body Armor:-Black Robes (cloth)
Hand Armor:-Silver Ring
Leg Armor:-Leather Boots
Gold: 3,000
Skills: Flameblast
Personality: Dark and Reserved, to a point it looks like she is shy, but is far from it. Has a frequent tendency to argue...with anyone, at anytime, for any reason. She has boundaries and prefers not to over step them, but may on a very rare occasion. Though she may seem rude, it stems from her long background of deception, she is mere closed and extremely observant of all whom she meets
Background: Back in the times of kings, a power was born of two celestial beings. Its father, the sun, and mother, the moon. Harnessing the power of a Mage at an early age, she quickly gained a place next to a most powerful king, as his advisory council. His court was a sight to see, so many people of high stature there. When his kingdom fell, due to an untrust worthy duke of the royal court in another land that the king had a previous treaty with, she was exiled from the land. Managing to catch a peasant boat to other lands, the boat was caught in a terrible storm, and even she could not stop this with all her power, therefore it sunk, killing everyone save her. She floated in the water for days, but this worked to her advantage. She used the time to learn new spells, to create spells, and to regain the composure she had once held, long before the fallen king and his court, back in the time she had studied to be a Mage, where, alone, she stayed for hours, knowing no one, and assumingly not existent to the world, but now she was easily distinguished as the fallen king's advisor, and therefore thought treacherous by all whom she met. She ended up on a shore, upon which there was prosperity, though it was soon to end...

Okay, this is a good start. But there are a few problems.

1) Smoke is not an element. If you meant Shadow / Darkness, that's a different story. But you need to choose one of the 7 elements which I named in Bolindad's registration: Earth, Fire, Wind, Water, Spirit, Holy, Darkness / Shadow.

2) You lack a "Personality" section.

3) Could you possibly be a little bit more descriptive in the background section? You have good writing skills, as I can see, but that is a little short-winded.

When you fix those, you're accepted. ^_^