You need to describe yourself physically, and your personality. Oh yeah, longer how you got the world. Be descriptive, creative.

Good job. Welcome to the forums.

Um, yeah. You can't have that weapon to begin with. Especially since it's a weapon you data drain from a monster in mutation. You start off with the basic level one weapon. Sorry. =)

Character Name: Valkeiz
Real Name: Shinji
Age: 16
class: Heavy Blade
LVL: 1
Weapon: Kikuichimonji


Personality- A loner by nature Shinji never has friends and this carriers over to his character personality. A silent young man that speaks rarely but dont be fooled by his exterior nature. He posseses a strong soul and an even stronger sword. Not much else can be said about this strange warrior. Only time will tell...........

Looks- Valkeiz is the data version of Shinji so he's easy noticeable in both worlds.... A young man of 16 that stands at 6'3" and weighs 240 pounds is not someone easily overlooked. He has short black hair that is spiked along the left side and hangs down into his eyes, so you never can tell what he is watching.... He wears solid black pants that are tied up with a red belt. He wears normal black travler's boots that reach halfway up his legs and definitly show signs of wear and tear. His shirt is a blood red cutoff shirt that is surrounded by a black vest lined with silver along the edges. And finally he wears a red sweatband against his brow to keep back sweat. But the strangest thing about him is his silver eyes, which seem to be from the abyss itself..........


*Story Start*

Shinji sighs heavily as he walks home from yet another day of school. His backpack hangs on his left shoulder and his hands are placed in his pant's pocket. He stares at the ground, through his long bangs, and wonders again why he even bothers with his life anymore. It had happened again at school today.....
Those incidents that always seemed to come looking for him......well they really did come looking for him. And so once again Shinji was suspended from school for fighting. The principal hadn't even bothered to call his mom this time, just sent him on home after the fight had ended and the other boys were rushed to the nurse's office. He still remembered it, how could he forget, he had made so many mistakes during the fight that he was surprised he hadn't actually been hit.

*flash*

"Look it's the loser Shinji!"

Shinji turned around slowly and stared at the group of boys coming towards him. He noticed that most of them he had classes with but he didn't know their names. Why bother? He stood still with his left shoulder facing them and his right hand held at his side.

(Here we go again) he thought

"Hey loser, listen to me when I talk to ya!" the leader of the group, a tall heavily built young man with muscles that strained against his black uniform and long blond hair pulled back into a ponytail, shouted loudly. His band of seven other boys surrounded Shinji and prevented him from walking away. Shinji sighed as they took up their postions around him,same old routine, four guys behind him and three in front of him with Blondie standing behind the three.
A crowd of students clustered around them giving them plenty of space for the oncoming battle. Girls and boys all jeered and made hundreds of comments all thrown Shinji's way. If their comments were supposed to bother Shinji then they were mistaken. He could careless. He carefully put his pack onto the ground. He didn't want to harm the new game within. He'd just bought it on his way to school this morning.
"Time to teach you some manners, Loser Kid!" Blondie shouted. Shinji vaguly wondered what they were pissed off about. Nothing came to mind as he took up his stance. He left foot slid foreward a few inches and turned itself inward just a bit. His weight automatically shifted to his right leg as his fists came up, right fist held near his face and left extended slightly passed that.
The taunts and jeers continued as Blondie gave the word. Shinji could barely make out the form of a few teachers and a girl running towards them through the trees. What kind of girl would actually go get teachers to break up a fight instead of watching a supposed beating for the Loser Kid?

It was over before they even got within 20 feet of him. He picked up his bag and simply walked off campus, not bothering to wait for them to tell him to leave. The crowd parted before him like water as he walked past. Another fight, another bunch of awed losers, another bunch of kids to send to the nurse for splints and bandages and another suspension.

*flash*

Shinji walked into his room and removed the game from his bag. It was the only thing in there since he didn't bother to check out text books this year. He turned his computer on and let it boot up. His familar backround greeted him as he prepared to run the installer. He let the installer run as he pugged in the new Visor he had bought too. He plopped down into his leather chair as the installer finished and the visor light turned on. He placed them on and prepared to start..........

The login screen appeared.

Username-
Password-

Username- V...a...l...k...e...i...z
Password- #########

Loading................

The screen disppeared and Valkeiz appeared in 'The World'.

Oops I provided all that on the Profile post.
Thought this was the general idea while the Profile supplied the detail.

My bad. I'll switch it at once.





EDIT: ok there.