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Title: burn
Description: a short J piece re sydney as julia


brenda_wood - October 28, 2003 07:21 PM (GMT)

all characters mentioned here belong to JJ - this is just my opinion on what could be going through daddy Bristows head.

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I stand here grinning understandingly as this man the Walker tells me how my daughter likes it in bed. How she performs.

This was not in the job description in those parenting magazines I read.

She is a 17 out of 10 is she?

she was corrupted/brainwashed/tortured --something YOU BASTARD

but I need him so I stand here grinning like an idiot - I can feel my ears and my face getting red. all the blood in my body is now in my face.

and inside I feel the burn

this excuse for a man touched Sydney

my sydney

my baby girl

I have enough trouble stomaching the fact that she is a woman and has been - with- men- like Danny and Vaughn. My daughter is my daughter she. does. not. have.sex.

except I know she does

and if she is anything like her mother this cretin speaks the truth. Don't ask me to rationalize it. In fact If I knew who the hell Irina's father was I would call him up right now and apologize for having touched his daughter.

but I digress

walker cannot expect to tell me this and live

now he is dead and I have no information on Julia Thorne

except that she is a wild screw

I am going to the hotel and taking a hot shower- because once you are the father of a daughter you understand how repulsive this is.

and then I am going home and explaining to Sydney that she is not ever to have sex again with any person on this planet. She will understand

I am her father.




Fin

brenda







LightTraveller - October 29, 2003 12:25 AM (GMT)
That was just great, pretty much how I view the sitiuation, poor Jack. Nice job.

lenafan - October 29, 2003 01:06 AM (GMT)
QUOTE
if she is anything like her mother this cretin speaks the truth. Don't ask me to rationalize it. In fact If I knew who the hell Irina's father was I would call him up right now and apologize for having touched his daughter.


Hummm? OK? What was that? Laura and Jack got married. They had sex as married people do. I don't think Jack had any apology to make.
I think Simon lied about the degenerate part just to get Jack to react. And got killed for it.

Otherwise Brenda, excellent.
Have you done your Chronicle bit?
B)

brenda_wood - October 29, 2003 11:43 PM (GMT)
lenafan

kind of a tongue in cheek thing - jack can relate to even the father of irina derevko and how any "daddy" might feel knowing his little girl was a woman

even if she was married


Brenda







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