this is something i typed out of bordem im in the common room of slytherin so here it is



sean got up as he sensed something was aboout to happen....he walked over to a spot by the door and thenn all of a sudden he herd gunfire and told everyone to dunk as he dove out of the way from the door and drew a few kunai and his sword...."great now guns in the school wut next"and then after he said that comeing from the boys dorm was a big exsplotion and the door was blown of its hinges and three demons walked down the stairs and seperated and got into an attack fase...."what the f is going on around here......gggaahhh this is so stupid"sean got up and one of the demons sent a fire ball at him sean kicked it back at him and he exploded and he threw a kunai at another one but it caught it then he threw a few more and caught them...."screw this" sean raised his sword and cut him in half and right after he cut him in half sean was kicked and he flew and hit the common room door and was shot in the back a few times"sean quickly moved into cover as he bleed alot"son of a bi**h what the h is going on aroun here i swear first people with guns now demons great wut ne...."sean was suddenly thrown aginst the wall and was being punched by the demon sean then caught one of his punches and twisted the fist and fliped the demon....sean fell to his knees in pain and thought to himself"no time for pain enemys are get up sean"stil sean stayed on the ground"GET UP SEAN"still he could not move an inch"GET UP SEAN AND DO WUT YOU SWORE TO EVERYONE IN THIS COMMON ROOM YOU WOULD DO"seans eyes turned red with a lilt black dot and he got up but barley........and rose his fist showing he would not give up....sean could barly breath right because of the gun shot wounds in his back"i.....i wi..ll....n...n...ot....lose to a demon"sean erupted with power from his body making a crater around him in the floor and sense he was in the school the damadged was fix instanly"i was granted a higher rank i will protect everyone in here from the likes of evil and stupidity......it may only be me that fights you but i have something on my side i have something to protect....my friends and with them i will never lose to something like you.....ever"sean ran at the demon and the demon just laughed and punched sean in the face sending him back aginst the wall....the wounds on his back are finally kicking in he could barly move he could barley see he could barley breath the wounds were to deep....was this it was sean going to die trying to protect those he cared for....and all of a sudden a spirit came to sean and kneeled next to him....it was his father(i dont have a name lol srry)"hey boy are you going to die here and let these losers kill everyone here your sutch a loser you deserve to die there you dont deserve to have friends like you do....ha if you were my son then you would get up and kill that loser over there....now do it and get over the pain theres no time to feel pain feel it after tha battle havnt i taught you anything...i geuss not your a discrase to your family well wuts left of it....now get your @$$ up and get him now"seans eyes opend wide with anger" i was never your son you left me and everyone to be by your self i wont be considered anything to you"sean stood up and punched the sprit and made it disapear"as far as im consernd you dead and im alive so just shut up and let me do wut i have to do and dont preach to me every time im in trouble.....and as for you demon your mine"seans body erupted in flames sean walked to the demon not run but walked...the demon lauhed still as he thought he could kill sean...sean laughed also cause he knew exactly wut the demon thought....the demon then stoped laughing and ran at sean and punched him in the face...sean then grabed the punch and smiled as he crushed the fist in his hands..."you think you could beat me ha.....time to die"sean pulled his fist back and punched the demon crushing his nose he pulled his hand back agin punching him agin harder than before makeing blood slapter aginst his face"hahaha told you you would die"sean pulled his fist back agin and puched the demon this time letting go of his crushed hand so he flew away from him and fell aginst the floor lifeless...sean laughed at the dead body and shot a energy beam aty the demon destroying it into pices"now time for the gunner....come on in here and fight me you loser...sean had a ki ball behind his back waiting for him to come through the door and as he did he waited util he saw the gun and he let the ki ball go and killed the gunner leaving nothing but his blood legs left and the fell to the floor just blood bones and some flesh....sean laughed and powered down"losers all losers i swear"

srry for double posting but you guys kno you can comment lol

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Interesting.

very interesting

Yeah.... sorry, but I can't read all that. Its hurting my eyes trying to go through it.

It was hard to get through, but the detail and situation within the writing is very interesting.

lol thanks srry...i was going toput it in the common room at one point but didnt lol...ad im not really good at making spaces inbetween lol srry guys lol

Not bad very Interesting.......Pretty good actually reading wise i guess makes a good story..........Bit to Inyusha and Bleach thats what it seems to me but still good story

It was interesting, but it was hard to get through due to formating.

well i didnt want to make it seem it was like that....my charecter is like that a bunch of times...hes got like a evil spirt that takes over when he dont want it too...and i got this idea way before i even started to watch bleach lol so i didnt just copy lol

Despite all that, Bleach pwns hardcore. I've been obsessed with it, even before it came over here to america. First time I ever cosplayed was as Captain Tōshirō Hitsugaya. *points to your sig/avi*

Got my hair white and everything. haha. The katana I own already looks similar to his Zanpakutô basic form. With the little stars and all.

lol dude toshiro owns all dude lol