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Title: Talent Topic -Poetry, stories, fanart.....
Description: Come share your talents!


Yuhi - May 9, 2003 01:10 AM (GMT)
Um............ I thought I make this for everyone who likes to share anything. I hope you can share your talents with us!

My... um.... poems: :rolleyes: Warning! VERRRY long post:

Boating Accident
I sit here in my room alone, writing and dreaming, my life was in a depressed state
I think of my family while they are away
Not too far I got the call
from my mother that is not too far
she told me she would go fishing with my family
near my home in Miami
I wished her luck and I hope she enjoys it
Quite excited and happy
she thanked me and replaced the phone back into its cradle
everything went well until twelve
I hear the engine revving
outside the window i was fearing, the weather got angry
The water came high and blew the boats away*
the trees blew strongly, their trunks seem to have broken away*
there they are! There they are! I see them now!
rolling and rocking against the sea
I sit here weeping, what is there to do?
The boat flipped over, taking my family into the sea
no one surfaced, no one screamed
the weather took my family away
all I can do is scream

(untitled. Needs a title).
He stares at the sky for a moment
cherishing every dream he holds it
In his eyes, in his mind, in his kiss I imagine every fairy dancing around us
In the sight of the beauty of his face
I sense an angel within his warm embrace
the wonderful feeling of his caress
the amazing tone in his whisper
I realized I found my prince
lost in his eyes
lost in his smile
lost .... in him
he stares at me for a moment
cherishing every kiss we'll enjoy it
under the moonlight of stars
we'll go swimming in the velvet blanket
splashing and laughing
the distant cry of a dolphin comes towards us
the blanket soon surrounds us with dolphins of five
we stayed up until nine
swimming with the dolphins
I sense happiness and love within him
and the romance in his eyes
I love him
we swim to the surface for a moment
he tells me he has found someone that is better than me
we stare at one another for moment
tears falling, rolling down my cheeks
releasing from his embrace
wiping away his kiss
walking away from his angelic face
.... we parted.

Dolphin
In the sea of the pacific
I attempt to make a leap of faith
I dive into the water but before I surfaced
I noticed a dolphin swimming pass by me
elegant, curvy, and beautiful it is
with its friendly eyes staring right back at me
it made a cry and swam away
it immediately leaped out of the surface then back in
I watched as the dolphin disappeared into the watery darkness
the dolphin swims quicker than I
I watched as the friendly dolphin help a drowning victim as it lends its fin for the victim to hold
the victim held onto the fin, and waited to be taken to the shore
I smiled to myself
the dolphin immediately took the victim to shore as he held on
I watched as they swim away
the dolphin stopped at the beginning of the shallow water
and let the victim make his way to the shore
he thanked the dolphin
then it swam away
he saw me floating in the water
he smiled and waved at me
I waved back
he sat down on the warm white sand and waited for me
I swam my way towards him
the dolphin joined me
I walked from the shallow surface and into the sand
he walked to me and stared at me
I was lost in his beauty
he gave me a kiss and held me
the dolphin let out a cry
we turned and smiled
then the dolphin swam away
never to be seen again

Abandoned Astronaunt
Underneath the sea of stars
I float endlessly into the darkness
no one to save me
no one to see me
here I am wrapped in an astronaunt suit
floating endlessly
I cry, I die
Is there anyone out there to save me?
10 minutes.... no spaceship
I am losing oxygen....
... losing air.
I stare at the dark cape above me, surrounded by millions of sparkling diamonds
I close my eyes, the tears floating in front of me
I am floating here in the middle of nowhere
5 minutes... my life is almost up. Will there be another life for me? I float, I suffer, I die.
0 minutes...
....I lost oxygen
.....I lost air.
Goodbye world
let me die in the sky
and let the stars be my coffin.

(untitled. This is a little different. The "I" is the male. And the "You" is the female. The poem is about the man seeing a woman but fears she is......... well read on.)

I wake up the day
hearing something that haunts my head
I rise up, head beating like a drum
what is that song I hear from her?

There you are, singing and standing alone in the cold rain
like a ghost, white and still
I stare at you from my window
dancing and skipping on the soaked ground
your napped hair clinging against your skin
your eyes pale and distant
I fear you may only be just part of my imagination
I hear you sing that song
I hear you sing the sympathy of your emotion
your eyes teary, I hear your voice echoing with sadness
I her you cry, I see you fall, I hear you scream
I see you are feeling depressed and devastated
What is it that you're feeling?

"He sings the words of hatred and angry emotion. He beats me like a stuffed doll. Why won't anyone save me?"
I hear you sing those words
I want to save you, I want to hold you
come to me
I'll save you
I walk out and I see you
your eyes so distant
I run towards you
with a flash of light
you disappear
where are you?
I fall to my knees
I stare up at the rain
I guess you are just an imagination
come back to me...
....I'll save you.

Pale Eyes
Wandering into the darkened room
I notice silence
pitch black with shadows of white
I blindly find the switch of light
I realized the room has crumbled into dust
for in the distance the crack shed daylight
I walk towards the crack
but a shadow passed by it
terrified, I searched about
and noticed a glow of fire
to my right, I see a lantern and a face casted by it
eyes pale, white as the cloud
face filled with angry and hate
fearing of death I escape
only to feel something pierce my heart
I freeze, my cries frozen by the pain
the building is suddenly drowned in light. The room flooded with colors of shiny red
I realized a sword has pierced me
I slowly turned my head to find the face
but he disappeared
the blade was mounted on the door
covered in red
I noticed it was a trap
but it was too late
unable to take the pain
I released myself from the blade
and fall to the ground
eyes frozen in fear
my mouth opened, my scream frozen
my eyes turn to haze
then a sudden blur
the man appeared before me
his pale eyes stares back at me, cold and angry
his gorgeous sword held before him. The shiny blade pointing towards me
I realize my fate
and accepted the blade
the stranger let out a scream
then stabbed my stomach
I let out a painful cry
then my eyes fall shut

Gah.... last one:
The Dancer
Joyfully I dance around
the grand ballroom in Paris
the room drowned in golden light
there I danced silently to myself
my gown swaying and swirling
my hair, curled and tied, spins around as I dance in a circle
my high heels tapping
my arms spreadt
my eyes closed
my lips pursed together; in a smile
I let my arms rest and opened my eyes
and stopped dancing
I looked around the ballroom
and realized no one is here
I closed my eyes again
and dreamed of the ballroom filled with dancers
I opened them
to my surprise
the ballroom is full of dancers
one brushes past by me
it felt real
but I closed my eyes and opened them again
and they disappeared
I sighed
and cried inside
dreams don't come true after all
I headed for the door
and opened it wide
I see a dancer standing before me
depressed, I refused the offer
but the dancer took my hand
and led me back to the ballroom
the dancer told me to close my eyes and dream again
so I did. I feared he might disappear.
I felt him pull me close to him
and we kissed
again, it felt real
I opened them
and the dancer was gone
I looked around
and realized he was only an illusion
I fall to my knees
and cried inside
"what is going on?" I cried.
"Why do they always disappear?"
I felt my lips. I can feel the dancer embracing me
I realize... the ballroom was once burned down ten years ago but was rebuilt somehow. And the dancers were caught in the fire.
I slowly looked around
(Someone must have lit it on fire) I thought.
I cry inside.
Am I the only survivor?
I smiled
Let me be the dancer
and bring this place back to life.

I hope you like those poems. If you have anything you like to share, please post it here!!!


Aki - May 9, 2003 01:42 AM (GMT)
Waaaaah you're so talented!! :: jealous ::

I'm moved now, XD to possibly try and revive my HP or Resident Evil story.

=B I really like the astronaut one. Write mooore!! :D:D

Yuhi - May 9, 2003 02:13 AM (GMT)
LOL! okay....... and thank you so much, Aki!!! :D
The ghost
she enters the river
the water fast, rapid, dangerous
she slowly drowns herself in the river
her elegant face paused, no emotion
or expression was seen on her face
her beautiful form dissolving by the coldness of the water
her eyes still, she did not blink once
her arms resting on her sides, no muscle twitched
her heart did not beat once
her lungs did not breathe once
she was like a statue
her legs, her feet enters the water and dissolves into white particles
what is she?
who is she?
the water engulfed her
she dissolved completely
nobody saw her dissolve
nobody saw her walk in the water
nobody saw her disappear
for all that she loved
for all that she lost
her death came from the river
the river of death
young, mysterious, beautiful she once was
drowned by an angry villager
for his death came from the river
the young girl came back from her grave to take him down with her
the young girl has finished her job
and went into her grave
to rest in peace with the murderer

The proposal
I stare at the sea in front of me
cold, lonely, calm
the sun winked as it lowers into the horizon
I hold myself, my arms about me
the wind picked up, and blew a gentle breeze
warm, friendly, soothing
I sat down on the cold earth and held my knees in front of me
the green grass cold, wet, healthy
I close my eyes, and hid my face behind me knees
warm, quiet, dark
I placed my hands through the strands of my hair
warm, smooth, healthy
I found myself crying
emotional, teary, depressing
I looked up, a single tear rolled down my cheek
wet, sad, emotional
I opened my eyes, and wiped my tears away with my hand
dried, clean, saddened
I stand up, and walked towards the sea, and jumped in
soaked, warm, refreshing
I broke out of the surface of hte water. And took a gasp of air
breathing, gasping, enjoying
I looked about me, and continued swimming
I broke out of the surface again, and saw a beach before me
bright, crowded, colorful
I float there, wasn't sure what to do next?
-should I swim ahead?
-or retreat?
I smiled. And swam back
I climbed out of the water, my clothes soaking wet
cold, freezing, drenched
I ried myself with my towel, then I replaced my clothes with a fresh one
refreshed, warm, amazing
I sit here now in my cabin, wrapped up in my blanket
resting, sleeping, comfortable
I hear the door creak, and footsteps
voices, laughter, noises
the creaking became louder, the footsteps coming closer
I felt something about me
warm, gentle, soft
a gentle kiss I feel on my exposed cheek
I woke up and found someone hovering over me
I smiled, and placed my hand behind his head
closer, beautiful, irresistible
I kissed him back and let my hand fall away from his head
satisfied, delicious, amazing
he climbed over me and he whispered to me something amazing and heart-melting:
"I love you."
I smiled and caressed his cheeks
soft, smooth, beautiful
I whispered him the words
"I love you, too."
he leaned towards me and we kissed for a long moment
then he rested his head on the pillow, his cheek pressing against mine
I wrapped my arms about him, and held him close
he rose his head and looked at me, then he kissed my cheek
I complimented him on how he looked:
"You are beautiful."
He smiled. He kissed me again.
"You are incredible and beautiful."
I felt like I was on top of hte world
I kissed him once again and bruied my face against his cheek
"Thank you."
He proposed to me and showed me the ring
breathtaking, beautiful, gorgeous
I wanted him. Not the ring.
"I will."
He slipped the ring on my finger
and we fell in love

June
walking outside of the sun warmed sky-summer
the heat bruning beneath my skin
the grass fresh and green
the pool shimmering
the children jumped in
and crowded the pool
the trees covering the sky
and reached the heavens- young and old
the breeze blew in
I look up the clear blue sky
and smiles as the sun winked at me
the summer shall last forever

Heaven
The weather cold but the sun warm
and the ground weightless beneath my feet
it feels like heaven on earth
when I need a rest I head to the tree
where I sit under its branches
the weather cold but the sun warm
I can taste the sweet berries in my tounge
and touch the softness of the clouds
it feels like I'm in heaven
they played in the water
and danced on the grass, the breeze blew by them
the weather cold but the sun warm
I stood up, and walked down the hill
making my way towards the dancing crowd
it feels like heaven has sent its angels down to earth

Shrinking
The world is coming to a close
closer... deeper... shrinking
I feel myself shrinking along with the world
down goes my feet... shrinking until I see them no more
down goes my legs, shrinking until they are thin like a pencil
down goes my arms, shrinking until they disappear
down goes my chest, my neck, and my back.... shrinking away
down goes my head... shrinking like a balloon losing its air
down I go... to the ground
I look up.... I see the world has fallen down on me
I wake up
it was all a dream

Mikage-san - May 9, 2003 02:27 AM (GMT)
Very nice, Yuhi-san... ^_^

I will post some things soon... probably fanart... poetry only if I can write something current. I haven't written anything in awhile, though I love to do it. :)

Nice work!

Yuhi - May 9, 2003 02:31 AM (GMT)
Thank you so much, Mikage-San!
I love to see your work, too!

TauntingDestiny - May 10, 2003 08:46 AM (GMT)
Here's the closest thing to poetry I can contribute.
It's part of one of the songs I wrote.


"CHALLENGING FATE"

I remember when
I was told my destiny
and you claimed there was nothing I could do to fight it.

My life was predestined
scripted from begining to end
inconcevible to me
because I need to believe

That my life is mystical and how it unfolds
when I wrote every page and cast all the stage
these terms are not negotiable
so leave them alone

profecy's are ment to keep you down
but they won't if you make it clear
that nothing's decided for you

:angry: so it needs work but the song is coming along.

TD

Mikage-san - May 10, 2003 01:59 PM (GMT)
I think it's beautiful... :)

Aki - May 10, 2003 03:12 PM (GMT)
Waaaaah talent all around!!! :: runs in circles :: I'm jealous~ ;o;

Yuhi - May 10, 2003 04:59 PM (GMT)
Beautiful poem Taunting Destiny!!!!!!!!! It's perfect!!!




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