Something I started on two days ago here's the final of it, tell me what you think.

Make it stop, the aching of my heart, it’s torn us apart
Let it go, the things that you know, I want you to show me there’s something more, to you
Can it die, our care for each other, I want to fly, into your arms again
Yet you lie, deceive me so, make me cry, sorrowful not alive
The happy times, we used to share, are fading faster, like breath in the air
Can you still, take me away, the same as you used to, dream you’d stay, the same

How can you, go on this way, is there nothing, I can say
Is it all just a game to you, fighting on with nothing more to do
You forget that I have feelings too, so why am I a mere object to you
Will you ever look into my eyes, or hold me when I cry, what do you feel inside, now
Is it hate, deception, will my love not bring you back
Is it desperation, why won’t my care hold it back
This thing you feel inside, is something you always hide, from me

My soul cries in pain, but I can’t place the blame, on you
For it is my fault I cannot change, to your liking, act more openly without fighting
You call me perfect, but I am not, in your eyes, I know I’m not
Gazing into the twilight I see our future, like the flower it withers and dies
I regret it so, dragging you here, it was never meant to be, it was just our fears, coming to life

So how can it stop, the aching in my heart, one way to be stated true
I must leave you, but am I willing to give it all up, the answer lie inside
These feelings I hide, the things I say to you are always true
I love you, it’s as simple as that, it may be nothing more but it is strong, enough to hold on
Stubborn, stupid, things I know are true, but I refuse, refuse to leave, to leave the one I love
I shall take the risk, make it last, even if this pain will not pass

Let it consume me whole, this aching pain, I won’t let you go, you’re not to blame
My choice is this, let you remember it
I’ll stay with you forever and always, inside a part of you is with me,
Giving it up would be impossible, so stay hear longer, the thought of your lose could never end this suffering...

hmmm.....out of a scale from 1 to 10 id give it an 8

I love all that stuff you write!!! It's all so depressing!!!!

That is the subject of my life, I strive to be perfect, never succeeding in my troubled work... Never seeming to find what I consider to be "perfect"...

Wow you guys are good!!!!!!!! i could never make that good of poetry! :P

My poems ain't all that either.....At least they aren't in da dumps!

wow i like that stuff it way better than mine ahahah wow
and hi im new here been reading ppl poems and stuff
and thats 1 of the poem that touch me








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im woundering around looking for piece may i found peace at last here?

o kool is that how u feel because when i was torn apart i felt like that