Okay here's a song I wrote tell me what you think.

Two Sides, One Reality...

When we first met it was like magic,
I seemed to feel so fantastic.
I thought it was just a dream,
Just one of my crazy schemes.
But it was real and I almost began to cry.
When you turned away.
I always wanted to stay,
By your side.
No matter what I do,
I’ll always be with you.
In your heart!
I didn’t know where to start!

*You’re the one I love.
Nothing can compare.
My shining light above,
To guide my way.
No one can replace you,
There’s only one thing that’s true,
Even if there’s two...
I’ll always choose you!

When you walked away from me (the very next day)
Acting very unusually, what could I say?
So I asked you why?
And you said to me...

It had to be suicide!

Then a tear dropped from my eye,
So you turned your head and sighed.
So I embraced you in my arms,
And said it’ll go away, if you try!

*

So now it seems clear to me,
It was our destiny.
To see one another.
That dream of mine,
Seems to climb,
And in my heart...
I know one thing will remain true...
I love you...

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I don't think you have to much time on your hands. I really like that song keep up the good work.

Thanks I try to make them sound decent.

Including the bran-spankin' new feature of the millenium: words!

Here's another one, I've got 13 more...

B-Y-E

I’m leaving you behind, got nowhere else to go.
I’m sick of all these lies, I feel so traumatized.
But still I cling to you when in doubt, but now ready to get out.
You’re holding me back, and no it’s time for me to move on!

*B- Because it’s over now.
Y- You made me turn around.
E- Everything’s bringing me down.
No more of this deception
I’m done with these conceptions
I hate to say I’m leaving you this way!
Leaving you this way...
(Got nothin’ more to say...)

So what does it matter to you,
Our relationship is through.
I never thought I’d have to say it to you...

You messed with me feelings.
You went and broke my heart.
Though I even tried to love you from the start!
You left me in the rain,
Well now it’s driving me insane!
I truly did believe your every whim.
I don’t even know why I loved him...

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Your sexual intentions
Your perverted schemes
Are all that I can remember in my dreams
The memory of your face still haunts me in my mind
Well baby you just went and ran out of time.

You told me all these stories, knowing they weren’t true.
You went and flirted around with other girls that I never knew!
You tried to turn me on, well now that chance is gone!
I never want to hear your voice again!

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a song by me

I sit and wonder why
why you left so soon
why did you leave me alone
but now your really gone
long gone, away from me for good
but now, ill get you back
heh, you will see
no im not gonna use jealousy
not a fake or counterfeit way of it
im gonna do it the old fashioned way
show you what you had
but now what you left
and wha you had lost
past present future is the way
but you could never know
but still, i wonder why
why, why did you, why...
why?WHY?WHY!?WHYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DID YOU GO!!!!!
RAAAAH IM GONNA KILL YOU
MY KNIFE IS MY FRIEND, TO THE VERY END!
and now my friend will show you
make you jealous, that im alive ALIVE!!!
ha you will see, but how could I
could i take what you will always have until you die
its lost, lost in that face of yours
in which i want to kiss
please come back, because your all i had
please....dont go....

also Kara your songs are good

good lirycs everyone :lol:

Yeah I agree, the songs are really good. I wish I could write songs.

It's not very hard to, all you really have to do is write what you feel and make it all flow together as best you can. But that's just my advise, you can try w/e way you think will work if you want.

Yeah, but im not to good with expressin' my feeling's but I may try someday.