I wrote this poem a while ago, and it was just for fun. Then, I started editing it...and now it's what it is today...
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Hours and hours on end,
We walk the Earth in hands.
But though I never see,
I know you are still here with me.
And as the sun rises up,
My love for you will fly.
Please love me for eternity,
Or at least, until I die.
I want your smile forever,
Your warmth to last all time.
The hugs and kisses you have given,
Are sweet and so divine.
But most of all,
Your love to me,
Is all I ever need.
For, loving me eternally,
Is your greatest deed.
I need that special someone,
Who is floating on earth right now.
To come and say “I love you.”
And never to say “Farewell.”
I want to see his face in my eyes,
Touch his hand with mine.
And I want to have him see me,
As if I were to shine.
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Just to say, most of my poems that I'm going to put up are pretty long...I dunno. When I write, it's like it just keeps going until the feeling stops. So, I guess I can't really control it. Hope you guys like this poem, and don't mind any others. :unsure:
*claps* That is really good! I love your work!
Pretty good poetry.
Xcellent work!!!! Keep working.
Awesome Job Hun! Keep It Up!