i wrote this a while ago. i hope u like it. plz try to be honest. i hate it when ppl try to be conciderate of my feelings and sugar cote stuff.

My Friend

My friend i warn you to take heed
For the world is full of sin and greed.
You may be tempted to do wrong
Just to fit into the throng.
But you wil overcome their bate
So you can reach a greater fate.
I hope your journey goes well
So you cna tell what i tell.

wow sis!..thats really good..and i mean it. you need to keep writing..you are very good -^^-

thanx. i write alot. i usually dont let ppl read what i write though. im afraid ppl wont like and then i might get discouraged. but im glad u like it. i'll try to find some more of my stuff and put it here.

Nice poetry. Great writing and working!!! ^_^

very nice ^_^

Yeah you are really talented. I can't write at all.

Very Good! Great Job! Keep Goin!

thanx all of u.
(sry i havent been on ive been swamped w/homework)

i cant seem to find any of my other poetry. i had a lot but they were all typed and when my comp crashed this summer they were all deleted. but i did find this one

Me

When the sun doesn't shine
And the Earth doesn't tilt
Is whe I'll stop trying
And my spirit wilt.


not one of my best. sry. :(

Thats really good sis. A lot beter than I could ever do. :lol: