Title: Lay down and cry
Inuyasha_83 - October 13, 2003 05:16 AM (GMT)
Lay down and cry
Why can't I hide?
Why can't I die?
Why must I suffer?
Why must I lie?
Why do I put myself through this pain?
All for you to accept me.
All for you to hurt me.
Why can't you just leave me alone?
Evertime I see you I feel like a child.
You make me feel unprotected and weak.
You make me feel hideous and disgusting.
I want to hurt myself for pretending to be happy around you.
Pretending your words don't hit home and feel like a knife twisting in my heart.
Don't you realize how much you hurt me?
How much you make me cry!
Ron no Anime - October 13, 2003 06:29 AM (GMT)
*tear* pretty great poetry... Great work!!! *thumb up*
Inuyasha_83 - October 14, 2003 06:24 PM (GMT)
Thanks I just hope more people will read them. I really like getting feed back on my poems good or bad.
Bolt3 - October 14, 2003 09:10 PM (GMT)
Quite good, really. Uh... have you had bad relationships before?
Inuyasha_83 - October 14, 2003 09:33 PM (GMT)
Yeah I've been in a couple of bad relationships. I don't want any of you to hold back how you think. If you don't like something I've written let me know. thanks guys. You're true pals :)
Hailin - October 16, 2003 12:31 AM (GMT)
so crative^^
nice work, alright^^
Angel Of The Dawn - October 29, 2003 02:02 AM (GMT)
*sniffles* Awww, That Was Great Darlin!