Title: The Love I never Knew
Inuyasha_83 - September 4, 2003 10:10 PM (GMT)
The Love I never Knew
For a moment I loved you
But I've moved on to someone new
You were the love I never knew
Now I cannot express the emptiness
Your hair as black as ebony
That's all I remember of the one I
longed to embrace
It's as if time has erased your beautiful face
I've moved on to someone new
But I'll always remember you as
The love I never knew
catrlcatrlgirl1 - September 4, 2003 11:35 PM (GMT)
wow...its very good....keep writing
Angel Of The Dawn - September 5, 2003 02:32 AM (GMT)
Awww, That Is So Good! I Liked It! Keep Up The Great Work! *sniffles*~I Really Liked It Alot.
Inuyasha_83 - September 5, 2003 03:32 AM (GMT)
Thanks I have a few more that I want to post as soon as I find the time
Ron no Anime - September 5, 2003 05:25 AM (GMT)
Very good writing!!! Great work!!! :)
lollipop lust kill - September 8, 2003 05:28 AM (GMT)
I like it. It flows nicely. You should defiantly post the rest of your poems.
crazdfeline - September 14, 2003 09:41 PM (GMT)
very nice. very nice style.
FoX - October 4, 2003 04:15 PM (GMT)
That...was the best thing I've read in a good long while...
Angel Of The Dawn - October 29, 2003 02:05 AM (GMT)
I Like It! Keep Up The Good Work!
