Title: Humble
Description: Alex
Inuyasha_83 - August 18, 2003 01:43 AM (GMT)
This is a poem a wrote about 6 months ago I hope you like it.
Humble
Upon the distruction of her immortal soul
By the hand of a man with little power
She lay dying of humiliation and disppear
Waiting for the right time to scream
But never finding the right outlet
She closes her eyes and accepts her fate
Continuing with her humble life
Knowing this will all happen again.
Ron no Anime - August 18, 2003 05:39 AM (GMT)
It is very interesting...
I felt little bad... :blink:
Never mind....
It is pretty good. Great work!!! :)
L33T_N1NJ4 - August 18, 2003 06:26 AM (GMT)
Wow, that's really good. I think I understand the meaning behind it too. Please post more.
Inuyasha_83 - August 18, 2003 06:29 PM (GMT)
I've got a few more that I want to post but they might have to wait for a bit because I have to go to work soon. :( Anywho thanks for the positive feed back. It makes me feel good about the work that I've done.
~DarkWolf~ - August 18, 2003 07:01 PM (GMT)
not bad....keep 'em coming.... and thats you signature... i like you signature its pretty!
Angel Of The Dawn - August 19, 2003 03:25 AM (GMT)
That was really good, interesting, and I too believe I know the meaning of it... You did a good job on it sweetie=) Keep it up, and yes I agree with Dark Wolf I like your signature also its purty=) nice! hehe *hugs*
crazdfeline - August 25, 2003 12:09 AM (GMT)
nicely done. i have to go along with the chorus. who could disagree? wow. you good.