Title: Forever I Want...
Angel Of The Dawn - August 16, 2003 04:01 AM (GMT)
Forever I Want...
When I look into your eyes
I want to see the love you hold for me
I want to see forever in your eyes
When I kiss your lips
I want to taste your love
I want to taste forever on your lips
When we hold each other close
I want to feel your heart beating
I want to feel your love forever
When I am with you
I want you to see my love, taste my love, feel my love forever
I want you to forever know that I love you;that no one or nothing can change that.
Ron no Anime - August 16, 2003 06:03 AM (GMT)
*sniff* Pretty great...
It reminded of you may miss your boyfriend...
Me wants to have girlfriend... :( *cry*
CloverLeaf - August 16, 2003 06:08 AM (GMT)
deep... i like the last stanza. :D
~DarkWolf~ - August 16, 2003 06:11 AM (GMT)
wow... i'm touched.....so deep with words...100/ 1 hehe its a +99
LiquiduS - August 16, 2003 08:18 AM (GMT)
Very good poem, Trish. ^-^
crazdfeline - August 16, 2003 01:44 PM (GMT)
aww..heh. great one again. heh.
Angel Of The Dawn - August 16, 2003 07:57 PM (GMT)
Aww, Thanks Ya'll...*huggs* awww, *huggles Ron tightly* yeah you guessed it...and you will find someone hun.