Title: Death's Tear
Description: my first poem ^^
.::Forgotten Tear::. - August 15, 2003 09:02 PM (GMT)
okie i know its bad but its just my first go, okie?
Death's Tear
Lying down here
Away from the world,
A tear is forgotten,
Not to be known.
But as I dream
I realise it's wrong
To ignore such sorrow-
To leave it alone.
Above is the sky,
The source of all dreams,
Below is demise,
Where I lie here asleep.
There are no dreams here,
Only nightmares unknown
To the world above,
That I’d like to be shown.
Nothing will change
As the days go by.
Another tear is lost,
Another soul will die.
There is nothing I can do,
just watch and cry..
Adding to the torment
Of years gone by.
~DarkWolf~ - August 15, 2003 09:03 PM (GMT)
:lol: ME LIKE! ME LIKE!!!
crazdfeline - August 16, 2003 12:07 AM (GMT)
nice. it goes so smoothly. wow. you good.
Angel Of The Dawn - August 16, 2003 03:48 AM (GMT)
I liked it alot!Hey very good! wow, you are really good! good job! ;)
.::Forgotten Tear::. - August 16, 2003 06:47 PM (GMT)
awwwwwwww, thanx! i thought u where all gonna say ebil stuff! wooooooo, yay ^^
Inuyasha_83 - August 20, 2003 12:33 AM (GMT)
It's not ebil and people shouldn't say ebil stuff about it if that's how you feel. I liked it a lot. *hugs*
Ron no Anime - August 20, 2003 05:11 AM (GMT)
.::Forgotten Tear::. - September 7, 2003 07:55 PM (GMT)
awwwww *feels all happy inside* thank you! ur all so encouraging ppl ^^
lollipop lust kill - September 8, 2003 05:25 AM (GMT)
Yes, me like! Me like! Um, vary good.