~Dark World~

I live in a world, I hate with a passion
Governments and polictics living in there mansions
I want to end it all, watch it all fall down
But I am to weak, can't lift a finger off the ground.
I live in sadness, hatred, and sorrow
Where all the evil is left there for us to borrow.
It sickens me inside how judgemental the world can be
How we all judge people like they weren't created from He,
I watch this poison in our vein every single day
People can be anti-racist but then there anti-gay.
I sit here and watch, from sunset to the morning dew
Im a hopeless dot, don't have a single thing to do.

tell me what you think of it

:( :( *sniff* pretty good... it reminded of my past time. Anyway... very good. :) *thumb up*

thank you ^^

Kupo!!

*blink blink* it was very good....but i think i've heard it from somewhere.....

Good job, it's the truth also.. sadly. Great poem.

nope didn't copy it. Just thought of the evil world. Just because im 12 doesn't mean im not as smart. I can write poems pretty damn good!!

Kupo!!

P.S.- Not many people like you DW.....

That's a bit harsh you know Vash. She just said it sounded like you coppied it. Which, if you look at it is a compliment. I don't think it's coppied, ad there is no reason for it. Just chill out man. Yeah, it was good though. Good job.

very good. it seemed a lil off rhythm sometimes but i think it made the pem better. very nicely done

very good indeed

*huggles* hey that was really good, like i said before you write well. ^_^

Very nice. It really hits home

ok you be quiet...yesterday you got me pretty mad... *glares* your such an idiot you know....

good poem yes yes very true about our society

great poem, its sad but true unfortunatly