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Title: doesnt compare


crazdfeline - August 4, 2003 10:05 PM (GMT)
Doesn’t Compare

Migranes 5 days a week
Pounding on my brain
But she just continues on and on
Continues to complain
No one listens
I do everything
No one tries
Don’t do anything
My head gets worse
As the migrane goes on
Harder and stronger
Banging on
Dizzy as someone
Who just got off a spinning ride
Always swaying when I stand
But still it doesn’t compare

All her cares are so much worse then mine
But here I am a young kid and I wanna die
From this pain that never ends
Yet still it’s only to her that I bend.

Starwarriorzero - August 5, 2003 12:14 AM (GMT)
Sounds painful x.x but very good poem so packed with emotion.

Angel Of The Dawn - August 5, 2003 05:23 PM (GMT)
Good Job! Yeah..sounds painful...~ouch~....*huggles, rubs forehead* aww poor thing. :(

Action - August 8, 2003 10:03 PM (GMT)
not as good as that immortal one, but still good. just reading it made my head begin to hurt :wacko:

crazdfeline - August 9, 2003 03:30 PM (GMT)
oops . im sry ppl. sry action. heh. didnt kmno that would come from it.

~DarkWolf~ - August 11, 2003 06:57 AM (GMT)
hm...un decided....




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