this is kinda for wat my new love will be and this is for a girl in Los Arboles Middle school she really great and good at drawing well i dedicate this to her


Tomorrow mornin' if you wake up
And the sun does not appear
I...I will be here

If in the dark we lose sight of love
Hold my hand and have no fear
'Cause I...I will be here

I will be here...
When you feel like bein' quiet
When you need to speak your mind
I will listen
And I will be here
When the laughter turns to cryin'
Through the winnin' and losin' and tryin'
We'll be together
'Cause I will be here

Just as sure as seasons are made for change
Our lifetimes are made for years
I..I will be here........... :D

I will be here....
You can cry on my shoulder
When the mirror tells us we're older
I will hold you

Your worth more to me...........

Really good... I don't want to comment on your stuff but I thought that there was a bit too much "I'll be here"s. IMHO, It would have been better if you put only one "I'll be here" in each stanza-thing.
But all in all, it's really good. 4/5.