this is one i made a while back and im htinking of revamping it. give your thoughts

I like much ^^.

only bad thing i think about it that all the text is kinda distracting, but that just me ^^.

I like the colors, but I would clean up the text a bit. Use a different font that isnt so choppy.

1. use a differant backround..i dont like it much(my opinion)
2. fix cloud hes toooooo stretched out
3. change the text..becuase it dont look good



but u said this is old so im not gonna say you suck

It's alright. I just think the pictures a little blurry.